Exercise sheet Category: Candy

Student Roll no: 32

Student Name: Sarang Vivek Kulkarni
Task 2: Snippet
Question/Brief: Kalwa youth drowns
Creative Response:

19-year-old student drowns in the trench at Patni Road, Airoli

A 19-year-old student has reportedly been drowned on a Sunday around 4:30 pm

in trench along Patni Road in Airoli. Fire brigade team could not find the body even
after one day investigation. The victim reportedly entered deep inside the pond and
could not manage himself in the deep pond. Fire officer Sandesh Channe said that
he got an emergency call regarding the incident.

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 Exercise sheet Category: Candy
Student Roll no: 32
Student Name: Sarang Vivek Kulkarni
Task 4: Recreate
Question/Brief: Do you live more in the past?
Creative Response:

Headline – Future is dependent on today’s actions

Sub – Headline – Past will only give you tension, working today might help with
pension

Caption – Three ways of thinking

Rating the lead – 4/10

The lead doesn’t answer any of the 6 WH question. The lead does not give the gist
of an article. Even though it gives an glimpse of what the article is about it does
not add much to the article.

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 Exercise sheet Category: Candy
Student Roll no: 32
Student Name: Sarang Vivek Kulkarni
Task 5: Paragraph Editing
Question/Brief: Kites
Creative Response:

Kites – Not Just for Fun

People the world over has been flying kites for centuries. in fact, kites were
invented over two thousand years ago! one ancient story tells of a Chinese general,
his army was trying to over throw a cruel emperor. the general made a kite, he tied
a net in the string. Next, his soldiers flew it in the section of the palace. when the
kite was over the general, the string and reel all fell in a tunnel.

Edited Paragraph -
People world over have been flying kites for centuries. In fact, kites were invented
over two thousand years ago. One ancient story tells of a Chinese general, his army
was trying to overthrow a cruel emperor. The general made a kite, he tied a net in
the string. Next, his soldiers flew it in the section of the palace. When the kite was
over the general, the string and reel all fell in a tunnel.

Error Summary –
Capitalization – 6
Language Usage – 1
Punctuation –
 Comma – 4
 Period – 4
Spelling - 1

Total - 16

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