5 5 5 5 5

The following sentences test your ability to recognize 24. Each time a significant advance is made in com-
grammar and usage errors. Each sentence contains either A. B
a single error or no error at all. No sentence contains more
puter technology, some pundit declares that it
than one error. The error, ifthere is one, is underlined
and lettered. If the sentence contains an error, select the
one underlined part that must be changed to make the will have altered the course of human history.
sentence correct. If the sentence is correct, select choice E.
C D
In choosing answers, follow the requirements of standard
written English. No error
E
EXAMPLE:

The other delegates and him immediately 25. Neither the president or the secretary thinks that
ABC A B
accepted the resolution drafted by the the corporation has sufficient information on which
D C D
neutral states. No error
to base a conclusion. No error
E
E

26. Didactic literature, a genre reflecting the author's

21. A poet should portray life with such clarity as readers
A
A
desire to instruct readers, are viewed with contempt
will have no difficulty interpreting what the poet
B C
BCD
by many scholars. No error
has experienced. No error
D E
E

27. Whittling was once a popular country pastime, but

22. In big underground mines, mining machines
A B
A
it began to recline as people had less and less
nose up to the coal vein, rip out the coal, and
C D
B
free time. No error
will sweep it onto conveyor belts. No error
E
C D E

28. In his writings, James Joyce described the Dublin

23. The newscaster reported that this winter consumers
A
A B
he knew and the life he experienced there.
can expect the price of fresh produce will increase
BCD
C
No error
more rapidly than the price of meat. No error
E
D E

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A
counterparts, prided themselves on being part of and renamed it Danzig; by 1466, however, Polish
A B B
the official delegation that would negotiate the . . kings were sovereign there once again and had
C C D
treaty with France. No error restored the city's original name. No error
D E E

30. The decision about which emergency routes to 33. He was somewhat uncertain about how to use
A A B
use should be made quick and judicious' by the the new machine and asked for more specific
B C C D
government if the refugees are to leave the city instructions be sent. No error
E
in time. No error
D E 34. Aerial photography is thought to be
A
31. Despite the claims of its devotees, sunbathing the most efficient. technique to gather accurate
A B B C
is not always healthful; prolonged exposure to it information about the use of the land. No error
C D E
can sometimes cause skin cancer. No error
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Directions: The following passage is an earfy draft of an
essay. Some parts of the passage need to be rewritten.
Read the passage and select the best answers for the
questions that fo'How. Some questions are about particular
sentences or parts of sentences and ask you to improve
sentence structure or word choice. Other questions ask you
to consider organization and development In choosing
answers, follow the requirements of standard written
English.
Questions 35-39 are based on the following passage.
(1) The last century was a time of great technological
progress. (2) Life is more convenient, comfortable, and
efficient today than ever before. (3) Yet this has created
new concerns.
(4) In today's world, medicine is much more advanced
than it was a hundred years ago. (5) While there was no
cure before, many illnesses can now be treated. (6) Once,
few people lived past middle age. (7) Your life expectancy
is now longer. (8) We now have to consider how best to
plan our years beyond retirement and how best to ensure
our quality of life.
(9) Another example is in the home. (10) In the past,
people had to do manual labor to carry out even everyday
household tasks. (11) Before the invention of the modem
stove, they had to go outside and get wood before they could
have cooked dinner. (12) Before the electric washing
machine and dryer, doing the laundry took all day.
(13) Today we simply tum a knob or push a button.
(14) Still, less manual work does not always mean more
leisure. (15) Time-consuming chores have been replaced
by time-consuming jobs, commuting, and other activities
outside the home.
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(reproduced below) is most effective?
Yet this has created new concerns.
(A) Although this has created new concerns.
(B) Yet this progress has created new concerns.
(C) Yet these have created new concerns.
(D) Yet this has created new concerns to worry about
(E) New concerns. have been created,
36. Of the following, which is the best version of the
underlined portion of sentence 5 (reproduced below) ?
While there was no cure before, many illnesses can
now be treated.
(A) (As it is now)
(B) Unlike the past, many historically incurable
illnesses
(C) Prior to now they could not cure many illnesses,
but these
(D) Pryviously incurable, there are many illnesses
which
(E) Many illnesses that used to be incurable
37. Which of the following is the best way to revise and
combine sentences 6 and 7 (reproduced below) ?
Once, few people lived past middle age. Your life
expectancy is now longer.
(A) Few people used to live past middle age, but now
longer lives can be lived.
(B) Once, few people lived past middle age, and now
living longer.
(C) Once, f~w people lived past middle age; now most
can expect to live considerably longer.
(D) Formerly, most people did not live past middle
age, they are now expected to live longer.
(E) Although once possibly dying by middle age, you
now have a longer life expectancy.
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(reproduced below) ? after sentence 15, would be most consistent with the
passage?
Another example is in the home.
(A) BasicalIy, this is one more indication that our
(A) (As it is now) .
society is in trouble.
(B) More examples of this would be found in the
(B) Apparently, technological progress alone cannot
home.
guarantee quality oflife.
(C) Technological progress also affects life in our
(C) Therefore; we are healthier today, but has greater
homes.
happiness been achieved?
(D) Home life is another way this modem trend
(D) This is why the advantages of technology are
would be manifested.
insignificant compared to the drawbacks.
(E) In addition, home life is an example of this
(E) As has been shown in the previous examples,
technological problem.
the dangers of technology are very great.

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35 MINUTES, 44 QUESTIONS

Turn to Section 2 of your answer sheet to answer the questions in this section.

DIRECTIONS

Each passage below is accomr:1anied by a number of questions. For some questions, you
will consider how the passage might be revised to improve the expression of ideas. For
other questions, you will consider how the passage might be edited to correct errors in
sentence structure, usage, or punctuation. A passage or a question may be accompanied by
one or more graphics (such as a table or graph) that you will consider as you make revising
and editing decisions.

Some questions will direct you to an underlined portion of a passage. Other questions will
direct you to a location in a passage or ask you to think about the passage as a whole.

After reading each passage, choose the answer to each question that most effectively
improves the quality of writing in the passage or that makes the passage conform to the
conventions of standard written English. Many questions include a "NO CHANGE" option.
Choose thatoption if you think the best choice is to leave the relevant portion ofthe
passage as it is.

Questions 1-11 are based on the following passage.

Survival in the Hostile Environment of NW Rota-I

- A) NO CHANGE
B) watch

[1] Sixty miles north of Guam and more than C) observe to see
D) visually watch
1,700 feet under the ocean's surface is the summit of

NW Rota-1, an undersea volcano discovered in 2003.

[2] Surprisingly, the volcano appears to have been

continuously active; it even grew 130 feet in height

between 2006 and 2009. [3] Yet despite the hostile

environment created by the constant volcanic activity, life

is thriving there. [4] Special adaptations are the key to

survival. [5] At that depth, water pressure suppresses the

explosive force of the volcano's eruptions, allowing

scientists to D watch and observe them up close via

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remotely operated vehicles. II
NW Rota- I is far below the ocean's photic zone To make the paragraph most logical, sentence 5
should be placed
where sunlight drives photosynthesis; II nevertheless,
A) where it is now.
bacteria supporting a unique food web have adapted to
B) after sentence 1.
this perpetually dark environment. The bacteria have C) after sentence 2.
evolved to use hydrogen sulfide instead of sunlight for D) after sentence 3.

the energy that drives their metabolic processes, and

hydrothermal venting is the source of the chemical soup

necessary to support II him or her. Seawater seeping A) NOCHANGE

B) afterward,
into fissures in the ocean floor is heated by underlying
C) furthermore,

.,.
magma, and the heat drives chemical reactions that
D) similarly,
remove oxygen, sulfates, 11 and remove other chemicals
from the water. Once the superheated water (up to 750°F)

rises through vents in the ocean floor, additional A) NO CHANGE

reactions cause m inerals and compounds to precipitate B) one.
C) them.
onto the seafloor, where bacteria feed on them.
D) it.

-A) NO CHANGE
B) it also removes
C) also removing
D) and

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Loihi shrimp-originally thought to exist only
around an undersea volcano near II Hawaii, survive by
using tiny, shear-like claws to harvest rapidly growing
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A) NO CHANGE
B) Hawaii;
C) Hawaii-
bacterial filaments covering rocks near NW Rota-l's
D) Hawaii
hydrothermal vents. The Loihi shrimp spend most of
their time grazing on the bacteria and evading another,
previously unknown, species of shrimp. Shrimp of ~hat
species also graze on bacterial filaments as juveniles,
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Which choice most effectively sets up the
information in the next sentence?

B resulting from their ability to cope with the noxious A) NOCHANGE

environment around the volcano. They feed on the Loihi
shrimp and other organisms that are overcome by the
toxic plumes of volcanic gas and ash.
B) but their adaptations are not yet fully understood
by the scientific community.
C) thriving in an unusual ecosystem that also
includes crabs, limpets, and barnacles.
D) but as adults, their claws are large enough for the
shrimp to be predators.

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 During an underwater eruption, steam quickly

II condenses. The steam leaves only carbon dioxide

..Which choice most effectively combines the
sentences at the underlined portion?
bubbles and droplets of molten sulfur. This means that
A) condenses and leaves
the water near NW Rota-1 is .more acidic than II that of B) condenses, having to leave
stomach acid, presenting yet another challenge to C) condenses, thereafter leaving
life-forms living nearby. As the carbon dioxide level in D) condenses, and then, after this, it leaves

Earth's atmosphere rises, the IDJ worlds' ocean's absorb

more carbon mdioxide. Organisms flourishing near the
volcano may help biologists understand how life adjusts A) NOCHANGE
B) those of stomach
to very acidic conditions. In addition, NW Rota-1 is a
C) the acid from stomach
natural laboratory where scientists can study conditions
D) stomach
that may be similar to those that gave rise to life on Earth

and perhaps even other worlds.

IDI
A) NO CHANGE
B) world's oceans'
C) world's oceans
D) worlds oceans

The writer is considering revising the underlined

portion to the following.
dioxide, which increases their acidity.
Should the writer make this revision here?
A) Yes, because it explains the relevance of this
sentence to the point made in the paragraph.
B) Yes, because it helps the reader understand
why organisms near NW Rota-1 evolved the way
they did.
C) No, because it merely repeats information
provided earlier in the passage without
contributing to the paragraph's main idea.
D) No, because it interrupts discussion of oceanic
life-forms with an irrelevant detail.

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The passages below are followed by questions based on their content; questions following a pair of related passages may also
be based on the relationship between the paired pas~ages. Answer the questions on the basis of what is stated or implied in the
passages and in any introductory material that may be provided.
Questions 9·10 are based on the following passage.
My grandmother told dozens of stories about emigrat-
ing west toward Oregon in Conestoga wagons during the
.. 1850's. She and the other women in my family were a
'ne spirited lot. They cooked, sewed, complained, nurtured-
5 all the while living their lives under unbelievably hard
circumstances. It never occurred to me to question their
absence from history as taught in school. At the time we
learned only about the men who clashed at the Alamo,
the men who forged across the mountains and mapped
'0 out the Northwest Passage. History seldom tells the
stories of the eight hundred thousand women who also
came west, lively stories of courtship, love, inventive-
ness, humor, skulduggery, passion.
9. The main idea of the passage is that
(A) the author's grandmother sometimes exaggerated
when telling stories about the West
(B) many of the women in the author's family lived
under very trying circumstances
(C~ men and women shared many responsibilities
during the westward migration of the 1850' s
(D) historians have focused more on the men than
. on the \yomen who emigrated west
(E) more women than men emigrated west, according
.to most historians
10. The author refers to "the men who clashed at the
Alamo" (line 8) as an example of
(A) men whose experiences became part of the
history taught in school
(B) men who were just as successful as those
who charted the Northwest Passage
(C) pioneers whose role in our nation's history
deserves more att,ention
(D) settlers who were accompanied westward
by wives, sisters, and mothers
(E) soldiers whose efforts are long forgotten
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,One model of lunar origin had the Moon fQrming at
the same time and place as Earth, by condensing from an
enormous disk of gas and dust surrounding the early Sun.
Line But the Moon's density is little more than half that of Earth.
5 That difference in density had led some to propose that the
Moon lacks an iron core like the one in Earth's innards, and
indeed; seismic readings from the Moon confirmed that the
lunar core is small to nonexistent. If the Moon was born at
the same time and in the same region of the solar system
10 as Earth, why doesn't it have a core like that of Earth?
11. The main purpose of the passage is to
(A) challenge the reliability of an observation
(B) shake the foundations of a science.
(C) indicate the weakness of a theory
(D) question the validity of an experiment
(E) expose the implausibility of a prediction
12. The question about the Moon in lines 8-10 is based
on which underlying assumption?
(A) The larger a celestial body is, the greater its
density will'be. .
(B) Bodies formed simultaneously from the same
'substance have similar internal structures.
(C) The planets of the solar system wer~ all formed
at the same time from a disk of gas and dust.
(D) A seismic reading is possible only on a celestial
body that has an iron core.
(E) A planet necessarily contains a higher concen-
tration of iron than does its satellite.
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Questions 13-24 are based on the following passages.
Those who accept the idea of telepathy believe that
thoughts can be 'exchanged without using the five senses. In
Passage 1, the author recounts his experience with a young
man who claims to be a telepathist; in Passage 2, the
author reflects on her own perceptions oftelepathy.
Passage 1
We began with an experiment. The man asked me to
make a drawing on a blank piece of paper. I made a sketch
of a creature I had invented some time ago to amuse my
Line children. When I had finished, he asked me to cover the
5 drawing with my hand. Then he asked me to concentrate
hard and to try to transmit the thought of what I had
sketched. A minute went by with no result. He shook his
head. "It seems very complicated; is it a kind of amoeba?"
Slowly and hesitantly he began to draw the creature's right
10 ear-the spot where I always begin the drawing. "You've
got it," I said. "Go on!" He completed the drawing quickly.
I had carefully redrawn the picture in my mind as I tried to
transmit it-which probably accounts for the identical
starting point.
15 The man then demonstrated other powers. He made the
hands of my watch tum back'two hours and the date go
forward two days by stroking a coin placed over its face,
explaining afterward that he derives power from metal. He
had a little trouble trying to break my car key. However, he
20 placed it against a metal radiator, and after a few seconds
said, "It's starting to go." Tile key snapped in two.
Then he tried to transmit a picture to me by telepathy. I
attempted to make my mind receptive, but no image came
into it. Feeling rather embarrassed, I just drew the first
25 thing that came into my head: check mark. The man
showed me the piece of paper he was holding. It contained
a mirror image of the symbol I had drawn. It could be
significant in this connection that the man is left-handed.
After I left the room, I began to sift my impressions.
30 Only the day before, an acquaintance had warned me to
watch carefully for sleight-of-hand tricks, especially as the
man had earlier been a stage conjuror. I had to admit that
most of the things he had done could have been tricks. For
instance, snapping the key with his fingers and altering the
35 han'ds and date on my watch with the winder would have
been well within the ability of a skilled conjuror. But how
could he have faked the drawing of what I had drawn? And.
if that feat was due to genuine telepathic powers, the other
demonstrations could also be genUine. ' .
Passage 2
40 My mother and I communicated most clearly when we
communicated telepathically. I remember once getting onto
a train with her, and as we were putting our suitcases on the
luggage rack, she said, out of the blue, "They're tropical,
aren't they?" And I said, "You're probably thinking of
45 flamingos. These were peacocks." I didn't for one moment
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Giovanni we'd seen together several years earlier: the
highly idealized representation of a brace of elephantine
peacocks had been an element of the set decoration. .
50 Well, an observer would say, maybe our seats were next
to a poster of a flamingo. Or oia peacock. Maybe we'djust
heard some Mozart* on the radio. Somehow, an observer
would argue that my mother and I must have been reacting
to a common'clue. And of course I can't prove that this
55 wasn't so. I can only say that if it was so, then it happened
all the time.
In fact, the largest part of any real communication
between my mother and me occurred on an unspoken level:
as far as the eye could see or the ear could hear, we did not
60 get on well at all. It was, like many misunderstandings, a
circular affair-I thought I disliked her largely because she
seemed determined to disapprove of me: to disapprove not
merely of what I did but of the way I did it.
In telepathic communication, however, all such
65 problems vanish. Telepathy seems to operate along the
same principles as an emergency generator: it only works
as a backup system when the primary-that is, the intel-
lectual, the conscious-machinery has been turned off.
My mother and I were always taken unaware by it. When
70 we'd forgotten about each other-when we'd escaped our
customary impulse to make merciless judgments and
counterjudgments and were thinking about something else,
like putting suitcases in a luggage rack-that was exactly
the time a flash of semaphore would blink between us. It
75 would happen without warning, and suddenly, inexplicably,
there we would be, united in a common understanding in
spite of ourselves.
*composer of the opera Don Giovanni
13. Which is the most accurate comparison of the two
passages?
(A) Passages I and 2 both endorse telepathy without
reservations.
(B) Passages I and 2 both idealize telepathy in a
subjective manner.
(C) Passage I serves as an apology for telepathy,
whereas Passage 2 argues against it. .
(D) Passage I debates a theory, whereas Passage 2
rejects it without argument.
(E) Passage I reports an event, whereas Passage 2
functions as a personal reminiscence.
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14. In line 18, "derives" most nearly means 19. The phrases "I thought" (line 61) and "she seemed"
(lines 61-62) primarily convey the author's belief that
(A) obtains
(B) infers (A) her mother intentionally sent her mixed messages
(C) connects (B) she and her mother were not fundamentally at
(D) traces odds
(E) originates (C) mothers and daughters should strive to speak
candidly
15. It can be inferred from lines 30-36 that the telepathist's (D) generational differences are largely superficial
demonstrations would appear most convincing to a (E) people trust their senses at their own peril
critical observer if the telepathist were to
20. Which of the following hypothetical statements
(A) provide more infonnation about his background
would best counter the claim that the nonverbal
(B) critique the performances of other telepathists
communication between mother and daughter was
(C) perfonn in a rigorously controlled environment
a result of environmental cues?
(D) explain the reason for his reputation
(E) talk about what he is doing as he performs (A) The two women favored different leisure-time
activities.
16. The "acquaintance" mentioned in line 30 can best be (B) The two wornen had trouble understanding each
described as a other's needs and desires. .
(C) Thetwo women communicated telepathically
(A) skeptic when they were apart.
(B) hypocrite
(D) The two women preferred to communicate
(C) hoaxer
telepathically.
(D) confidant
(E) The two women seldom agreed about the impor-
(E) mystic
tance of what was going on around them.
17. Which phrase best characterizes the author's general
21. Which statement about telepathy agrees most
attitude in Passage 1 ? .
closely with the situation described by the author
(A) Complete indifference of Passage 2 ?
(B) Escalating anxiety
(A) Telepathy as a means of communication does
(C) Righteous indignation
not operate at the will of the telepathist.
(D) Cynical amusement
(B) Telepathy as a means of communication could
(E) . Guarded acceptance·
be used more widely if people made the effort
to do so.
18; According to the author of Passage 2, the most signifi- (C) Telepathy is a natural reaction to elements in
cant aspect of her mother's statement, "They' re tropical, our immediate environment.
aren't they?" (lines 43-44) is that (D) Telepathy is a particularly effective means of
(A) her mother is referring to peacocks, which are not communication that allows us to transmit
tropical birds detailed and specific infonnation.
(B) the remark appears out of context, but the author (E) Telepathy is a special means of communication
can still decipher its meaning that has been unfairly maligned.
(C) the author and her mother both remember the
perfonnance of Don Giovanni they saw several 22. With which of the following statements would the
years earlier authors of both passages be most likely to agree?
(D) the author and her mother both recognize the . (A) Telepathy requires concentration.
symbolism of the highly idealized birds in the
(B) Telepathy o.ccurs when people are closely related.
stage set (C) Telepathy has been proven scientifically.
(E) her mother starts the conversation on the train
(D) .Telepathy between people is possible,
rather than waiting until later
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authors of the two passages is that the author of
Passage 1
(A) mocks the concept of telepathy, whereas the I
author of Passage 2 is an advocate for it
(B) approaches telepathy as an investigator, whereas
the author of Passage 2 reports a lifetime of
telepathic experiences
(C) is an expert in telepathy, whereas the author of
Passage 2 is only a beginner
(D) enjoys his telepathic experiences, whereas the
author of Passage 2 finds hers traumatic
(E) hopes to profit from his telepathic experiences,
whereas the author of Passage 2 has no such
plans "
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24. Which two people are most likely to regard telepathy
in the same way?
(A) The "acquaintance" in Passage 1 (line 30) and the
mother in Passage 2
(B) The "acquaintance" in Passage 1 (line 30) and the
"observer" in Passage 2 (lines 50 and 52)
(C) The author of Passage I and the mother in
Passage 2
(D) The author of Passage 1 ahd the "observer" in
Passage 2 (lines 50 and 52)
(E) The telepathist in Passage 1 and the "observer" in
Passage 2 (lines 50 and 52)
 Reading Test
65 MINUTES, 52 QUESTIONS
Turn to Section 1 of your answer sheet to answer the questions in this section.
•m#iiMWi
Each passage or pair of passages below is followed by a number of questions. After reading
each passage or pair, choose the best answer to each question based on what is stated or
implied in the passage or passages and in any accompanying graphics (such as a table or
graph).
Questions 1-10 are based on the following
passage.
This passage is adapted from Amy Tan, The Bonesetter's
Daughter. ©2001 by Amy Tan.
At last, Old Widow Lau was done haggling with
the driver and we stepped inside Father's shop. It was
north-facing, quite dim inside, and perhaps this was
Line why Father did not see us at first. He was busy with a
5 customer, a man who was distinguished-looking, like
the scholars of two decades before. The two men
were bent over a glass case, discussing the different
qualities of inksticks. Big Uncle welcomed us and
invited us to be seated. From his formal tone, I knew
10 he did not recognize who we were. So I called his
name in a shy voice. And he squinted at me, then
laughed and announced our arrival to Little Uncle,
who apologized many times for not rushing over
sooner to greet us. They rushed us to be seated at one
15 of two tea tables for customers. Old Widow Lau
refused their invitation three times, exclaiming that
my father and uncles must be too busy for visitors.
She made weak efforts to leave. On the fourth
insistence, we finally sat. Then Little Uncle brought
20 us hot tea and sweet oranges, as well as bamboo
latticework fans with which to cool ourselves.
I tried to notice everything so I could later tell
GaoLing what I had seen, and tease out her envy. The
floors of the shop were of dark wood, polished and
25 clean, no dirty footprints, even though this was
during the dustiest part of the summer. And along
the walls were display cases made of wood and glass.
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The glass was very shiny and not one pane was
broken. Within those glass cases were our silk-
30 wrapped boxes, all our hard work. They looked so
much nicer than they had in the ink-making studio
at Immortal Heart village.
I saw that Father had opened several of the boxes.
He set sticks and cakes and other shapes on a silk
35 cloth covering a glass case that served as a table on
which he and the customer leaned. First he pointed
to a stick with a top shaped like a fairy boat and said
with graceful importance, "Your writing will flow as
smoothly as a keel cutting through a glassy lake."
40 He picked up a bird shape: "Your mind will soar into
the clouds of higher thought." He waved toward a
row of ink cakes embellished with designs of peonies
and bamboo: "Your ledgers will blossom into
abundance while bamboo surrounds your quiet
45 mind."
As he said this, Precious Auntie came back into
mind. I was remembering how she taught me that
everything, even ink, had a purpose and a meaning:
Good ink cannot be the quick kind, ready to pour out
50 of a bottle. You can never be an artist if your work
comes without effort. That is the problem of modern
ink from a bottle. You do not have to think. You
simply write what is swimming on the top of your
brain. And the top is nothing but pond scum, dead
55 leaves, and mosquito spawn. But when you push an
inkstick along an inkstone, you take the first step to
cleansing your mind and your heart. You push and
you ask yourself, What are my intentions? What is in
my heart that matches my mind?
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60 I remembered this, and yet that day in the ink
shop, I listened to what Father was saying, arid his
words became far more important than anything
Precious Auntie had thought. "Look here," Father
said to his customer, and I looked. He held up an
- Throughout the passage, the narrator is portrayed as
someone who is
A) reserved around unfamiliar people.
65 inkstick and rotated it in the light. "See? It's the right
hue, purple-black, not brown or gray like the cheap B) attuned to her immediate surroundings.
brands you might find down the street. And listen to C) sympathetic to the needs of others.
this." And I heard a sound as clean and pure as a D) anxious about her responsibilities.
small silver bell. "The high-pitched tone tells you that
70 the soot is very fine, as smooth as the sliding banks of
old rivers. And the scent-can you smell the balance
of strength and delicacy, the musical notes of the
ink's perfume? Expensive; and everyone who sees It can be most reasonably inferred from the passage
you using it will know that it was well worth the high that Old Widow Lau's reluctance to stay for tea is
75 price."
A) feigned, because she is not genuinely firm in her
I was very proud to hear Father speak of our
resolve. ·
family's ink this way.
B) inconsiderate, because the family has been

- Which choice best summarizes the passage?

A) A character's arrival at her family's ink shop
sparks fond memories of her favorite aunt.
planning her visit.
C) appropriate, because the shop is unusually busy.
D) ill-advised, because she is exhausted from the
journey.

B) A character's surprise visit leads to a happy

reunion at her family's ink shop.
C) A character comes to understand her father's
ambitions while visiting her family's ink shop.
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Which choice provides the best evidence for the
answer to the previous question?
A) Lines 1-4 ("At last . .. first")
D) A character's visit to her family's ink shop
deepens her appreciation of her family's work. B) Lines 11-15 ("And he ... customers")

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C) Lines 15-18 ("Old .. . leave")
D) Lines 19-21 ("Then ... ourselves")

A main theme of the passage is that

A) family relationships should be nurtured.
B) quality is achieved through deliberate effort.
C) hard work results in material compensation.
D) creativity needs to be .expressed concretely.
The narrator indicates that the contrast between the
ink-making studio at Immortal Heart village and her
family's ink shop is that the ink shop
A) displays the family's ink more impressively.
B) is more conveniently located for the public.
C) provides greater individual attention to
customers.
D) offers a larger space for presenting products.

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 Based on the artistic philosophy expressed in the
fourth paragraph (lines 46-59), it is reasonable to
.. ,.

As used in line 59, "matches" most nearly means

A) competes against.
infer that Precious Auntie would consider a hastily
written first draft of a story to be B) corresponds with.

A) emotionally raw and powerful. C) runs counter to.

D) treats equally.
B) creatively satisfying for the author.
C) essentially worthless in and of itself.
D) inappropriately analytical for a piece of art.
As used in line 68, "clean" most nearly means
A) complete.
Which choice provides the best evidence for the B) skillful.
answer to the previous question? C) distinct.
A) Lines 46-48 ("As he ... meaning") D) upright.
B) Lines 49-50 ("Good . .. bottle")
C) Lines 52-55 ("You simply ... spawn")
D) Lines 57-59 ("You push . .. mind")

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