Title: Anne Frank (Biography)

URL: https://www.history.com/topics/world-war-ii/anne-frank-1
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Evaluate:
This article discussed the life of the young Jewish girl named Anne Frank. She is known
because of her diary that is known all over the world. Her private diary became an
international sensation and read by the different people. At a young age she experienced a lot
of trials and problem and do everything just live. As we read we can see how they live during
the war.
I notice that there are some words that are hard to understand. They should pick the
words that is more understandable by the readers. We all know that her diary is known,
because of that many people wants to know the life of Anne Frank how they turn to live on the
secret annex. The author should also put some evidence to support the article, because the
article are lack of evidence to support the claim. So that the readers are convinced on their
text.
In this article they are some missing information that they should also conclude. In order
to answered the readers’ questions and curiosity. This article has some flaws that need to
improve, so that the readers easily understand on what they read. Before they publish the
article or when writing the article they should think readers and how they can conveniently
read.
Questions to the writer

 What is the purpose of this article?

 Who is the tipster on why the police learned about the hiding place?
 Where did the information from?
 How sure are you that the information that you put is fact?
 What do you do to make the readers satisfied on what they read?
 What are your thoughts about your article?

What kind of text you think it belongs and why?

I think it is belong on the expert academic writing. This article for publication because of the
website. It is also write to give a new knowledge to the readers and to fill the curiosity on their
mind.