The article presents interesting and clinically important results and shows relevant information that can

enable the experts and the society to become more aware of the sex tourism which at present is
happening through different kinds of media. Thus, the study created high potentials in leading the
society to fully understand the pros and cons of sex tourism and why the people behind it are
continuously doing it. However, A few issues need to be addressed such as the legalities and illegalities
of the business as well as its irregularities of doing such.

Other matters to be addressed:

1. The Used of uppercases must be consistently applied, like “World War II”, instead of “World
war II”
2. There are few fragmentations on the use of phrases in some of the paraphrased literatures
but are accepted to use. Minor revisions on spacing and conjugations of words.

3. Synthesis of literatures, to emphasize the relativeness to the study are not presented.
However, the literatures discussed well the importance of conducting the study on sex
tourism.

Presentation

It is clear that the article shows global perspective because the topic is common to all nations of the
globe. To add with it is a trendy issue, where-in other countries are taking it more seriously because of
the risks that might occur in dealing with sex tourism that includes morale and spiritual aspect that I
think are important variables that the researcher must look onto and take into consideration in dealing
with study. Moreover, it is not clearly stated but can be look onto that Philippines, our country, is not
legalizing and tolerating such business; this is because we are a very conservative country because of our
religion. Therefore, it must be emphasized that it is not yet fully a tourism perspective but an illegal
agenda. However, it is a spot to investigate the legalities of this business like what other countries are
practicing.

Introduction and aims

The flow of the introduction shows appropriate flow to pinpoint the subject of the study. However, it is
caught to my attention the absence of discussing root history of prostitution such as selling not only
through sexual intercourse but selling other parts of the body in exchange with money.
The literature is relevant and comprehensive and is purposive to the introduction and the whole study.

Methods
The descriptive research design is applicable to the study and the researchers executed it well. However,
the participants of the study should be expanded/ extended not only in Tanauan, Lipa and Batangas City
because flourishing urbans like Santo Thomas Batangas which is near to Manila can be a hub also of sex
tourism.

Translational Research
Literature cited
The cited literatures are all relevant and commendable to use.

Please provide further commentary on the article.

The article presents interesting and clinically important results and shows relevant information that
can enable the experts and the society to become more aware of the sex tourism which at present is
happening through different kinds of media. Thus, the study created high potentials in leading the
society to fully understand the pros and cons of sex tourism and why the people behind it are
continuously doing it. However, A few issues need to be addressed such as the legalities and
illegalities of the business as well as its irregularities of doing such.

Other matters to be addressed:

Other matters to be addressed:
1.The Used of uppercases must be consistently applied, like “World War II”, instead of “World war II”
2.There
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3. Synthesis of literatures, to emphasize the relativeness to the study are not presented.
However, the literatures discussed well the importance of conducting the study on sex
tourism.

4. The spiritual aspects and family and life of the participants is recommended to be added.

To the editor

This study is highly commendable because of its outstanding contributions that can be used as an
awareness tool and information tool to help the society to fully understand the risks of sex tourism. I
therefore highly recommend this study to be published because of the contributions that can be
provided by this study. However, relevant issues of spirituality, morality and family and life can be
taken into consideration to make this paper extra ordinary.