Essay 2 Peer Feedback

1. From what I’m seeing it just needs a works cited page, but the rest looks okay.

2. You could use the example that the professor posted so you can see how that paper has
their thesis statement.

3. You can provide evidence from the sources that you found.

4. I think I am able to see some grammar errors, but it's only about three of them.

5. I think you should just include more evidence and provide examples of what the authors
on your sources are talking about.