read the OWL Purdue link titled “Revising.

” Respond to these questions:

1. What five things do you need to finish on your draft?
1. My introduction needs more information.
2. Two of my body paragraphs need revising and more information to support the point.
3. State better my posture
4. Make it bigger
 
 
2. What five things do you want to change in your draft?
1. The order of my draft
2. My conclusion
3. Make the introduction bigger
4. Put more information in the body paragraphs
5. My in text citation
 
 
 
 
 
 3. What five things are perfect in your draft and you will not change them?
1. My sources
2. The title
3. The format