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eye end SL 4 ty 1 Study the Writing skills and choose the correct words in the formal email. Then underline all the examples of could and would. WRITING SKILLS | Formal language In formal writing, sentences are longer and more complex. We use the fll form of verbs and modal verbs to sound more polite. 2 Match expressions 1-6 with formal expressions at. 1 want 2. I'm emailing you 3 it'd be great if 4 Treally want 5 isit 6 I'mexcited about a 1am writing b [look forward to Twould like would it be eI would be very grateful if i I would love 3 Write a formal email of enquiry to Global Peace Camp. Use the paragraph plan to help you. From: h-ilhan@turkish-world.tr snquiries@gpc-students4peace.org, ir / Madani 1am writing to Zenquire / ask about the Global peace Camp in Calfornia this summer which heard out at school. lam een to meet students my age from around the world lam abo very interest in attending the leadership skils workshops in order to increase my self-confidence | | would be very grateful if you could send me an | appcation frm forthe Global Peace Camp. aso | havea few questions about the camp, which | hope | you?ean / will be able to answer. First of all, please could you say / let me know exactly ‘where the Global Peace Camp will take place? | would like to know if its in a tural or urban environment. If itisin a rural area, how long would it take to getto the nearest town? Secondly, would it be possible to tell me how many students will be in each class? | would prefer to be in smaller classes as itis easier for the teachers to engage the students. Thirdly, | would really lke to learn about the local area when | am there. Do you organise | any trips to interesting places? Sthanking you /Thanks a lotin advance for your help. | look forward to hearing from you soon, | With love / best wishes, Tamer Een Paragraph 1: Why you are writing How did you find out about the Global Peace Camp? Why are you interested in attending it? What do you hope you will earn there or be able to do after it? | am writing this email to Paragraph 2: What you would like to happen What would you like them to send you? Explain that you have a few questions, | would be very grateful if Paragraph 3: Your three questions What three questions do you want to ask? Choose from these topics price / times / location / food / students / ‘workshops / classes / evening events / day trips First of all, Paragraph 4: Closing message Conclude the email Thanking you

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