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Doctor Haslam
January 6, 2022
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Introduction: How has the impact of the Mexican Drug Cartel affected the people in Mexico and
in the United States, and what are the possible solutions to decrease the problems caused by this
issue? Where the Mexican Drug Cartel are organized crime groups in Mexico that are involved
in producing and trafficking illegal drugs in the United States. Where they have caused several
issues for both countries including higher drug addiction and consumption for the people in the
United States, corruption within the Mexican government system, and an increasing number of
Topic/Thesis
Source #1:
Guilherme Borges, et al. “Drug Use on Both Sides of the US-Mexico Border.” Salud Pública de
México, vol. 60, no. 4, jul–ago, June 2018, pp. 451–461. EBSCOhost, doi:10.21149/8603.
Borges, Guilherme, et al. “Drug Use on Both Sides of the US-Mexico Border.” Salud Pública de
México, vol. 60, no. 4, July 2018, pp. 451–461. EBSCOhost, doi:10.21149/8603.
“Drug Use on Both Sides of the US-Mexico Border,” is an article written by Guilherme
Borges and other scholars that was published in the Salud Pública de México on July 4, 2018.
Borges expresses that the article's main goal is to compare the drug use for border and non
border cities in the U.S. and Mexico and compare both countries' cities. In order to compare the
drug use Borges claims that they used data from the US-Mexico Study on Alcohol and Related
Conditions, for this study conducted a survey of 4,796 randomly selected people from Mexican
descent between 2011 to 2016 in six cities on both sides of the border. According to Borges they
found that drug use disorders were only found in the border cities Laredo (United States) and
Nuevo Lardeo and Reynosa/Matamoros compared to their non-border counterparts. Borges also
discusses that the U.S. border and non-border cities had higher rates of drug use disorder than the
cities in Mexico. Lastly, Borges explains that the three research sites in the U.S. had higher
prescription drug use, and the three sites in Mexico had higher rates of drug use for all kinds of
drugs. Where Borges discovers that not only does border cities have higher rates of drug use, but
the whole northern region of Mexico by stating, “Our findings that the border cities that we
surveyed in Mexico were at high risk for drug use and symptoms of DUD as compared to
elsewhere in the country are in line with those of other studies,” (Borges 459). “...since the
non-boarder city of Monterrey also showed some higher rates, so the finding seems applicable to
the northern region of Mexico rather than only the border cities,” (Borges 459). In conclusion,
the article that I read helped me see the impacts that the Mexican Cartel has in both the U.S. and
Mexico, for they increase the amount of drug use and consumption in the northern regions of
The point of view that the article is conducting is through the analysis and the
observation of the authors collecting data, and comparing the drug use of border and non-border
cities between the United States and Mexico. The source fits into the debate because it discusses
the results that they found in their research. They have found that the border cities that they
researched in both the United States and Mexico have a higher amount of drug use than the
non-border cities that they researched on, the United States border and non-border cities have a
higher drug use compared to Mexico, the US has a higher prescription drug use, and Mexico has
a higher drug use in the northern region of the country. What is important to consider from this
article is the ethos and logos because the article provides a lot of credible information from the
sources that they use and analyze. The article expresses the information that they use towards
their audience of people that are interested to see the drug use of border and non-border cities in
the U.S. and Mexico. The article is credible because the authors are able to explain in detail
about the information that they analyzed and collected. Then the authors were able to cite other
information that they used in their article by providing a references page in their article. The
article was published three years ago, and from reading the article I did not see any biases. I
wasn’t able to find information about the publishers nor the author, but at the beginning of the
Source #2:
“Mexico's Long War: Drugs, Crime, and the Cartels.” Council on Foreign Relations, Council on
“Mexico's Long War: Drugs, Crime, and the Cartels.” Council on Foreign Relations, Council on
“Mexico’s Long War: Drugs, Crime, and the Cartels,” is an article that was published on
the website Council on Foreign Relations. The website expresses that the Mexican drug cartel is
a major influence of distributing and importing many illegal drugs, for they are the leading
suppliers of many illegal drugs that include cocaine, heroin, meth, and other drugs into the
United States. What the website also mentions is that there have been more than 300,000
homicides and 66,000 people that have disappeared since 2006 when the Mexican government
declared war on the cartels. The Council on Foreign Relations have stated that over the years a
variety of cartels have grown, seperated, made new alliances, and had conflicts with each other
for territory control. The website lists and talks about the Sinaloa Cartel, Jalisco New Generation
Cartel, Juarez Cartel, Gulf Cartel, Los Zetas, and Beltran-Leyva Organization, for it also
mentions that the Drug Enforcement Administration have these groups are the most significant
cartels that impose a threat to the United States. According to the Council on Foreign Relations
they have expressed how the cartels use some of their profit to corrupt judges, police officers,
and politicians, and even sometimes they incorporate officials in assassinating public servants.
The website also mentions that the United States has made little progress on trying to reduce the
demand of illegal drugs where they state, “ In 2016, Americans spent almost $150 billion on
cocaine, heroin, marijuana, and methamphetamine, 50 percent more than in 2010,” (Mexico’s
Long War: Drugs, Crime, and the Cartels). The Council on Foreign Relations mentions how
various drugs are smuggled into the United States, and how they use data from the U.S. Customs
and Border Protection to express what illicit drugs are found at official ports of entry and the
pounds of drugs that are seized at the ports. The website also expresses the history and the
limited success that Mexico has had against the drug cartel, for Mexico’s former and current
Presidents have deployed armed forces that have caused more violence and little change. Lastly,
the website discuss how the United States has assisted Mexico to go against the cartels, for they
mention how the U.S. has sent billions of dollars to Mexico, Bush providing counternarcotics
and counterterrorism support, Obama aiding Mexico with creating reforms in the justice system
and creating programs in communities trying to prevent crime, and Trump deploying thousands
of military troops to the U.S.-Mexico border to go against drug production and money
laundering.
The Council of Foreign Relations expresses the article through the viewpoint of the
information and data that have been gathered that are about the Mexican Drug Cartel. This article
fits into the debate of the Mexican Drug Cartel because it expresses various details and statistics
about how the cartel has been involved in the many issues and problems that they have produced
and caused. The important aspects to consider in this article are ethos and logos. In this article it
demonstrates and explains the cartel's background, impact, and influence throughout Mexico and
the U.S. by using a variety of info and data. Which showcases how logos is one of the main
aspects in the article, for it is used throughout the writing of the article where it informs the
audience about these organized crime groups. At the same time the article provides the sources
from where they got their information from by highlighting it in orange, yet this aspect is
important because it is using ethos. Where the article is demonstrating their credibility to the
reader by providing the citations of the information that they are using. The audience for this
article could be anyone that is interested in wanting to learn more about the Mexican cartel. In
conclusion, the source is credible to the audience because of the reliable information that it
provides about the cartels. The only concern is that there is no specific author mentioned, but the
website says the editors of the website wrote the article. There is no bias from what I have read,
for they express this issue using a lot of factual information, statistics, and other sources where
they are cited throughout the article. In the beginning it says that it was updated on February 26,
2021 at 8:00 A.M. (EST) which indicates that the article is current with their information.
Source #3:
Dulin, Adam. “Mexican Cartel Negotiative Interactions with the State.” Trends in Organized
Crime, vol. 22, no. 2, June 2019, pp. 210–230. EBSCOhost, doi:10.1007/s12117-017-9327-2.
Adam Dullin wrote an article called “Mexican cartel negotiative interactions with the
state,” published in Trends in Organized Crime on December 9, 2017. Dullin discusses how the
Mexican Drug Cartel uses non-violent alternatives to favor their power and influence over
Mexico. Where Dullin expresses one of the alternatives by explaining how the drug trafficking
“Staggering sums of money are paid to those who choose to look the other way, and over the
years a long list of powerful officials have worked on both sides of the law. From defense
secretaries to army generals and all manner of state and municipal officials, Mexican DTOs’
ability to use “soft tactics” has been amply demonstrated,” (Dullin 211). Throughout the article
Dullin analyzes various literature and studies related to the cartel to understand their negotiative
interactions within the states of Mexico. Dullin expresses that in this article they will use
2012, so that they can identify the communication activity from different cartel groups. In the
research that was conducted, Dullin expresses that the conflict over territory causes a lot of the
violence that occurs in Mexico, for it also increases the amount of negotiation and interaction
between the cartels and the government. Dullin later explains that cartels would achieve their
vertical status, or increase their economic status, in important locations like the coast, border, or
capital area of Mexico. Near the end of the article Dullin mentions a variety of events that
increase and decrease the individual status of each cartel group, yet he expresses that cartels with
ambitions of territorial control and increase in their status and strength there will be more
non-violent interactions and negotiations between the government and other cartels.
The article represents an informative viewpoint because the author conducted an analysis
on the communication of the cartel to explain and describe the non-violent interactions that
cartels make with each other and with the government. With the heavy examination that this
article conducts it fits into the debate because it describes the effect that the cartel has on
Mexico. The article describes that the cartels use non-violent strategies like negotiating and
interacting with other groups and corrupting the government to try to increase their overall status
and strength. The most important aspects that the article uses are logos and ethos. The article
uses logos by explaining a variety of information and analysis about the non-violent interactions,
communications, and negotiations that the cartels make with other drug trafficking groups and
with the government. Ethos is used when the article demonstrates the data that it used for their
analysis, yet they also cite the information and other literature that they use throughout the
article. The main audience for this article is for people seeking in depth information about the
actions that the cartel conducts to benefit their group. Overall, this article is credible towards
their audience because the author is able to explain in detail about the research that it conducted.
Where the author analyzed the communication of the cartels to determine their negotiations and
interactions with the government and other cartel groups was towards their interest of territorial
control and growth in status. The article was able to provide credit to the resources that were
used in the research and writing by providing a reference page in the last part of the article, and
having the statements of other information be cited with the name of their authors. Then the
article is current or recent with being published online 4 years ago with no biases.
Source #4:
Light, Michael T., et al. “Undocumented Immigration, Drug Problems, and Driving Under the
Influence in the United States, 1990-2014.” American Journal of Public Health, vol. 107, no. 9,
United States, 1990-2014,” was an article written by Michael T. Light, Ty Miller, and Brian C.
Kelly, for it was published in the American Journal of Public Health on September 1, 2017. The
authors express that there has been an increase in the amount of drug overdose fatatlies and
alcohol crashes in the United States, yet they also express there has also been an increase in the
number of undocumented immigrants that are in the United States. The authors explain that in
order to see if there is any correlations with the amount of undocumented immigrants and the
increasing number of drug and alcohol use problems they created two hypothesis. Where the
authors explain the first hypothesis by saying that undocumented immgrants increase the amount
of drug problems and DUI’s because of their high stress and low mental health from the fear of
being explotitated and deportated, but also taking in consideration of the poverty and low
engagement in education that they face. The authors suggest the second hypothesis by saying
that undocumented immigrants reduce the number of DUI’s and drug problems in the United
States, for they are motivated by economic opportunities that will lead them to life without
criminal involvement and to have better social behaviors. The authors explain that they
conducted a research and analysis to test these two hypotheses by collecting a variety of data.
Where the authors state that they collected data from the Federal Bureau of Investigation
Uniform Crime Report for DUI and drug arrest, they collected data from the National Highway
Traffic Safety Administration's Fatality Analysis Reporting System for alcohol-related car
crashes, they collected data Centers for Disease Control and Prevention Underlying Cause of
Death for drug overdose, and they collected data from the Center for Migration Studies and the
Pew Reasearch Center for information on undocumented immgrants. The authors also mention
that they collected data of socioeconomic, demographic, and criminal justice characters from
trusted sources like the US Census, the National Prisoner Statistics, and the Federal Bureau of
Investigation Police Employment data.US Census, the National Prisoner Statistics, and the
Federal Bureau of Investigation Police Employment data. With analyzing and examining
multiple resources and data the authors express the results that they found by saying, “Taken
together, the findings offer no evidence that unauthorized immigration increases the rate of DUI
or drug problems. Rather, the pattern in the data suggests that undocumented immigration
reduced the prevalence of DUI and drug problems over the past 25 years or had no effect,”
(Light, Miller, Kelly 1451). After seeing these results the authors conducted further
investigation, but later the authors claimed that the second hypothesis was correct in the aspect
that undocumented immigrants decrease or do not affect the prevalance of DUI and drug
problems in the United States. At the end the authors express that there should be public
resources that can be effective at preventing and intervening the alcohol and drug problems that
The article has a viewpoint that is through analyzing and researching information to find
out if undocumanted immigrants have an influence on the prevalence of DUI’s and drug
problems in the United States. Where this source fits into the debate of the project's issue
because it relates to the drug use that is occuring in the United States, for the Mexican cartel has
an influence on supplying and trafficking illegal drugs. Some people argue that undocumneted
immigrants increase the drug and alcohol problems that are occuring in the United States, but
from the research and analysis that was conducted the article helps contradict that argument. The
main rhetorical aspects to consider for this article are logos and ethos. Where the authors use
logos to express and showcase the information and results that they have found during their
research. Ethos is the other important rhetorical analysis to consider because the author’s
research depends on the credibility of the data and statistics that are being collected, so that they
can prove the accuracy and reliability of the information that they provide through the study that
they have conducted. The audience for this article could be towards people that are researching
or interested to see if undocumented immigrants are involved or influnce any situations or issues
that occur in the United States. The source is credible towards their audience because of the large
amount of research that was conducted by the authors, and they were able to explain and
describe in full depth their research and information that they provide. Also the authors were able
to cite and give credit to the resources and data that they used for their study. Also what gives
this article credibility is the publisher being The American Journal of Public Health Association.
Where they publish peer reviewed public health journals in the American Journal of Public
Health to “advance public health research, policy, practice, and education.” This article
demonstrates that there were no biases because they were able to create two different hypotheses
in their research to describe how undocumented immgrants affect drug problems and driving
Source #5:
DeMatthews, David. “School Leadership, Social Capital, and Community Engagement: A Case
Study of an Elementary School in Ciudad Juárez, Mexico.” School Community Journal, vol. 28,
search-ebscohost-com.libprox1.slcc.edu/login.aspx?direct=true&db=eric&AN=EJ1184928&site
=eds-live&scope=site.
David DeMatthews wrote an article called “School Leadership, Social Capital, and
published in the School Community Journal on March 1, 2018. DeMatthews stated that he
conducted a qualitative case study for one school year on a small elementary school that is
located in Ciudad Juarez named Colegio Zapata. According to DeMatthews he says that Ciudad
Juarez, Mexico has been named as one of the most violent cities in the world, for he expresses
that the city is faced with a lot of domestic and gang/cartel violence, poverty, adult illiteracy, lack
of access to quality public schools, government malaise, and a lack of unity within the
communities. DeMatthews says Colegio Zapata was founded by Seńora Marie, who is the leader
of the school, and her husband Louis, and that it is a private, nondenominational Christian
elementary school that has an open enrollment policy. DeMatthews mentions that Seńora Marie
and the community have created the schools mission to focus on bringing hope to the people of
Ciudad Juarez by providing the students of the school academic opportunities, teach students and
parents general life skills, and create a great foundation of ownership and involvement within the
community. During this study DeMatthews mentions that he conducted 18 interviews with
Seńora Marie over one academic school year. Where DeMatthews says that they asked her about
the challenges that the school, students, families, and the community faces, how those challenges
evolved, and the specific actions that she took to support the school and the community.
DeMatthews mentions that he also interviewed five teachers, eight parents, two local government
officials, a community activist, and a local reporter. DeMatthews expresses that he conducted six
to seven hours of school and classroom observations, for he mentioned that the observation sites
that he had were at the classrooms, cafeteria and kitchen, afterschool programs, assemblies,
meetings that were conducted by Seńora Marie to meet with parents and teachers, and other
activities that Seńora Marie engaged in. DeMatthews stated that Seńora Marie would help the
community on building the bonding social capital with using parent volunteers, for she also used
the school to empower families and students with teachers having lessons about recycling,
community and civic engagement, community solidarity, addressing gender roles, and about
having hope and goals. Then DeMatthews expresses how the school provides after school
programs for adults by saying, “Seńora Marie, her husband Louis, and teachers willing to
volunteer provided courses to parents after school. The PROFECO and U.S. Consulate
partnerships also brought adult education courses. Classes included home economics, reading,
mathematics, English, administrative skills, family counseling, parenting, healthy eating and
cooking, job and interview skills, Bible study, and others,” (DeMatthews 184). DeMatthews
claims this helped parents at applying in jobs, having better eating habits and diets, or even
becoming a role model for their kids. DeMatthews says that the most significant service project
that the school conducted was to raise enough money for medication and family needs for a
former student that was diagnosed with brian cancer. DeMattews expresses that this helped unite
the community with having students collect as much money as they can, parents in the school's
kitchen to cook and sell empanadas and other baked goods, residents without children at the
school would be involved, fathers were coming to the school, and even members from a local
church in El Paso, Texas got involved. DeMatthews mentions that the child survived longer than
This article's point of view is through the authors study and analysis over the school’s
leadership and engagement with the community. Where the author conducted observations over
the school's environment and activities, and also conducted a series of interviews with the leader
of the school and with the people that are involved with the school. This source fits into the
debate because it goes over the impacts that the cartel has on small towns in Mexico, but it also
goes over how educational systems like Colegio Zapata overcome these challenges and use
education as a source to unite the children, their families, and the community that they are in.
The rhetorical aspects that are needed to be taken into consideration are ethos and pathos. Where
the articles uses the credibility of the author, for he is the one that conducted the analysis and
observed the school by witnessing it for a school year and being there physically. The article uses
pathos with adding what was said in the interviews that were conducted, for that showcased the
emotions and thoughts that people had at the moment. Also the articles described in detail about
the determination and devotion that Seńoria Marie had towards the school and the community.
The audience of this article is towards educators or people that work in the education field
because the study was conducted to analyze the leadership of a community based school, and
how those practices help build the engagement of family and students in the community. This
source is credible to its audience because the author writes in great detail about the background
of the city, the school, and Señora Marie who founded the school, yet it describes a lot of
information of the analysis on the schools impact and involvement with the students, parents, and
the community. The author is really credible because he is an educator, and he was present for a
school year at Colegio Zapata’s while he was conducting his research. Which gives him the
authority to express information about the importance and impact that education has on people.
Source #6:
Gómez San Luis, Anel Hortensia, and Ariagor Manuel Almanza Avendaño. “Barriers to
Addiction Prevention and Treatment in Communities with Organized Crime: The Perspective of
Health Providers.” Salud Mental, vol. 41, no. 2, Mar. 2018, pp. 73–80. EBSCOhost,
doi:10.17711/SM.0185-3325.2018.010.
“Barriers to addiction prevention and treatment in communities with organized crime: the
perspective of health providers,” an article written by two psychologists Anel Hortensia Gómez
San Luis and Ariagor Manuel Almanza Avendaño, for it was published in Salud Mental on
March 1, 2018. Gomez and Almaza express that they have conducted a study to examine through
the perspective of health staff on how the presence of organized crime are barriers for addiction
prevention and treatment. Where Gomez and Almaza claim that in their study they interviewed 8
women psychologists who have had experience with providing outside prevention and outpatient
treatment for substance abuse, for the research was done in a state of Tamaulipas at a primary
addiction center. According to Gomez and Almaza they say that in their study they found that
organized crime has an influence in the community, for there are teenagers that consume or join
in these groups. Where Gomez and Almaza quoted on what one of the participants said in their
experience with this by saying, “I started giving talks and it was very common in middle school
for students to show me the drug wrapped in sheets of paper…I have heard from the middle
schools where I went to work, that the dealers are the ones who give them to them…they have
already identified the schools and they go and sell drugs there. (Participant 3),” (Gomez and
Almaza 76). Gomez and Almaza explain that the reason this occurs is because of the financial
problems, dysfunctional family structures, lack of parental supervision, and other factors that
contribute to the drug use and entering in organized crime for teenagers. Gomez and Almaza
mention that the barriers that the psychologists had in addiction prevention is the organization of
crime groups controlling communities that have education members afraid to address drug
prevention, restrict health providers for the implementation of drug prevention, and the fear of
health providers going to surroundings or education facilities with the presence of gang members
where they could be threaten. Gomez and Almaza also mention that psychologists have
insecurities with providing care because of the violent events that take place near the facilities,
and affect the treatment of providing care to patients engaged in criminal activities. Lastly,
Gomez and Almaza express that psychologists and other health care providers have to adapt to
protection strategies when they provide their treatments, for they ignore comments that are about
organized crime groups from patients that are members, schedule certain appointments for
The viewpoints that this article has is through the analysis of the literature that was about
organized crime and drug consumption, and also the viewpoint of the study on the interviews
that were trying to find out how the presence of organized crime hinders the practice of addiction
prevention and treatment in communities. This source fits into the debate because it talks about
one of the impacts that organized crime groups, especially drug trafficking groups, have in
communities. Where the argument is that their presence and control in territories become barriers
for health providers to provide addiction prevention and treatment towards communities. Where
the rhetorical aspects to consider in this article is ethos and pathos. Where ethos is implemented
in this article is because the authors are psychologists that interviewed other psychologists, for
that gives credibility to the authors that conducted this study because they were able to know
how the profession works and the information that was provided to them by the people who were
interviewed. Then also the article gains credibility with having the people who were interviewed
be people who have experienced and been witness to the topic that is being researched on. Then
the article uses pathos with the response of the participants because they are expressing the
emotions that they feel towards an experience or issue that they have been affected by. The
audience of this article is towards people who are interested to see what are the barriers of
addiction prevention and treatment for other countries in the world. This article is credible
towards its audience with being current, for it was published on March 1, 2018. Also the article
has credibility with the authors being psychologists that have clinical experience. The authors are
also credible because they cited the sources that they used in their article. They were also able to
use what their participants said to express and support what they found in their research. As like
the other sources this article has no bias towards a side, but supports the idea that prevention of
substance abuse can be done through proper educational and community reform.