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Ana Toscano

Professor Nelson

English 1302-104

10 October 2021

10.10.21 Homework

Respond to these questions:

1. What five things do you need to finish on your draft?

● Add 1 more quote from my picked article

● I need to add more on the 3rd Body paragraph

● I need to go back a revise using the professors edits

● I need to go back a revise using the peer group feedback

● I need to go back and finish the introduction and or conclusion

2. What five things do you want to change in your draft?

● I will have to change and pick a new article

● I will have to change my thesis statement

● I will have to change the order of the articles used

● I will have to change fragments of sentences.

● I will have to change words that are in certain sentences that use Pronoun Antecedent

agreement.

3. What five things are perfect in your draft and you will not change them?

● I will not change my introduction

● I will not change my conclusion

● I will not change my format of the essay

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● I will not change the topic of my essay

● I do not know what the last thing in this essay is that is perfect and that does not need to

be fixed.