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AN ANALYSIS OF THE WRITTEN GRAMMATICAL ERRORS PRODUCED BY

FRESHMENT STUDENTS IN ENGLISH WRITING

Hamzah
Jurusan Bahasa dan Sastra Inggris Inggris
Fakultas Bahasa dan Seni Universitas Negeri Padang

Abstract
This study is aimed at providing explanation on the taxonomy of the
grammatical errors made by the university students in written production of
English. The data were obtained from twenty English texts written by students as
a part of their task in writing class. The findings of the study reveal that the
errors can be grouped into fifteen categories ranging from severe errors to mild
errors. The categories for severe errors are word choice, verb group, article,
preposition, plurality and spelling. The other categories are subject-verb
agreement, pronoun agreementa nd dropping, relative clause, possessive, copula
omission and mechanic. Based on these findings, the teacher of English are
suggested to raise students’ awareness on these errors and provide sufficient
remedies to prevent students from internalising such errors.

Key words: error correction, error analysis, grammatical error, interlanguage

A. INTRODUCTION teacher teaches three groups of students and


The importance of writing has been each consists of forty and s/he spends five
realised by the English language teaching minutes to correct each essay, s/he will
practitioners. Good language users are spend about six hundred minutes. This is
supposed to be able to express themselves equivalent to ten hours’ work per
in both spoken and written language. As an assignment.
attempt to increase the proficiency of Do teacher’s efforts to spend ten hours
learners in written production of English, correcting student’s essay per assignment
Writing has been widely taught as a discrete produce effective result? Some people are
subject in various foreign language teaching in doubt about it. The correction from the
programs. teacher may be counter-productive for
However, Writing courses challenge several reasons. Firstly, it may discourage
students and teachers. In the part of the students. To express their frustration, some
students, writing is viewed as a daunting of the students cinically said that “the more
and time consuming tasks. To satisfy the we write the more we make mistake.” Even
requirements, students should produce though this expression can be taken as a
written texts with various types of joke, it shows how they feel about the
development and hand them to the teacher. correction made by their teacher. Secondly,
And later, having corrected them, the the students may not learn from the
teacher will return those texts to the original correction provided by the teacher. This is
writer with feedbacks that may be in a form specifically true when the teacher corrects
of cross-out in red or green ink through-out all errors in the essay. Consequently,
the paper or written comments in a more students could not see their particular
polite remarks. Similarly, in the part of the weaknesses in the written production of
teacher, writing is viewed as a heavy-loaded English. Finally, the teachers could not
course. The teacher should allocate a lot of provide a remedy for their students although
extra time to read the texts produced by they realise that their students do face
students. To illustrate this burden, when a problems. Since they correct all errors, they

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only know that students are weak in written provide a clear description of students
production and they cannot locate the area errors so that the lecturer may make the
of the weaknesses. attempts for handling students' errors in
Actually, ther two strategies that can be order not to be fossilised in part of the
applied by the teacher to use the students’ students.
errors as tools for improving their Error analysis is different from error
grammatical competence. First, the teacher correction. Error analysis makes a scientific
may use the Garden Path Method developed study of errors made a group of people who
by Tomasello and Heron (1988). This share the same mother tongue when they
technique is used to encourage students to study a second or a foreign language.
formulate their own general grammatical Sobahle (1986) stated that error analysis
rules to the target language, and then indicates all errors produced that are
overtly corrected when they make common to that group of people. In this
overgeneralization. Tomasello and Heron study the group of people refers to
claimed that this technique may help the Indonesia speaking learners.
learners correct their errors caused by Corder suggested that students' errors
transfer and overgeneralisation. Secondly, have positive value for teachers, student and
the teacher may use error analysis to researchers. Errors can give the indication
identify the students’ common errors and for the teacher of how far the learner has
focusing the correction on those errors. This come and what he still must learn.
attempt can besuccessful when the teacher Meanwhile, in the part of student error is an
could obtain beneficial information from instrument he uses to test out his hypothesis
students’ writing by applying structured concerning the language he learns. In
correction. This could be done when the addition, the researchers use errors to
teachers are able to analyse the errors and support their hypothesis on the strategies
locate the source of these errors. and procedures used by learner to acquire
The writing product can be evaluated the language (see Schachter and Celce-
on the basis of five aspects, namely: Murcia, 1977: 144).
content, organisational structure, voca- As an effort to study errors made by
bulary, language use and mechanics. In this students, error analysis has been used for
study the examination will be limited into identifying the source and classifying errors.
two areas, that is language use and In the first attempt of the analysis, the
mechanics. To gain an understanding of the similarities and the differences between the
source and frequencies of errors made by source and target language system were
Indonesian learners, the writer proposes the used as the basis for predicting the source
study of errors in written production of of errors. In accordance with the
English. For this purpose, the writer has set development in the other areas such an
up the research questions as follows: understanding of second language acqui-
1. What are the common errors made by sition and empirical evidence that often do
Indonesian speaking learners on written not support this hypothesis, the feasibility
production of English? What are the of this analysis is in question. Richards
classification of those errors? What is the (1971: 214) suggested the inadequacy of the
distribution of those errors in their parameter used in contrastive analysis. He
categories? said that contrastive analysis contributes the
This study is important for English idea of locating the inter language
teachers in Indonesia in the way that it may interference but many errors are attributable
provide them with an understanding of what to the strategies used by the learners in
has been gained by the Senior High School acquiring the language system. He argued
graduates on English. Its significance for that contrastive analysis may be most
English lecturers is that the findings may

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predictive at the level of phonology and mistakes in over-all organisation which


least predictive at the level of syntax. confuse the relationships among the
As an alternative, Richards (1971) constituent clauses. Meanwhile the general
proposed other possible sources of errors. criterion for local errors is the mistakes
From his analysis on previous research on within clauses or simple sentences.
errors made by many different mother Several studies have been carried out to
tongues, he concluded that several types of identify the taxonomy of errors in written
errors caused by the difficulty in the English produced by speakers of other
language itself and the immaturity of languages. The Government Teacher
learner acquisition which in his term called training College, Ceylon (1972) conducted
intra-lingual and developmental errors. On a survey of students' errors in English. The
the basis of their causes intra-lingual and findings revealed that the errors made by
developmental errors are classified into four student are mainly on articles, prepositions,
general categories namely over- possessive forms and word order.
generalisation, ignorance of rule restriction, Therefore, they suggested that those new
incomplete application of rules and false categories showed that students' errors have
concept hypothesised. been shifted from those in twenty years ago.
Corder (1973) classified the errors Therefore, they suggested that those new
based on learner's level of learning in to pre error taxonomies should be taken into
systematic, systematic and post systematic. consideration by the textbook writer for
Pre systematic errors are made by learners Ceilonese.
when they try to understand the new Wyatt (1973) studied the errors made
linguistic points. Those errors are by the prospective participants of the East
characterised by the in ability of learners to African Certificate Examination. He
correct them and they even do not realise identified fourteen categories of errors. The
that they have produced errors on their findings of his study showed that the major
utterance. The systematic errors are made areas of errors were spelling(18.4%),
by students as the consequence of the sentence structure (16,6%), verb groups
wrong concept of linguistic point involves. (15,2%) and noun groups (16.2%),
The post systematic errors are deviant punctuation (7.8%), whereas the other nine
language form produced by students after categories were less than five percent each
their errors have been remedied. These Those were: Pronouns (1.6), adjectives
errors are characterised by the capability of (2.4), prepositions (4.1), intensifiers (0.6%),
learners to correct and explain them. confusion and misuse of idioms (4.7%),
On the basis of the severity of errors contraction, abbreviation and informalities
affecting communication, Burt (1975) (2.6%), repetition (3.7%), clumsy or
classified errors into global and local errors. meaningless expression (2.4%) and
Global errors "affect overall sentence carelessness (3.6%).
organisation and significantly hinder The same research was conducted by
communication." Meanwhile local errors Thom (1985) to identified the taxonomy of
"affect single element (constituent) in the errors produced by Vietnamese students and
sentence and usually do not hinder English teachers in Vietnam. He classified
communication." General criteria for global the errors into ten categories In comparison,
errors are the mistakes that totally disrupt the major categories of errors produced by
the S-V-O sequence of the English students and teachers were: Spelling (15.38
language, mistakes in subordinate and co- : 11.42), lexical (23.84 : 34.23), verbal
ordinate conjunctions that totally change the (18.46 : 11.42), prepositional (15.38 :
meaning of the sentence and make 11.42), article (13.84 : 8.57), punctuation
incomprehensible or equivocal. In the (5.38 : 8.57) and morphological (4.61 :
sentence with more than one clause 11.42). Meanwhile, both students and

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teachers produced fewer errors on three categories, they found that the student
other categories namely concord (1.53 : 0), produced false cognates (82%) and Cross
word order (0.76 : 0) and discourse (0.76 : association (18%). In syntactico-
0). morphological categories, the seven most
The more recent studies on error occurance errors were word order, tense,
analysis still empasize the taxonomy of the there-existensial, passivisation, word form,
errors, the cause of errors and their preposition, and question formation.
implication on language teaching. In The research findings above show that
Secondary School context, there have been the sources of errors are predictable but
two studies on error analysis on students’ their frequencies cannot be predicted.
essay writing in Malaysian secondary Palmer’s (1980) idea that the frequency of
school, and one in Jordanian context. Maros errors in terms of percentage it represents of
et al (2007) found that the three most all mistakes is relevant in the analysis of
common errors produced by Jordanian errors on written production of a language
students were the use of articles, subject- is still widely accepted.
verb agreement, and copula be. Darus and
Subramaniam (2009) studied the errors in C. METHODOLOGY
the written English essays made by Twenty Indonesian students studying
secondary school students in Malaysia. The Writing I were chosen as the subjects for
findings of their study revealed there were the study. Data were collected from the
fifteen categories of errors made by writing assignment written by students at
students, and the most common errors were home. The total language corpus collected
singular/plural forms, tense, word choice, is approximately 10.000 words. The writer
preposition, subject and verb agreement, corrected those essays by identifying the
and word order. Zawahreh et al (2012) errors made by students in their written
studied errors made by ten graders in production. To maintain the consistency of
writing english essays and found that the the correction and reliability of the findings,
most prominent errors were subject-verb the writer asked help from another lecturer
agreement, insertion of preposition, verb to correct the other copies and label the
omission, tense, and word choice. errors made by the students. Then, The
At the University context, error results of the correction made by the writer
analysis has been conducted in Nepal, was matched against that made by the co-
Jordan, and Iran. Giri (2009) found that corrector.
bachelor level students of English in Nepal There wre 691 errors made by the
produced all sort of grammatical errors in students. The identified errors were counted
the use of the English language, and the based on their frequencies. When the same
seven most errors were on conditional, error occurred twice, they were counted as
mood, verb forms, tense, main verb, two errors in the tabulation. Then, these
subject-verb agreement, question formation. errors were classified based on the
In Jordan, Abushihab et al (2011) studied procedures suggested by Etherton (1977). In
grammatical errors produced by university the classification level, the errors were
students enrolled in paragraph writing class. tabulated and classified into the following
They found that the most problematic areas categories: spelling, article, preposition,
for students were preposition, pronoun agreement, word choice, relative
morphological errors, articles, verbs, clauses, pronoun deletion, word order, verb
passivisation, and tense. While abbasia and group - productions of verb, distribution of
karimnia (2011) studying students error in verb and tense, plurality, mechanics,
Iranian university tried to reclasified errors possessive and copula omission. Then,
into lexico-semantic and syntactico- from this tabulation, the frequency of errors
morphological errors. In lexico-semantics and the percentage for each category was

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calculated to see their distribution and copula omission. Each occupies only 1.4%
severity - the most frequent errors were the of the total errors.
mostly needed for remedy. 2. Discussion and Interpretation
As shown in table 1, spelling is an area
D. FINDINGS AND DISCUSSION where students make significant errors.
1. Findings English spelling is difficult for the learners
Data analysis showed that there are because of its irregularity and some sounds
fourteen categories of errors commonly are represented by several different
made by Indonesian students studying orthographic symbols. The most common
writing. The distribution of those errors is errors seemed arise from students'
shown in figure 1. carelessness in writing. This may result in

the omission of a letter that is not an


The figure shows that the most severe unsounded one in the word ( *avantages,
errors regarding the occurrence are word *disavantages, *the (= they). The second
choice for 23.2 %. The second place is category of spelling errors arises from the
errors in verb group with the occurrence of confusion of irregularity of spelling system.
15.8%. Errors in placing articles occupy This may result in the writing of two words
13.8% of errors tabulated. Meanwhile, into one (*and soon (=and so on), *anymore
errors on the prepositional use are 12.31%. (=any more). The third category is caused
Placing plural markers produces problems by the intention of the writer to write the
to students with the level of occurrence of words based on phonetic analogy
10.1%. It is followed by errors in spelling (*influencial, *quiz). This finding confirms
8%. Subject-verb agreement, pronoun Haggan's (1991) idea that mispronunciation,
agreement and pronoun drop are not so lack of awareness of spelling rules and
many produced by students namely 3.6% irregular spelling patterns strongly
and 2.1%. The field with the least errors contributed to spelling errors. She found
produced are relative clause, possessive and that this even will be more among the more
advanced students.

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The use of article is another area of aborigin(ese) has some colour(s). Those
errors for students. Like spelling, the use of errors attributed to wrong analogy of the
articles is very confusing for Indonesian target language rules. The possibility of
learners. It is due to the fact that Indonesian making the construction like some of them
does not have an article. In addition, the ... and He told me encouraged students to
English article rules are slightly infer that they may be generalised into the
complicated and more complex in the form as the sample sentences above.
production level because the learners should Pronoun agreement is very important in
work on two different things - content and English. The speaker usually uses the
language. The errors on articles are common noun as a referent and then later
classified into the errors arising from the uses pronoun to replace it through out the
omission of an article when needed *After discussion. This pronoun should agree with
ceremony in the morning people have _ the plurality of its reference. The findings
variety of competition. *He was attacked by showed that students do not produce
_ shark. From data analysis, it is found that significant errors on this category (3.6%).
the omission of article dominates the errors *When they didn't have enough money to
in this category (70/95). buy drugs they steal them. The probable
Besides omission, some students also reason for this error is the complexity of the
inserted articles in the unnecessary slot. sentence distract student's attention from
*Parents should guide the(ir) children when finding the corresponding noun represented.
they watch the television. *They really have Errors in subject-verb agreement are
to follow the school program(s) which are found in students' writing with the
too much for them. In the other occasion frequency of 26/691 (3,8%). There are two
students chose the inappropriate article. possible reasons for the production of this
*One man which name is Bobby .had a error. Firstly, when the sentences are long
tragedy. and the verb has been preceded by another
The use of preposition is other source of noun, the error is caused by the lack of
errors with the frequency of 12.31%. Those anticipation of the writer on the
errors arise mostly from the confusion of corresponding noun related to that verb.
the selection of appropriate preposition and *The serious disadvantages of television is
the irregularity of uses. This category producing a harmful influence on children.
comprised the omission, insertion and the *Television is one of the media which have
wrong choice of preposition. The errors are been used widely all over the world.
dominated by the wrong selection of Secondly, students are careless when they
preposition (60/87). The wrong choice is, are writing. This happened specifically in
normally, caused by mother tongue writing simple sentences. *That are the
interference. When the students do not main problem of students in Indonesia.
know the exact preposition to use, they use They doesn't like the way their parent(s)
their existing language rules to map up and (treat) them.
shape the intended form. *They are There were 163 out of 691 errors
prohibited in their religion. In this example, concerning the choice of word in students'
students confused the use of oleh and writing comprising the errors in the word
dalam where in the Indonesian translation selection (diction) and the selection of
both are applicable. *Tony painted his wrong morphemes in derivational words or
colour(s) to his instrument. In this sentence equivalent to 23,6%. Some inappropriate
the use of to (pada) is acceptable in diction resulted in the meaning distraction
Indonesian. Some respondents inserted or directly in the part of the readers. *The
omitted the preposition. *Some of United States tried to persuade hardly to all
teenager(s) take drugs for escaping from the delegates accepting it (=strongly). Hardly is
problem. *He explain _ us that every direct translation from Indonesian dengan

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keras/alot, therefore it can be concluded that children, *but it depend on monitoring from
the mother tongue interference causes this parents; wrong form after modal *They will
error *They doesn't like the way their fighting without any reasons, the confusion
parents threat them (=treat). The almost of active and passive form *The fire brigade
similar sounds confuse the learners in was tried hard to extinguish the fire. *They
choosing the appropriate orthographic have been work hard. *We released from
representation of the intended meaning. The Japanese in 1945.
errors caused by the wrong selection of Errors related to the distribution of verb
morphemes in the formation of derivational group occurred seven times. They
words seemed not to distract meaning comprised the confusion of verb+ing and
directly, even though it may produce an verb+s *It showing too much violence.
awkward sentences. *on independent day Please thinking about it. The confusion of
(=ence), *Every aboriginal have some past and present form *The police still
colours (=es). Those errors seemed arise investigated cause of fire. some teenagers
from the lack of understanding of function taken drugs for escaping from their
of different morphemes affixing to the basic problems. Included in this category is the
words in the formation of derivational wrong selection of tenses for nominal
words. sentences *Aids still was a dangerous
From the language corpus collected the illness. *Aids was different with other
writer found only one error on relative illness.
pronouns. This error is caused by the Plurality of nouns is another major
confusion of the which and whose. *One problem for Indonesian Learners. The table
man which name is Bobby had a tragedy. shows that ten percent or 70 of the total
Pro-drop occurred four times. Students errors are on plurality. The common errors
omitted the pronoun either in subject or on plurality of English are the omission of
object position. * Children just absorb what plural markers from intended nouns. Those
they watch without thinking whether is errors may be attributable to the different
suitable or not for them. *If you want to go system of plurality between Indonesian and
to gymnastic, you can go. It is near. There is English where Indonesian only has
near city. Pro-drop is caused by mother quantifiers before nouns without additional
tongue interference. Indonesian is a pro- affixed plural marker to noun. *Children
drop language in terms that it does not need have fewer activity. *Some of teenager and
it-impersonal in sentence constructions. student taken drugs.... *It is very difficult
Four errors are identified on the for them to break their viewing habit.
ordering of the words in sentences. The Mechanics of writing, possessive
misordering of the words may produce pronouns and copula are not a big problem
distraction on communication. Burt (1975) to students. Each was represented by two
classifies this type of error as global error in errors or 1.4% of total errors. The problems
the way it influences the sentence in with mechanics of writing are capitalisation
general. * If parents controlled what are and run-on sentence. For the possessive
their children watching.... *Behind of the students do not use the suitable possessive
apartment has a park. *You need to come pronoun before noun. Two nominal
home at late night. sentences were written without the copula
Twenty-two verbal errors are identified. as a verb-predicative.
They comprise the production of verb
group, the distribution of verb group and E. CONCLUSION
selection of tenses. Errors in the production The study on students’ error show that
of verb group dominated this category. there are six major categories of errors
Word stem is used for word+s in five made by Indonesian students their writing -
occasions: *Television also influence word choice, Verb group, article,

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