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An Original TV Pilot
By Blaise Hesselgren
EPISODE ONE:
"Rules are for the fools who follow them"
Mr Blaise Hesselgren
www.Hesselgren.co.uk
Blaise.Hesselgre@gmail.com
Tel: 07779 778642
EXT. CIRCUS ENTRANCE - NIGHT
PAA - BAAA -
QUEEN TITANIA
Lords, Ladies and gentlemen, thank
you for gracing our Circus with your
presence. Please join us in the Big
Top to experience a magical story -
the Great Lay of Titania and Oberon.
She recedes into the tent's darkness - and the crowd follow.
Mark reaches the end of the alley and peers around a corner
at a circle of caravans.
ENA, a mid 20's gypsy girl, flaming red hair, all instinct
and impulse but with the chutzpah to match it, watches the
crowd sit at the tables stepping down to the circus ring.
QUEEN TITANIA
Ena? What are you doing?
ENA
Keeping an eye. There's whispers -
QUEEN TITANIA
He would not dare.
ENA
Still missing. I fear the worst.
3.
QUEEN TITANIA
Do not. His story is not yet done.
Below her, King Oberon and the players leave the ring.
RINGMASTER
Ladies and Gentlemen, the final -
RINGMASTER (O.S.)
- act will commence in ten minutes.
MARK
Sorry, Steve. Had no choice.
The lights dim and the audience fall quiet as King Oberon
strides in, holding a wicked looking knife. He pauses, staring
at Queen Titania on the far stage.
ENA
Mark?!?
ENA (CONT'D)
What are you doing?
Ena grabs a rope and SWINGS down into the pole trees,
alighting next to three WILDMEN (more circus players in
costume), who are watching Oberon in confusion -
ENA
Stop Oberon! Protect the Queen!
Ena drops from the trapeze onto a platform and DIVES into
the river to swim across to the stage.
And Ena climbs out of the water and scrambles up the hill.
Hot in pursuit, Oberon DIVES into the river just behind her.
5.
ENA (CONT'D)
Oberon - is Mark. He's turned -
ENA (CONT'D)
Wrong.
QUEEN TITANIA
Cathal.
Oberon stands atop the stone and stares down at the three
players on the stage, knife in hand. Points at the Queen and -
Until his body JERKS, and his HEAD FLIES OFF HIS BODY -
INSERT:
DONALD
Like I said, the hard hat and goggles
aren't really necessary.
ROWAN
Until they are. I'm glad to see the
sign encompasses a wide visual
catchment zone.
DONALD
Yeah, it's unmissable.
ROWAN
Well, I just need you to sign off -
DONALD
Come and grab some tea.
DONALD
Grab a seat.
WHOOMP!
The fire EXPLODES over the whole room, blowing Rowan and
Donald back. It ROARS up the door, trapping them as we -
GARY
Hey? What you doing?
ROWAN
Sparks.
ROWAN
Fuel.
ROWAN
And I'm guessing you haven't checked
the batteries for a while?
GARY
I -
ROWAN
Get a new kettle, change the batteries
and tidy this place up.
ROWAN (CONT'D)
You can post me the papers.
He didn't.
8.
He gets back into the car and reparks, checking he's between
the lines, before locking the car and going into the office.
Rowan opens the door into the small messy office - half a
dozen desks in a room that wasn't designed for them. Dirty
plates and mugs hide amongst papers and old computers.
INSET:
"MURPHY IS GOD."
BANG!
PHELAN
Police were all over the place.
HARDACRE
You. My office. Two minutes.
HARDACRE
Get that!
(to Phelan)
Mr. Phelan, thank you for bringing
this to my attention. Grey here will
see to you momentarily.
ROWAN
Health and Safety, Rowan Grey.
ROWAN (CONT'D)
Um, ok, hang on a second -
9.
ROWAN
Last night you say? At what time?
PHELAN
(to himself, quietly)
Bonded. Yes, you'll do nicely.
ROWAN
Yes. And the report summary?
INT. HARDACRE'S OFFICE - TWO MINUTES LATER
HARDACRE
- should have been told last night!
ROWAN
There's been a death at the Circus -
HARDACRE
I heard. Where's the weirdo?
ROWAN
He left while I was speaking to the
police administrator. She spotted
the report and wanted to check we
were across it.
HARDACRE
At least one of them can do their
bloody job. First I knew about it
was the crazy in the waiting area.
ROWAN
The case is marked as closed, sir.
Zoe was filing it away when she saw
there was no Heath and Safety report.
So she called us.
10.
HARDACRE
OK. Where's everyone else?
ROWAN
The NHS case sir.
HARDACRE
I've got a hearing. Leaving you.
ROWAN
Me, sir? I've got paperwork due -
HARDACRE
And that's more important than an
accidental circus decapitation?
ROWAN
No, but I'm still on probation -
shouldn't this be led by a more
experienced investigator?
HARDACRE
Yes. Got one in your back pocket?
Look, we've got to get on top of
this fast. You make initial inquiries
only. If the accident was
unforeseeable and is unrepeatable we
write it up. But if anything troubles
you - anything at all - call me and
we'll launch a full investigation.
ROWAN
Sir, I'm not sure I can -
HARDACRE
You can. You've trained for this.
(points to the sign)
Murphy is God. "What can go wrong,
will go wrong." That's our motto.
That is why we have a job. That is
Murphy's immutable law: Shit happens.
We are here to prevent that shit.
When you walk into that circus, you
are not Rowan Grey, you are the
representative of Her Majesty's Health
and Safety Inspectorate, the walking
talking embodiment of the rules,
regulations, laws and procedures
created solely to protect those
people. You speak with the voice of
that authority and you will not be
denied. They may see you as their
enemy but you come as their friend!