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Advantages-Disadvantages
Intro Lead-in Nowadays, there are a lot of [object of the topic
sentence e.g computers, private cars…]
In today’s world/In today’s life, … is becoming
more and more popular
… has become an essential part in our
everyday life
There have been a lot of talks about…
… is among the most popular topics in
everyday talk
… plays an important role in our life.
Thesis It may seem that [N/V-ing] brings only
statement benefits, but further consideration shows that
it also has disadvantages.
No-one can deny the benefits of [N/V-ing] but
it also causes many problems to people/in the
real life.
Even though [N/V-ing] affects [something] in a
very positive way, its negative side should not
be forgotten.
It is undeniable to say that [N/V-ing] has
resulted in both positive and negative effects
which must be addressed accordingly.
Some people argue that [N/V-ing] has a
fundamentally beneficial influence on our
lives, while many others contend that it has a
detrimental effect as well.
Advantages Opening On the one hand, [N/V-ing] can bring about
sentence many advantages.
Adv 1 A convincing argument can be made about
/ -ing] is that it menh e -V]
[N/V-ing] allows/enables [whom] to V
[N/V-ing] provides/offer/gives [whom]
opportunities to V
[N/V-ing] improves/
enhances/facilitates/helps/simplifies V-ing/N
N/V-ing has its advantages/is of great benefits,
such as…
Adv 2 At the same time, besides, moreover,
furthermore…
(Similar to Adv 1)
Ending All these advantages combine to make a strong
case for [V-ing]
Disadvantages Opening On the other hand, we cannot deny the
negative effects in this case.
Nevertheless/However, [N/V-ing] also present
many disadvantages
However, there are also disadvantages
involved in [N/V-ing]
Disad 1 The main drawback is that S-V
(Not) N/V-ing is a serious
handicap/disadvantage
ome people find it (difficult/a nuisance/…) to
V
Disad 2 Another drawback is that S-V
Conclusion In conclusion/To sum up/Overall, I would
agree that [N/V-ing] does come with adverse
effects, but benefits created by it far outweigh
the disadvantages.
- Advantage = strength, strong point, benefit, opportunity, chance, gain …
- Disadvantage: drawback, shortcoming, weakness, minus point, handicap,
problem...
II. To what extent do you agree/disagree [partly agree/disagree]
Bonus
To take examples:
- For example
- For instance
- A very good example here is
- A case in point is
- Take… for example. It/they
IV. Problem-Solution
- As a result/Consequently
- This would enable/help them to
- Is would lead to
- This means that they would
- By doing this.