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When you’re writing an action scene or when word count is limited, one of the following
adjectives might be just what you need.
Before you continue to the list, however, consider this: Describing a person’s mood with an
adjective breaks the show-don’t-tell rule. If you have the room to do so, consider substituting
descriptive phrasing with emotion beats and physical manifestations. A good body language
dictionary will provide the tools. (As an Amazon Associate, I earn from qualifying purchases.)
Many of the adjectives in this post could also refer to a character’s personality.
D to G
dauntless, delightful, determined, dignified, diplomatic, eager, easygoing, ebullient, ecstatic,
effervescent, elated, electrified, elevated, empathetic, empowered, energetic, energized,
enthusiastic, euphoric, excited, exhilarated, exuberant, fearless, festive, forgiving, forthright,
friendly, frisky, fulfilled, generous, genial, giddy, glad, good-natured, grateful, gregarious, gutsy
H to L
happy, holiday, honest, hopeful, hospitable, humble, humorous, idyllic, imaginative,
imperturbable, impressed, indomitable, inspired, interested, intrepid, jaunty, jocund, jolly, jovial,
joyful, jubilant, justified, kind, laidback, levelheaded, liberated, lighthearted, lively, longsuffering,
loving
M to R
magnanimous, mellow, merry, neighborly, optimistic, overjoyed, passive, patient, peaceable,
peaceful, peppy, perky, placid, playful, pleasant, pleased, plucky, polite, positive, receptive,
refreshed, relaxed, relieved, resolute, respectful, responsive, rested, reverent, reverential,
revitalized, romantic
S to W
sanguine, satisfied, sedate, self-effacing, selfless, sensible, sharing, sociable, solicitous, sparky,
spirited, splendid, sprightly, spunky, steadfast, sunny, supportive, sympathetic, tender, thankful,
thoughtful, thrilled, tolerant, touched, tranquil, unassuming, understanding, unflappable,
unruffled, unselfish, unshakeable, unshaken, upbeat, uplifted, vibrant, vivacious, warm
D
dangerous, dark, defiant, dejected, depressed, desolate, desperate, despondent, detached,
devastated, disappointed, disbelieving, disconcerted, discontented, disdainful, disillusioned,
dismayed, distant, distressed, disturbed, domineering, drained, dreary
E to H
edgy, embarrassed, empty, enervated, enraged, envious, erratic, exasperated, exhausted,
expansive, fearful, fickle, flippant, forlorn, foul, frightened, frustrated, furious, gloomy, grim,
grouchy, grumpy, guilty, haughty, haunted, heartbroken, heavy, helpless, hesitant, hopeless,
hostile, humiliated, hurt, hypercritical
I to N
ignored, imperious, implacable, important, inadequate, incendiary, indifferent, indolent, inferior,
inflammatory, infuriated, insecure, insignificant, insubordinate, intimidated, irascible, irreverent,
irritable, irritated, isolated, jealous, judgmental, lethargic, lonely, mad, malicious, melancholy,
mercurial, morose, nauseated, nervous, nightmarish
O to R
offensive, ominous, ornery, overbearing, overpowered, overwhelmed, pained, perplexed,
pessimistic, powerless, presumptuous, provocative, puzzled, quixotic, rebellious, rejected,
reluctant, resentful, restless, rigid, riotous, rowdy
S and T
sad, sarcastic, scared, self-important, selfish, shocked, skeptical, smug, solemn, somber, sour,
stressed, stubborn, surly, suspicious, taciturn, tense, tepid, terrified, terror-stricken, threatened,
troubled, turbulent
U to W
ugly, uncaring, uncertain, uncomfortable, uneasy, ungrateful, unpleasant, unpredictable, unruly,
unsettled, unyielding, uppity, vengeful, vile, violent, volatile, vulnerable, wary, weary, wild,
withdrawn, worried, wretched
Rather than seeing mood in passages that refer to a character’s frame of mind, you’ll usually find
phrasing like the following.
The prisoners were compliant.
The billionaire was magnanimous.
The CEO was tolerant.
Provide Context
Ambiguity, unless deliberately introduced to further a plot, should be eliminated from your writing.
A dozen roses every day, multiple texts per hour, lovey-dovey notes he slipped into her briefcase …
Romantic? Bollocks! This was stalking, and she intended to end it.
If a character’s zeal is a liability, confirm it with details:
Working overtime shifts, fetching the manager’s coffee, washing his car. Yeah, she was zealous, all right,
but it didn’t earn any kudos from her coworkers.