Ardid, Angela Nicolle A.

12- HUMSS

Inventory of the suggested improvement and explanation

why such improvement is necessary:

The revision of the significance of the study (yellow font) is

more informative. I added some ideas that is efficient and much

better. It allows to be more effective to determine why and to

whom our study will benefit. Also, I revise it for the reader to know

and understand very well our research study. The significance of

the study is very important and has its general purpose to specific

purpose. Given the idea, it is to help the society then to individual

given.