ENGLISH III PAO1-2021

WRITING WORKSHOP – A SHORT

COMPOSITION 1

Student’s name: Abraham Anzules F. English III 16 Date: 23/07/2021

Write about your FAVOURITE FILM. Supply three reasons.

OUTLINE
Tittle: The Kissing Stand

Introduction sentence: The kissing stand is a romantic comedy film that tells the story of two lifelong friends

who are in their junior year of high school.

Topic sentence: I like the kissing booth for 3 reasons

Supporting sentence 1: First of all, the kissing booth is my favorite movie because it's the kind of film I like

to watch when I am on a bad mood.

Detail 1: For example, the kissing booth compared to other comedy productions, has my type of humour

which makes me feel attached and not bored.

Detail 2: In addition, it focuses on romance, and the mix comedy-romance is for me the best combination in a

film.

Detail 3: On the other hand, it narrates the teen life, making possible to reach the current generation through

its young characters.

Supporting sentence 2: Secondly, the kissing booth is very popular not only in USA but also on foreign

countries.

Detail 1: For example, it is currently ranked number 10 on Netflix.

Detail 2: In addition, it is considered one of the highest grossing movies of 2020.

Detail 3: On the other hand, the story is based on real events and the protagonists are a couple in real life.

J. Villarreal H. – Activity adapted from WRITERS AT WORK. Strauch O. Ann. The short
composition. Chapter 4, pp. 76-78, 82. CUP (2005)
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Supporting sentence 3: The kissing booth is a motivating film in terms of love and friendship.

Detail 1: Couples love this love story because it is realistic and many are able to identify with it.

Detail 2: In addition, it shows that nothing can break a true friendship or even love

Detail 3: On the other hand, it is a movie dedicated to those impossible loves and to those people who are

fighting for the person that they love.

Conclusion sentence: Finally, we can conclude that the kissing booth is a film that demonstrates true

friendship and true love and everyone should watch it.

COMPOSITION

Tittle: The Kissing Stand

My favorite film is The Kissing booth because of its plot, actors and because of its genre based

on comedy and romance. 

First of all, the kissing booth is my favorite movie because it's the kind of film I like to watch

when I am on a bad mood. For example, the kissing booth compared to other comedy productions, has

my type of humour which makes me feel attached and not bored. In addition, it focuses on romance, and

the mix comedy-romance is for me the best combination in a film. On the other hand, it narrates the teen

life, making possible to reach the current generation through its young characters.

Secondly, the kissing booth is very popular not only in USA but also on foreign countries. For

example, it is currently ranked number 10 on Netflix. In addition, it is considered one of the highest

J. Villarreal H. – Activity adapted from WRITERS AT WORK. Strauch O. Ann. The short
composition. Chapter 4, pp. 76-78, 82. CUP (2005)
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grossing movies of 2020. On the other hand, the story is based on real events and the protagonists are a

couple in real life.

The kissing booth is a motivating film in terms of love and friendship. Couples love this love

story because it is realistic and many are able to identify with it. In addition, showing also that nothing

can break a true friendship or even love. On the other hand, it is a movie dedicated to those impossible

loves and to those people who are fighting for the person that they love.

Finally, we can conclude that the kissing booth is a film that demonstrates true friendship and

true love and everyone should watch it.

J. Villarreal H. – Activity adapted from WRITERS AT WORK. Strauch O. Ann. The short
composition. Chapter 4, pp. 76-78, 82. CUP (2005)
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RUBRIC

Organization & Development Word choice / Grammar use Mechanics / length

Exemplary organization and Exemplary Word Choice / Exemplary Mechanics
development Grammar usage  May have minor errors
 Clear and complete Outline.  (VOC) precise and relevant  Indent
 Clearly stated title word choice  Punctuation
 Clearly stated topic sentence  (VOC) use of connectors and  Capitalization
(1) transition words  Spelling
 Strong supporting ideas (3)  Consistent grammar usage  Clear handwriting
and concluding sentence (1)  Subject/verb agreement  Spacing
 Third supporting idea or  Singular/plural nouns  Needs little or no
reason is the most important  Verb (tense and usage) editing
 Well executed progression of  Pronouns usage  250-300 words
clear ideas  Adjective / Adverb
Excellent (4.0) Excellent (4.0) Excellent (2.0)
Very Good (3.0) Grade: Very Good (3.0) Grade: Very Good (1.5) Grade:
Fair (2.0) ________ Fair (2.0) ________ Fair (1.0) ______
Needs improvement Needs improvement Needs
(1.0) (1.0) improvement
Non-Existent (0) Non-Existent (0) (0.5)
Non-Existent (0)

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J. Villarreal H. – Activity adapted from WRITERS AT WORK. Strauch O. Ann. The short
composition. Chapter 4, pp. 76-78, 82. CUP (2005)