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In this day and age, the impact of TV on children’s health, both metally and physically, have raised
considerable concern. In order to prevent unwanted effect from watching TV on children, this essay
names the positive solutions to deal with it.
There are three possible solutions as following . To begin with, parent-control is the most
essential factor. Parents should take more attention to the contents of shows that their children are
interested in, so they could understand and encourage the young viewers to take part in other
positive activities outside with friends and family. By doing this, the younger generation could avoid
being exposed to inappropriate contents and got negative influences on their unmature mind.
Furthermore, children should be guided to approach suitable the educational programmes on social
media. The fact that many TV shows and channels provide the invaluable knowledge have assisted
children in broadening horizons. For example, National Geographic is a channel well known for its
variety of knowledge regarding science and exploration of the world. Since it also develops
specialised programmes for kids, this is an ideal TV channel to assist parents in raising their kids’
interest in scientific subjects.
Finally, watching TV with parents could be have/make a huge impact on building children’s
character. Apparently, children who watch TV shows or movies with their parents tend to have a
better feeling of a happy family where their parents are no longer the supervisors but friends. Such
experiences could create a positive mind and a good manner in behaviour than others.
In conclusion, it is undeniable that TV programmes could have huge impact on the development of
young generation. Therefore, parents should take the vital role in managing the time that their
children spend on watching TV so that the kids will be benefitted from it.
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To begin with, Furthermore và Finally là các từ chỉ linear ordering, vì thế không nên dùng
trong bài này. Nên dùng các cụm từ listing, e.g.: first, second, third, the first approach, the
second way, the third method,….