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Thinking of what you have read about the language of technical writing, improve the
following improperly written sentences.
1. Likewise, in all cases, give consideration to the integrity of the person chosen to
transmit the package to our client.
2. I am cognizant of the numerous aspects about the transmission of the package to our
client.
3. Please, inquire about utilization of the additional stamp for mailing the package.
4. Obtain some information with regard to their plans in making amendments to their
system of delivering goods to their clientele.
5. Enclosed please find a check in the amount of two thousand pesos which I think is
insufficient for the mailing of the package.
1. Any of the parties can make a classification of the documents before they will make a
revision on these papers.
- Any of the parties can make classified documents before they will revise these
papers.
- I suggest that both parties are to make request to extend the deadline for the
contract to be registered.
3. The officers have an expectation that both parties will come to an agreement with
each other, soon.
- The officers expected that both parties will come to an agreement with each
other, soon.
4. Definitely, Mr. Cruz will give consideration to the agent’s explanation about the
cancellation of the meeting.
- Mr. Cruz will consider what the agent has explained about the meeting being
cancelled.
4. This is to inform you that our general assembly will be at the Heritage Hall.
5. Needless to say, all business firms want enthusiastic, - well-read, and creative
technical writers.
- All business firms want enthusiastic, - well-read, and creative technical writers.
1. This seminar helped me plan in advance my activities in school and in my work place.
2. Her lecture in the seminar should deal mainly with true facts.
3. Do you mean to say, you need more lectures and practice on effective technical
writing?
4. Please give that color green bag to Engineer Gomez, our guest speaker.
5. The seminar focused on the technical reports about Engineer Lopez’s new invention
on computer technology.