The bar graph represents the differences on the quantity of a specific store’s selling and

renting digital movies from 2002 to 2011.

In general, rentals experienced a gradual fall in figure per year whereas DVD sales made up
for the major part of sales over a nine-year period.
Reaching a peak at around 185.000 in 2002, rentals saw a slight decrease after years until
dipping to lowest value at over 50000 in 2011. Similar to this, VHS sales also accounted for the
highest figure in 2002 at almost 85000 products, but rapidly declined over 4 years, then
disappeared since 2006. In contrast, there were nearly 50000 DVD items sold in 2002, which
almost rose as four times in 2007 to become the most favored products. At this time, blu-ray
disc started to be sold at a low number of under 10000. This item continued to grow steadily for
the rest of the period.

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