Aspect Point Description

Developing ideas 1 The descriptive text still give topic but all criteria are weak
The descriptive text give paragraph unity (topic, state topic sentence)
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but most criteria above are weak
The descriptive text give paragraph unity (topic, state topic sentence,
3
conclusion of topic sentence) but some criteria above are weak
The descriptive text give paragraph unity (topic, state good topic
4
sentence) but one of the criteria is weak
The descriptive text gives paragraph unity (topic, state good topic
5 sentence, supporting sentence, concluding sentence) and coherence
(relationship among ideas, understandable). It fulfill all criteria well
Organizing ideas 1 The descriptive text is not coherence
The descriptive text is coherence but the coherences among
2
sentences are weak
The descriptive text is coherence and some criteria are appropriate
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enough
The descriptive text is coherence and the coherences are correct. The
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text is using chronological order
The descriptive text is coherence and the coherences are correct. The
5 text is using chronological order. The descriptive text repeat key
words.
Grammar 1 Make errors of tenses, relational verbs and adjective words
Make errors of tenses, do not use relational verbs correctly, and use
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adjective words
3 Make errors of tenses, use relational words and use adjective words
Use present tense, use relational verb but do not use adjective words
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correctly
Use present tense correctly, use relational verb and adjective words
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correctly
Vocabulary 1 Do not use the descriptive words correctly
2 There are some mistakes in using descriptive words
3 Use some descriptive words
4 Use many descriptive words effectively
5 All or almost all of the descriptive text words are use effectively
Mechanics The descriptive texts do not use correct punctuation, spelling and
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capitalization
The descriptive text uses fairly punctuation but inadequate correct
2
spelling and capitalization. Most criteria are weak
The descriptive text punctuation uses fairly punctuation but loosely
3
correct spelling and capitalization. Some criteria are weak
The descriptive text uses correct punctuation, spelling but fairly
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capitalization but one of the criteria is weak
The descriptive text uses correct punctuation, spelling and
5
capitalization. It fulfill all criteria