ACE Visit #2

In my second ACE visit. We talked about how I can better my sentences because of the number

of run-ons I had in my paragraphs as well as better transition sentences to use when transitioning

from one paragraph to another. Additionally, the tutor reviewed with me the overall structure of

the essay and suggested a few tips to implement into the writing such as removing a few

sentences due to irrelevance to the actual topic that i was writing about.