Some people think that mental strength is the most important factor for success in sports.

However, some
others believe that it is more important to have strong and fit people. Discuss both views and give your
opinions.

Nowadays, many people are of the opinion (= to believe) that mental strength is a crucial part of the
athlete’s success. Others, however, view the people who have physical health as the best participants in
sports. ( the others This essay will demonstrate that both psychological and physical health are an
crucial element in athlete‘s achievement in sports.
Some argue that sport players should have a physical health, which facilitate their performance. Almost
athletes are required to have a fitness so that they can perform physical actions, which is found in sports.
Both fitness and a strong physical health are an essential condition for the success of sport players such as
weightlifter. The more weight he or she lift, the more achievement they would gain.
On the other hand, strong mentality is also considered as an important part in sports. In every sport
competitions, there are a lot of pressures or competitiveness for the title of champion and only people
capable of handling these can achieve success. For example: if professional player stressed or pressured,
they can be defeated by people who do not have experience but mental toughness
In conclusion, I believe that mental health is just as important as physical health in gaining sporting
success. In the future, there will be more sport players who are physically fit and mentality, which would
help this industry more, increased its impact on community.

1/ depend on, independent in

2/ compete (v) -> competitive (a) -> competition (n): cuộc thi/competitiveness: tính canh tranh

Champions of every sport tend to possess high competitiveness that help them overcome physical
pain and pressure, leading them to victory/success. (Specific example)