Peer review essay 3

Luna Davila
Mauricio, your thesis is clear and direct. A good research question for your essay would
be "Does immigration have a good impact in the United states?" The suggestions that I
recommended for your essay are checking for punctuation, checking grammatical
errors, and adding transitions. Your conclusion is well explained. Your essay is well
structured.

Raymundo Rodriguez

 Your thesis is clear and direct as you provided the information needed. 
 A research question for your essay can be, "How has immigration helped shape the
United States?"
 Suggestions I recommend is to go back and fix any grammar mistakes, check for
punctuation, and go over your paragraphs.
 You explained your conclusion well.
 Your essay is well structured. Minor isssues but overall good.