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S2: Rubric Although serious problems have arisen as a result of this, there are viable
solutions.
Body 1: Problems
Problem 1 There are several reasons that can be attributed to…, on top of which is/
The foremost issue is…
+ Reason/ Ill That is to say, / For example,
+ Effects There is no doubt that this effects …, which is a negative impact for ...
Solution 1 [Solution 1] should ensure that ~ are in place that will prevent ~ from ~,
such as …
Government should ensure that adequate legislation ad controls are in
place that will prevent young people from accessing dangerous sites, such
as requiring more than simply confirming that you are an adult to view a
site.
Perhaps the most effective method of doing this would be for [Solution] to
[Solution] must also improve
Conclusion
However, with the right action by However, I believe that the measures
Summary [Solution 1, 2, 3], it can be made a outlined above would constitute a
safe place for everyone. good first step.
2. Opinion: Discuss ONE opinion
Opening:
S1: Generalization The enormous growth in the use of … ~ is often considered/ It is often
over the last decade has led to radical argued that ~ is the key factor
changes to the way…/ to our lives. which attributes to the fullness
of one’s life.
Yet, there remains some disagreement as
S2: Opposite views to / are widely differing views on whether
the overall effect of ~ has been positive
or negative/ what matter the most … I completely disagree/agree
with this opinion and think that
While there are certainly valid arguments ~ is of more importance than ~
S3: My opinion to the contrary, I personally believe the I completely disagree/agree
benefits of ~ far outweigh its drawbacks with this opinion and will be
and will be putting forward my putting forward my perspective
perspective within the scope of this essay. within the scope of this essay.
Body 1: First positive/ negative aspect
Topic sentence First of all, it is obvious/ an indisputable fact that…
SS1: Comparison In earlier times, conducting research entailed long hours searching library
+ Past – Now shelves. Now, however, the same information can be accessed online.
+ Opposite sights Even if someone is earning high salary, but feel tensed and compromises
How with his conscience, this person will not enjoy his life. While persuing one’
benefit/drawback? interests will always bring pleasure and feeling of satisfaction.
I can say the risks In other words, there is a strong relation between job satisfaction and
here: Despite the productivity. People who love their jobs can easily excel and their fields of
risk of… work and achieve better results in those who put salary on the first place.
Opinion In conclusion, I would once again reaffirm my position that the Internet has
had a positive influence on modern life because of its…
S2: Opposite views Yet, there remains some disagreement as to / are widely differing views on
whether the overall effect of ~ has been positive or negative/ what matters
the most...
S3: My opinion While there are certainly valid While some tend to prioritize and
arguments to the contrary, I maximize pleasure through
personally have mixed feeling about entertaining activities (your
this issue and will be putting opposing viewpoint), I personally
forward my perspective within the believe (your viewpoint)
scope of this essay.
Body 1: Your opposing viewpoint
On the one hand, those who consider … have their own reasons.
Main point 1 The most obvious one can be … / The main advantage of…
RICE in any order According to a great deal of research, … This would allow…
Main point 2
RICE in any order More importantly,…
Doing sth… can be someone’s occupation as they …
Body 2: Your viewpoint
On the other hand, I share the same opinion with those supporting...
Main point 1
RICE in any order
Conclusion
New opinion Despite my absolute preference to the former/ the latter, I truly appreciate
the delicate harmony of both commitments.
However, as long as we are careful to keep in mind the importance of
human interaction in education, the educational benefits are clearly
positive.
4. Pros and Cons
Opening:
S1: Generalization Nowadays, it is increasingly clear that .(paraphrase).
S2: Rubric While there are certainly valid arguments to the contrary, I personally
believe the benefits of ~ far outweigh its drawbacks
and will be putting forward my perspective within the scope of this essay.
Body 1: Advantages
Topic sentence It can be said that ..... has some noteworthy positive effects.
Body 2: Disadvantages
Topic sentence Despite these aforementioned benefits, several drawbacks do exist.
Conclusion
Our view In conclusion, taking a break from studies can be advantageous if it allows
people to accumulate savings or learn more about the world.
Opposing view However, they should also be careful that it does not delay the start of their
careers and lead to disillusionment with education.
OR
Summary I would therefore argue that although there are disadvantages of the current
trend to …, they are outweighed by the advantages.
Opinion After all, we are better off utilizing … as well as being cautious about … to
make the most out of…