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Writing Business Messages
Writing Business Messages
Name
Course
Institution
Date
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Option 2
Purpose
Audience
1. The primary audience of my message are freshman students, while secondary audience
are continuing students who are not members of any student organization.
student organization
Information
1. The questions I anticipate from my audience include the types of student organizations
available in campus, the procedure for joining the, and the benefits of being a member.
2. The background information I will need include membership details from student
3. The benefits that I will highlight include networking, fun, and better grades skills.
Message
Primary message
Memo
Date:
College students are busy juggling classes, homework, work, and other commitments; therefore,
there is a lot to balance. So why would a student add another commitment by joining a student
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organization? The main reason is the positive impact it can have on careers and campus
experience. One benefit of joining a student organization is better grades due to improved time
management skills.
The additional projects and activities afforded by student organizations enable members to learn
effective tie management skills. Joining a student organization also provides great networking
opportunities, which are necessary in the modern world. Student alumni groups work with
campus students through organizations. Finally, student organizations offer endless fun activities
that make campus life a memorable experience. Therefore, join now to reap these benefits.
Kind Regards,
Routines Message
Aim Analysis
Purpose
1. To request the purchase of new Apple MacBook Pros for regional sales managers.
Audience
Information
1. The questions I would expect from my audiences include the benefits of the computers to
Message
Primary message: Buying new MacBook Pro computers for regional sales managers will
Business email
Subject: Request for purchase of new MacBook Pros for regional sales managers
Dear Sondra,
I am writing to request for the purchases of new MacBook Pros computers for the regional
managers to enhances their work. Considering that they work from remote locations, the
computers will enable them to perform their duties effectively. The other benefits that will be
derived from the purchase is improved business communication. The computers will allow them
to access the company’s network securely because the computers will be for official use only.
Finally, the managers will access various business tools such as project management tools, file
sharing and editing tools, and spreadsheets. These tools are vital in the current business
environment and increase productivity. Hopefully, the company will consider this request,
Yours Sincerely,
Reference
Garner, B. (2013). HBR Guide to Better Business Writing (HBR Guide Series): Engage Readers,
Tighten and Brighten, Make Your Case. Boston: Harvard Business Review Press.