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country to learn its language and culture. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In modern society, there is a popular claim that undergraduates should experience living in
foreign countries to learn about its diverse culture and languages. I determinedly support this
significant importance. I ardently concur with the concomitant benefits of this enlightening trips
First and foremost, it is evident that living abroad will provide students with the precious
vocabulary can be enhanced not only due to thanks to not only daily communications with local
people, but also the lectures presented by professional instructors in university. For instance,
native speakers in American, mostly teenagers and colleges, have the habit of using slang terms
Another point worth noting is that students studying overseas also get a global mindset.
When they step outside their “comfort zone” to witness how people from others countries
perceive the world, their capacity of thinking on a global scale and “outside the box” will
undoubtedly be boosted. As a proof, in the final interview round, recruiters have conversation
with one or more interviewees. It is apparent that a person who has direct/first hand exposure
to different customs and languages will have a more outstanding performance than other
candidates if applying for a position in multinational firms. In other words, knowledge as well as
skills acquired from foreign countries, clearly, can be regarded as a competitive advantage.
Admittedly, it is also true that people have a substantial amount of expenses to consider
when living and studying overseas. I reiterate however that this will not a big issue to concern
All in all, regardless of any points to the contrary, I can safely say that experience in others
developed countries will remain a lure to students which, ultimately, will no doubt influence on
their career.
Your thesis statement is not commensurate with your linguistic talent. It is not academic at all.
If you want to include the drawback of travelling abroad (the final paragraph of the body), you
must rewrite the thesis statement. If not, the last para of the body should be omitted and the
thesis statement should be nailed more. As usual, the lexical resource and the variety of
grammatical structures are your outstanding strengths. However, sometimes your writing
should be not only academic but also succinct. Attempt to balance. In my opinion, your score for