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Therefore, Albright effectively creates comparisons and ethos and presents her speech
with certain syntax to convey to women not only in the graduating class, but to women
everywhere that they should have the courage, want, and perseverance to achieve more
comparisons, syntax, and evidence to produce ethos helps her support and strengthen her
message, inspiring women to work towards something they haven't achieved yet.
Revised Conclusion:
Throughout her speech, Albright inspires women to cross the desert of inequality and
obstacles in order to plant a sprout of reform, allowing them to branch out and define their own
lives. Even when women face barriers to charting their own paths and achieving inequality,
women must unite in order to grow the tree of equality and reform society's expectations on
women, leading to society addressing not only women's obstacles, but the obstacles facing all