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1 Study the Writing skills and choose the correct
words in the formal email. Then underline all
the examples of could and would.
WRITING SKILLS | Formal language
In formal writing, sentences are longer and more
complex. We use the fll form of verbs and modal
verbs to sound more polite.
2 Match expressions 1-6 with formal expressions
at.
1 want
2. I'm emailing you
3 it'd be great if
4 Treally want
5 isit
6 I'mexcited about
a 1am writing
b [look forward to
Twould like
would it be
eI would be very grateful if
i I would love
3 Write a formal email of enquiry to Global Peace Camp. Use the paragraph plan to help you.
From: h-ilhan@turkish-world.tr
snquiries@gpc-students4peace.org,
ir / Madani
1am writing to Zenquire / ask about the Global
peace Camp in Calfornia this summer which heard
out at school. lam een to meet students my age
from around the world lam abo very interest in
attending the leadership skils workshops in order to
increase my self-confidence
| | would be very grateful if you could send me an
| appcation frm forthe Global Peace Camp. aso
| havea few questions about the camp, which | hope
| you?ean / will be able to answer.
First of all, please could you say / let me know exactly
‘where the Global Peace Camp will take place? | would
like to know if its in a tural or urban environment. If
itisin a rural area, how long would it take to getto the
nearest town? Secondly, would it be possible to tell me
how many students will be in each class? | would prefer
to be in smaller classes as itis easier for the teachers to
engage the students. Thirdly, | would really lke to learn
about the local area when | am there. Do you organise
| any trips to interesting places?
Sthanking you /Thanks a lotin advance for your
help. | look forward to hearing from you soon,
| With love / best wishes,
Tamer
Een
Paragraph 1: Why you are writing
How did you find out about the Global Peace Camp?
Why are you interested in attending it?
What do you hope you will earn there or be able to
do after it?
| am writing this email to
Paragraph 2: What you would like to happen
What would you like them to send you?
Explain that you have a few questions,
| would be very grateful if
Paragraph 3: Your three questions
What three questions do you want to ask? Choose
from these topics
price / times / location / food / students /
‘workshops / classes / evening events / day trips
First of all,
Paragraph 4: Closing message
Conclude the email
Thanking you