Creative Writing

Radio Broadcasting Script

Out Cold Illusions

Script Writers

Baltazar, Andelyn

Manaba, Allex William G.

Director

Morada, Edmund Rhei

Sound & Music Editor

Radam, Princess

Casts

Balderama, John Allen as Director Lexter

Baltazar, Andelyn as Eyeglasses women

Briones, Jackielyn as Mother J

Derit, Kimberly as Nurse Lilibeth

Evangelista, Alyssa Jane as Jane Ciego/ Abigail

Manaba, Allex William as Film Crew

Mendoza, Ma. Vinarose as Newscaster

Morada, Edmund Rhei as Carlo/ Joshua

Radam, Princess as Narrator

“Mic! Mic!”

“Damn! You all want to rot here?”

“Fix those cables. And those lights, Gerry. Please, this isn’t a romantic comedy!”

“Enough of this aberrant behavior. It’s almost five in the morning.”

“Boys, double time. Let’s finish this.”

“And you, Noel, disappointment is too proud of a word for you!”

“Thank you, Mister Lexter.”

“Gerry, are we set?”

“Art department, fix the props.”

“What’s taking you bastards so long?”

Lilibeth, the nurse heard those lines while she walked from the seesaw. She started to roam her eyes and
saw different people, audiences who are watching the shoot. She approached the woman near her and
asked.

“Are they filming?”

“Jane Ciego’s the lead. Looks like a horror flick,” the woman on her eyeglasses replied.

“Where is she?” The nurse asked the woman again about Jane Ciego.

“There!” the woman shouted.

“The smoke machines?”

“We’ve been waiting for a decade already for that smoke machine!”

“We need more wind machines!”

“Wake up, morons!”

“Let’s get this over with”

“Miss Jane, will you please sign?” a fangirl asked Jane while holding a pen and magazine where Jane’s
photo was the magazine cover.

“Of course,” Jane said smiling while accepting the pen and the magazine.

The nurse also interacted with other fans to take a picture of Jane.

“Mister Lexter’s blood is boiling,” her assistant, Emma, said.

“Let him be," Jane replied, still smiling, looking at her fans.

Jane told her fans that it was already morning, but her fans replied that it Was okay as long as it is for her.
Jane smiled at them. But upon smiling at the people around her, she noticed a woman who wears a white
nurse uniform, without shoes, and taking her a picture that, the nurse wasn’t able to notice that Jane is
already looking at her. The nurse keeps on clicking her phone taking Jane’s picture even though it’s
already looking at her. She’s taking pictures like Jane is some kind of possession. She takes and takes and
take, until.

“Miss, you want a selfie instead?” Jane asked the nurse. But the nurse keeps on ignoring her and instead,
focuses on taking a picture of her. The flash from her phone reflected Jane’s eyes on janes brown eyes
who still waiting for her answer.

“Miss?” but she gets nothing in reply. Jane looks at the nurse and willing to come for her but Emma grabs
her hand to start filming. She still looked back at the nurse, finding that it only holding her phone
continuously taking her a photo.

“What’s taking you bastards so long?”

After Jane turned her back on her fans, the nurse went home and was currently watching the news on TV.

(At the news)

Actress Jane Ciego was admitted to the emergency room of Asian Doctors Medical Center after an
accident on the set of her new film in Quezon City at 4:30 in the morning. According to the witnesses,
Jane was suspended on a cable rig when a pulley dislodged, causing her to fall 20 feet to the ground. Her
head hit a wooden headboard prop causing more complications and leaving her unconscious.

While the nurse was watching the news on TV and what she was watching was the very actress Jane
Ciego from whom she had come recently where the accident happened and heard about its condition, she
slowly looked at her nurse uniform in the drawer as if for her it was a chance to see Jane Ciego.

“When I was a kid, all I wanted was to be a star. To be famous, to have fans, to have modeling gigs, and
be on the cover of a magazine. “Then I grew up and my dreams also grew bigger. I wanted a big house
for myself, to marry the man of my dreams.”

“I wanted to win acting awards and put them all on display.”

“A fabulous rest house for my mom.”

“I had so many dreams, but now I couldn’t tell which ones are mine. My dreams became their dreams.
Their dreams became mine. I don’t know anymore.

“They all have a piece of my razed dream.”

“They can have it all.”

“Please, it’s all yours.”

Jane is slowly laid down in her bed, all she wanted to do now was to sleep. But as she closed her eyes that
felt as heavy as the skies, she started hearing things, as she felt trepidation in her surroundings. She kept
on turning her head towards the spine-chilling event happening in her. And when she woke up seemingly
out of nowhere, she lay on the bed, husband encompassing her in his arms. She rose to feel weary,
noticing her surroundings, she went forward with her wheelchair seemingly popping out of nowhere for
her to move forward towards the dining table.

“Hey, babe, here. Don’t say I’m not taking care of you huh.” He gently puts down a plate of well-assorted
breakfast in front of his wife.

She replied, “I’m not hungry,” while looking dimmed and weak. “Jane, you need to recover. People are
waiting for you to get better.” His husband, Carlo said.

“Who’s waiting exactly?” Jane asked while softly stunned. “All of us, so come on eat up,” Carlo gently
replied.

“Augh! I can’t taste it.” Looking irritated as she tastes the bitterness on her tongue. “Maybe that’s normal
in your current state, so go ahead,” Carlo said, insisting she eats.

“Ah, well anyways I need to go, can you sign this check please, for the restaurant equipment,” Carlo
asked her wife to sign the check for the equipment needed for the development of his restaurant. He was
asking for money from Jane because he has no work.

“You’re leaving me?” she asked, as she signs the check slip passed on her arms. “Lilibeth’s here she can
take care of you,” Carlo replied, about her wife’s nurse, Lilibeth.

“Who?” confused at who he was talking about.

“She’s your nurse, assigned by the doctor to help you,” he answered. “Well, bye. I got to go now, love
you,” As he leaves kissing her.

After her husband leaves the house, she tried to see through the different things she could do to take her
time in her boring predicament, but when she looked around the house she noticed that the expensive
gadget and TV don’t seem to work which made her very frustrated, she then sees an old photo that shows
the achievement of her career as she grows up to be the actress she is today that reminded her the offer
she was given in the past. She slowly turned her head and began to hear voices in her mind.

“I assure you that this role would be very artistic and heart-stopping.” Director Lexter said. “It’s a
thriller yet very artistic,” he added.

“I’m telling you, Nah, I’m seeing us flying to Cannes,” he said while laughing enthusiastically with a
wide smile, confident at what he’s saying.

Mother J’s replied, “We would very much like that Mr. Lex, don’t we Jane?” she asked, smiling with
exhilaration while Jane’s gazed turned to Mommy J.

“I just want to win an acting award in this film after this project.” She replied, a serious look plastered
on her face.
“Ow! Trust me. I’m telling you I’m sure of it,” Director Lexter confidently said. “My dear, this is a
groundbreaking role for you, since this is the first time you would produce a movie. I will give you the
best role you’ve had in years,” he added, smiling and laughing confidently like he was imagining a good
outcome ahead.

While reminiscing scene about her past, the door suddenly opens through the hallway, a bloodcurdling
sensation filled the air, as she walks through the dark gloomy hallway, hearing only the sound of her
creaking wheelchair and as she moves forward in the dark.

“Ah!” Jane flinched. The nurse suddenly appeared. She stood while leaning on the side of the door. “You
shouldn’t be moving around too much you know,” the nurse said with a straight mysterious look on her
face.

She was shocked by the sudden appearance of Lilibeth, the nurse, and her so-called caretaker. She can be
called crone with tall, being her only good quality, with dirt-like eyes, short bushy hair, and wrinkles all
over her white powdered face.

“A-are you the nurse?” Jane asked, stuttering in a nervous tone. The nurse walks forward. “You’re not
supposed to go around, you need to rest you know?” She said, instead of answering Jane’s question.

The nurse pulls her wheelchair back to the room, curiosity filling her heart. She can’t help but look back
towards the door, feeling of fear and nervousness came to her. She went back in her senses when the
nurse touches her face; a feeling of trepidation once again filled her body.

“The cash was not enough,” her husband talked while sitting in the corner. “Huh?” She replied, still
confused about what was happening.

“The restaurant needs more money, there are just too many expenses, and I-”

Jane interrupts her husband, “It’s alright I’ll give you money.” As if she knew immediately what Carlo
was referring to.

“I just don’t like this house,” she began to tell Carlo how she felt. “Why?” her husband quickly replied
and looked at her.

“There’s just too many corners and l-I… hear things and the nurse is weird and-”. She's stuttering while
telling those things in her husband, Carlo.

“Shhh…” Carlo gently touched her shoulder and consoles her.

Carlo, her husband, suddenly moved forward taking off his tie in his black expensive suit and shirt, and as
he comes closer; he touched her thin rosy lips and went for a kiss, but after a few seconds her eyes and
mind went black and the moment she opened her eyes she’s at the kitchen, sitting on her wheelchair with
her husband.

“I want out of this house! Where is the nurse!?” Jane shouted irritated. Carlo winced at her voice, “Babe?
What’s the problem?” he asked.

“The TV doesn’t work, so does the computer, not to mention there’s no electricity in the house. There’s
no internet. Where are we in the Middle Ages?” irks in her tone are very evident.
“Jane, you need to recover people are waiting for you to get better.”

“Here you go. Don’t say I’m not taking care of you huh-” it was said in a deeper voice.

“Ah!” Jane suddenly screamed in shock.

“What the hell!? Argh! Babe? What’s wrong with you?” the husband asked, angry and in pain.

“Who was that?” Jane asked in a terrified and confused tone.

“I’m sorry,” she quickly said as she accidentally spilled the coffee on herself and her husband.

“Look at what you’ve done. You spilled the coffee and made a mess. Argh. Just sign this. I need
equipment for the restaurant.” Her husband replied with a deeply irritated tone, feeling the burnt area on
his body where the coffee spilled.

As she looks into the check slip and her husband’s eyes, she was terrified and confused at what she saw, a
different persona of a man stood in front of her with clear white skin, bearing a tall demeanor. He was not
her husband or is he? But like before boredom strikes her face, she looks around once more, this time
seeing a script she was meant to play in her movie, but when she closed her eyes, she started hearing
voices in her mind and it was talking about her life, her career, her love, her choices, and the
consequences.

“Nurse! Where are you?” Jane shouted. “Nurse!” she shouted again. The nurse appeared standing in front
of the door. “What? I’m not deaf,” the nurse said in an annoyed voice.

“I have been alluding to you continuously!” Jane replied in an upset tone.

“Give me time to walk, ma’am. Your house is like a castle. Do you think upon one call I can suddenly
rush to meet your demands?” She replied even more frustrated.

“Where have you been?! She violently asked. “I have been fixing some things around the house,”
answered the nurse.

“What kind of nurse are you? You’re barely around on my sight.” Jane responds. “What are we paying
you for?”

The nurse cut her off and swiftly counter,” Barely around? Who do you think cleaned your shirt? And
made you look so natty. Didn’t you spill coffee on yourself earlier?”

“Wait, what?” shocked was plastered on Jane’s face and she quickly looked at her shirt in surprise. “You
think your clothes changed by themselves?” she sarcastically implied.

“Sorry. I just want you to buy me a newspaper,” Jane replied in a lower voice.

The nurse was gone insight. Jane is seen looking at the entrance with lights coming from the door at the
end of the seemingly void and lifeless hallway, her muscles tensing and suddenly her breathing rushed.

“Lilibeth? Are you back?” Jane asked looking and finding around. “Lilibeth?” she called the nurse again,
confirming if the nurse is already back at home.

When she found out that the nurse is not yet back at home, she continuously moves forward in the dark
hallway. Her eyes growing misty, she saw nothing, her pulse beat a hundred to the minute, and
the blood throbbed at her heart to her eerie and nerve-racking situation. And, as she moved forward, a
sudden black and corroded hand grasped her back making her scream of shock, unlike anything she
experiences before.

“Ahhh!” Jane shrieked. The shock was very evident on her face. “Lilibeth!” she tries to call the nurse.

“Will you stop calling me?” The nurse said in a displeased tone. “Where the hell were you?” She
curiously asked.

“I just got back!” Lilibeth responded as she throws the newspaper in Jane's face. “I will report you!” Jane
angrily replied.

“Do you even know who to call?” Asked the nurse in a domineering tone. “The problem with you
celebrities is, you’re used to people doing things for you. “I’m not your nanny,” she adds up as she shakes
her head in denial.

Jane is dumbfounded by what the nurse replied. She just steadily holds the wheels of her wheelchair and
looks at the newspaper thrown at her by the nurse. And as she looks at the pages, she gets frustrated by
not finding any bit of information regarding her situation. She angrily throws the crumpled newspaper.
Jane is once again shown in a room, waking with her husband, sitting in the corner silently looking at her
as she wakes up from her sound sleep. She was immediately interrupted in her beautiful sleep by her
husband, once again kissing her and being physically intimate with each other on the sofa. While being
intimate with each other, she saw another persona in front of her and suddenly flashed in her mind what
she had seen before. It is Joshua, her partner in her film.

“Ahh!” she shrieked, screaming in panic and fright. “Babe?” Joshua asked.

“Who are you!?” Jane asked, confused and frightened by the person in front of her. It is not her husband,
Carlo that she is seeing. “What’s happening?” Joshua replied.

“Who the hell are you!?” Jane asked once more, surprised are still glued to her face. “What?” Joshua
confusedly asked again.

“Who are you?!” Jane once again asked, and throws a clock at Joshua. “What are you doing?! It’s me,
Carlo.” Joshua said, presumably, with a bewildered look on his face. She sees Joshua in front of her but
she hears Carlo’s voice speaking and answering her questions.

“I’m not stupid,” Jane said firmly while clenching her jaw and gritting her teeth. “I swear, I’ll call the
cops! Damn you!” she frantically added.

“Damn you too! I’m Carlo.” He responded angrily while his eyes are blazing with fire. “You’re not my
husband.” Jane promptly said as she continues to see Joshua, her partner in her film, in Carlo’s presence
in front of her.

Jane and Carlo both look confused with each other. Even though Carlo is confused about what is
happening, he explained the things only both of them knew. From the day they met, from how intimate
they are last night, to how they got married, how long they are together to even the slightest scar found in
her body. The confused and extremely shocked Jane can’t help to believe that even though she can hear
Carlo’s voice explaining those things, she still saw Joshua’s existence in front of her which made her
more disoriented. The man in front of her now isn’t like her husband, Carlo she knew, with clear white
skin, small yet wide eyes, glossy lips, and having a tall demeanor that is something she is both familiar
and unfamiliar with.
“I-I…don’t understand,” Jane uttered, crying, with tears flowing in her rosy cheek. “I can’t deal with your
shit this early!” Carlo spats sharply. Jane can still see Joshua’s face in her husband Carlo’s presence.

“You’re sick. Do you understand?!” Carlo yell, resentment is present in his voice. “Damn!” He tousled
his hair aggressively with annoyance and leaves Jane behind.

Again, she was left alone in a seemingly haunted and abandoned house covered with expensive trapped
furniture, she looks through the window to their pool and hears a sound coming from the other room, and
yet again she felt both familiar and unfamiliar with the tone of those noises. She moves her wheelchair
and upon arriving in the other room Jane saw the nurse's cellphone lying on the table. Though, afraid that
the nurse might reach her with her cellphone, Jane had hope and a chance to call her mother and talk.

“Jane?” Her mother spoke on the line. “Mom?” She weakly whispered on the phone while calling her
mom.

“Where are you?” Jane asked her mother. “How are you doing? Are they taking good care of you?” she
asked, so calmly instead answering Jane’s question.

“Mom, I hate it here. Please get me out of here,” Jane said pleadingly.

“Sorry I just-”

She cut her mother off. “Take me away from here, please.”

Little did she know that the nurse already hears that she’s talking to her Mommy J and is walking to her,
grabbing the phone at her.

Jane was startled by the nurse. “Hey, give me the phone,” she shouted. “Give it back!” she shouted again.
“You’ve gone mad,” Nurse said reluctantly.

Jane hurriedly chased after the nurse, but she hadn't caught up yet. She slowly went into the hallway as if
there was a strange aura surrounding it and a frightening feeling. The hallway was dark and at the end of
it there was a door and it seemed to be shining in the dark. Though dim and scared of what she might
discover she slowly began to turn the wheelchair and walk towards the dark hallway. But in the middle of
her going, black hands and scary looks were holding her. Countless hands held her to keep her from
getting out the door. She started screaming and fighting back. But she can’t do anything because there is
too much force of hands restraining her. Her chest heaving from the hold of inexplicable hands holding
her back.

Jane suddenly jerked out of sleep, gasping. Chest panting and heavy breaths from her sleep.

“Why’d you take my phone?” Joshua said suddenly standing up from the chair he was seated in and
tightly holding her arms. “Why did you take it?” Joshua shouted, strongly flooding his voice. “Answer
me!” He roughly screamed at Jane’s face.

her chest is still panting from his hold. “I want to leave this house,” she said weakly under breath,
begging him to get her out of there.

“You’re saying you don’t trust me?” Joshua asked, constantly holding her arms tightly.
Jane was stunned as Joshua held her tightly in his arm. Jane shuddered as if she had a voice heard in her
mind again.

“I want my mother, Carlo,” she said determinedly. “Carlo, please, let me go!” she shouted again.

“You can’t leave because you’re not yet well,” he said, clenching his jaw and gritting his teeth while still
holding her back.

Jane hits Carlo’s hand so hard that she can see the blood in the wound slowly coming out from his arm.
Her hand trembled, throbbed from the pain, and she couldn’t stop shivering in anger.

“What the hell?!” he cursed, pursing his lips, angrily. He clenched his jaw and looked at Jane. His eyes
are boiling and pointing daggers at her.

As Jane speaks she seems to hear another voice in her mind speaking.

“You can’t do this to me.”

“You can’t do this to me.”

“If not for my money, you’ll all be beggars-

“If not for my money, you’ll all be beggars-, “she wasn’t able to finish her words because he slapped her
hard on the face, and she fell from the sofa helplessly, letting his despair for both of them.

Jane started to hear things from her mind continuously. As she started to hear things from her mind, she
slowly crawled in fear.

“You’re being paranoid, Abigail.”

“Everyone in this house puts up with your daily dose of crazy shit, come on!”

“I’m not crazy.” She immediately replied.

“Lilibeth tells me you throw things around,” he said, while Jane’s still on the floor crawling and restless.
“You scream a lot. You even hit yourself with a vase,” he added while sarcastic laughter comes from his
mouth.

“I’m not crazy. You all want to kill me.”

Jane continues to hear things in her mind.

“Ugh, Arrrgh,” she started crawling for her wheelchair, desperately, ignoring the voices in her mind while
feeling difficult to reach her wheelchair.

“The other day, you woke up and couldn’t recognize me. I’m your husband, Joshua.” The voices in her
mind said.

“Stay away from me, I swear, I’ll call the cops.” She replied.

Jane reached the wheelchair. Tired from crawling, she began to cry.
“I’m sorry,” Joshua, her husband said. Her tears started to stream down her face as her husband held her
arm and gently whispered in a soothing voice, “I’m really sorry, okay?” Joshua started to touch her wet
face, tracing her tears from crying using his hand. “I love you,” he said softly and kisses her lips.

“Send her away,” Jane said pertaining to her nurse who’s standing behind them. “Just let her be,” her
husband replied like it was nothing to worry about.

“She’s watching,” she hardly speaking and begging her husband. “Just focus on me,” he said to Jane.

“No,” difficult to say a word.

“Shhh…”

Her grip tightened on the hospital bed. She groans, low and very sensual. It makes her feel different,
something so blissful that it gives her pleasure in an unknown feeling.

While forcing himself to Jane, there was a report on the TV that the police had released a photo of the
nurse who molested an unconscious patient at St. Frederick’s Medical Center last week. According to
staff records, the suspect’s name is Lilibeth Madlangbayan. 28 years old. A registered nurse.

But before the alleged molestation was reported, a father caught up with her. The father opens the door
and turns on the light to illuminate the room, but he finds something else and Lilibeth, also the nurse is
doing a sexual activity on the patient while it is unconsciously lying on a hospital bed. Lilibeth used this
before to other patients.

The nurse removed her ID, nurse cup and threw them in the trash as she went downstairs and headed
straight out of the hospital. While the said father covered her daughter’s naked body because of what the
nurse have done.

When the nurse came out of the hospital, she jumped up and down as if she had caught candy in the game
and raised her two hands as if flying in the air, arms widespread, while slowly removing her white shoes.
She looks crazy about what she’s doing.

Meanwhile, Carlo was in front of the nurse station, he was suddenly surprised to see Jane's mother
coming towards him while holding a CD whose contents were Jane's film. She was angry, irritated, and
rushed at him. Jane's mother finally threw the CD but he quickly dodged it by using the paper bag he was
carrying containing fruits for Jane.

“Did he visit?” Mommy J asked Carlo, in a displeased tone. “Was he around?” she asked one more time.
Mommy J continues to talk in front of Carlo who looks shocked until now from the mother’s attack.

“Stop whatever you’re doing,” mother said with finality in tone. “Mom,” Carlo finally speaks after the
beating.

“I don’t like this, Carlo,” Mommy J said. “We’re just trying something-,” Carlo replied, but he was cut
off by Mommy J.
“I don’t care.” She said, ignoring what Carlo has just said. “We don’t know what’s going on in her mind.
You might be giving her nightmares,” she added still walking over and over to the hospital bench where
Carlo is seated.

“We’re just trying to help her-” Carlo wasn’t able to finish his sentence when she was cut off by the
mother to speak.

“As I said, I don’t care,” Mommy J was quick to say. “I’m so exhausted going back and forth from the
rest house and then I arrive at this,” she said tiredly with the situation.

“Carlo, are you listening?” Mommy J asked while in front of Carlo. “Yes,” Carlo replied.

Mommy J starting to get her things sitting on the bench. “You’re the one who’s always here. But I’m still
Jane’s mother,” she said, holding her things in hand. “Remember that,” she added while walking away.

“Yes Mom,” Carlo lightly replied.

“Don’t you call me Mom,” mother said, greeting her teeth in a thrilling voice, and avoiding people in the
hospital to hear what they are talking about.

“Fine, Aunt,” Carlo replied, nothing to do with the mother. “Not even Aunt, damn it!” mother cursed in a
loud voice.

“I’ll be back, Carlo. If I see that…son of a bitch there'll be hell to pay!” mother J said, about the visit that
happened by Director Lexter. She turned her gaze and annoyingly looks at Carlo, leaving him behind.

“Ah! I get it now,” as if she already got what was going on with her situation. “Are we on the set of a
horror movie?” she asked the nurse who was fixing her food. The nurse just grinned with a malicious
smile.

“If the director shouts “Cut!” will you disappear?” she said smiling sarcastically in front of the nurse. But
Lilibeth just smiled at her and looked at her pocket because someone’s calling at it rings.

“Mister Lexter?” Lilibeth answers the call. “Yeah, she’s here. Just a moment,” and put the phone on the
table in front of Jane.

“Jane? Can you hear me?”

“When will you get better darling?

“Mister Lex!” Jane shouted at the phone.

“We all need you here.”

“We’re almost done editing the movie, and we still have to promote.”

“Mister Lexter! Just cut it already.” Jane said like they are on the set.

“Everyone’s crazy around here.” Jane laughs.

“Jane, please get well.”

“The movie’s a masterpiece. I tell you.” Director Lexter softly said on the line.

“Can you hear me at all, Director?” Jane said, wondering that Director Lexter doesn’t pay attention to
what he’s telling.

“Okay, I’m going.”

Jane couldn't believe that Director Lexter didn't seem to hear her. She took a deep breath and handed the
glass filled with water in front of her. She drank and looked at the nurse wickedly. Jane asked why the
nurse knew Director Lexter, but Jane got no answer from Lilibeth who was standing on her side. Lilibeth
just called her to get her attention to make a fan sign because Lilibeth said she was a super fan. Lilibeth
handed the magazine where Jane’s the magazine cover. Lilibeth dropped a magazine across from Jane.
Reluctantly, Jane grabbed the pentel pen and wrote on the magazine cover of “Son of a bitch” and put a
heart at the end. She looked at the nurse to see her reaction, but to her dismay, Lilibeth still smiled and
was overjoyed at what Jane had done, and without demur, she kissed Jane on the cheek and ran her out of
the hospital room. Jane grossly rubbed her palm where the nurse kissed her.

Abigail on the other hand, though struggling with her condition, she still tried to stand up. She was forced
to reach for the spoons, forks, and knives placed inside the cabinet and in the upper part of the kitchen.
Because she could not stand, she struggled to reach the tools and she eventually fell to the floor. Abigail
was startled by what she saw as she opened her eyes from the blink. Abigail saw that the knife was
stabbed and it was stuck in her thigh. She kept shouting that it had happened.

“Arrrrrghhhhhh! Auuuuugh! Arrrghhhh!” she shouted while struggling in pain, and she can’t look
directly at her wound that blood streaming down, trying to get out from its place.

As Abigail tries to bury the knife in her thigh, she hears laughter at the door. Her eyesight found the nurse
just standing there and seemed happy at what she saw. It let out a daunting laugh that sent shivers to
Abigail's condition.

“HAHAHAHAHA!” nurse crazily laughs at Abigail’s situation. She continues to laugh and rejoice to feel
exhilarated.

“Does it hurt?” nursed asked Abigail like it was an idiot idea, still leaning against the door with a devilish
smile. “If you weren’t so stupid,” she continues speaking as she goes where the other belongings are
placed just opposite her thigh the height where she took it. Unlike Abigail who even tortured herself to
get up from her seat just to reach it.

“See this?” nursed said, holding the knife and putting it back from the drawer below and closing it.

“Ah, you want to kill us? Can you?” she asked while slowly walking to Abigail’s who’s struggling and
scared to stand to sit in her wheelchair. She continued to walk and kicked the things lying on the floor
made earlier by Abigail.

“Madam, for your information,” Lilibeth said while putting her hair to her ears. “It’s up to us who lives
and who dies.” She slowly sat down in front of me, using her decisive eyes and scary voice.
“I convinced your husband, to keep you alive. We still need your money.” The money that she was
talking about is the money that her husband, Carlo collected to buy the restaurant equipment but it is not
for those things. Carlo only fools her. She gradually crawled towards me of that scary and pulled out the
knife buried in my legs.

“Arrrgghhh!” she cried in pain while pulling out the knife. Blood was still dripping from the knife.

“Shhhh,” she whispered in a scary voice, and her breath kissed my ear.

The nurse tries to kiss Abigail, molesting her on the floor while the nurse was on top of her, trying to kiss
her. Abigail was disgusted. She tries to fight back using one hand. She reached the chopstick above her
head, grabbed it, and stabbed it in her ear. She cried in pain, slowly she stands up and leave through the
door, leaving Abigail lying on the floor.

Abigail tries to stand up to sit in her wheelchair. She follows the nurse to the creepy hallway where she
used to come from. She saw the nurse suffering, walking, and wanted to get out of the bright door at the
end of the hallway. She tried to follow the nurse in her wheelchair. But in the middle of the hallway, there
are so many hands. They seem to have lives of their own and are moving. Scary ones. It looks like the
hands of demons are holding her and preventing her from reaching the nurse. Not wanting to lose, using
the carry-on knife from earlier, she cut off the hands that were holding and restraining her. Something is
choking her, touched her hair and tweaked it. She is restrained by the arm and whatnot. But, as Abigail
tries to chase the nurse, the hands gradually come out and in the form of a scary human being. One was
still crawling on the floor to stop Abigail. Abigail tried to move forward, but there seemed to be a force
preventing her wheelchair from getting stuck in his seat. Eager to reach the nurse, Abigail took a deep
breath. She was determined and kept running to her feet. She caught the nurse and because of the
eagerness, she repeatedly stabbed the nurse in various parts of her body until she completely lost
consciousness and they were both bathed in blood from the nurse's body.

Director Lexter had an interview with his directed film.

“In the film, the woman named Abigail is mentally disturbed. Unfortunately, she’s trapped in a haunted
house, while her husband and the nurse are conniving against Abigail.”

“Her soul has been sucked dry.”

“So, there’s a conspiracy?”

“Yes.”

“And the house is haunted?”

“Yes.”

“What do the husband and the nurse plan to do with Jane?”

“Well, they’re after Abigail’s money.”

“That’s complicated.”
“Well…”

Jane started to hear voices from her mind again.

“I just don’t want to complicate things with Mommy J.” She hears Carlo’s voice.

“Shut up.” It is Director Lexter’s voice this time.

“Mister Lexter!” Jane shouted. “I can’t take it anymore!” She shouted again.

“She has to wake up. This damn coma!” She heard Director Lexter say.

“Coma?” she suddenly heard. She was absorbing the voice she heard a while ago and letting those
phrases processed in her mind.

Abigail was stunned by what she heard. She looked to her side and she saw her body lying on the hospital
bed. She spoke to it as if she could be heard on the other side. It was as if she saw her body and woke
herself up.

“Jane?” she asked as she can hear her. “Can you hear me?” she asked again.

“Wake up,” she’s sobbing while she was calling Jane. Tears are streaming down her face. Her eyes are
puffy from crying and her cheeks are swollen. “Wake up already.” She whispered softly and slowly like
she was begging herself to stand up from the hospital bed already.

Jane turned her head on the hallways, straight ahead is the door that seems to be a paradise that shines
with its light. Her eyes are shining from the reflection of the light to the other side of the door. Slowly her
mind goes hire wired and she feels like she’s slowly taking by it. She felt as if she was being absorbed by
the light. Until.

“Ah!” Jane gasped from a coma.

Her gaze dropped to her face again. Her eyes were startled by what she witnessed in front of her. It was
Lilibeth who was on top of her doing nasty things in her body. The nurse was groaning and moaning
while molesting her. Lilibeth stops for a while and pauses. The nurse turned her gaze at Jane, eyes are
wide, and slowly it smiled at her like she doesn’t care that Jane is already awake, instead she slowly
crawled and kissed Jane.

The End.
Theme.

The plot revolves around a former child star who agreed to produce a thriller film aimed at foreign film
festivals such as Cannes. Jane Ciego is a successful actress who produces her films in an attempt to gain
industry respect. Unfortunately, she is involved in an accident that leaves her paralyzed and trapped in a
house filled with strange phenomena, under the care of her unloving husband Carlo and a strange,
obsessive, and cruel nurse named Lilibeth. With the horrors and madness escalating by the day, Jane's
simple dream turns into an endless nightmare, as she slowly descends into a maze of insanity while
trapped in the security of her own home.

Exposition and Setting

1. There are three main characters. Jane, the Nurse, and the Husband.
2. Jane, she’s an actress there but she wakes up with a physical illness because she had an accident in the shoot.
3. She just stayed at his husband’s house, and then the nurse watched over her, the routine is she will wake up then…

Inciting Incident
4. They would kiss her husband in bed, and then eat breakfast; her husband would have her sign something, and then
leave with the nurse.

Rising Action
5. But weird things are happening, like she hears something or she suddenly goes to the hallway because…

Climax
6. She had a sense of eerie feeling then suddenly there were scary hands holding her in the hallway.
7. Then suddenly, she wakes up again then repeats the routine but there is a bit of a change like her husband looks
different.
8. Then she gets annoyed with the nurse because she had bad habits, then she doesn’t let her out of the house, she doesn’t
have a cellphone.
9. She was looking for her mother but nothing. The scene of tenderness in bed is over; it becomes more sexual over time.
10. She was stuck there in that loop.
11. Then, the twist of the ending is that’s why it loops because after she had an accident she went into a coma, so it was all
just a dream.

Falling Action
12. The routine that she dreams of is over; it triggers her brain because the movie she acted as is always played in real life
in the hospital.
13. The routine is a scene from that movie that is played so she hears it and then plays it in his dream.

Resolution
14. Then, the sexual scenes in bed, which are triggered because after putting her movie on the DVD player and sounding in
the background…
15. The nurse puts her on her while she is in a coma and then sexually harasses her. And after that, she wakes up, the nurse
still on top of her when she realizes that it is all just a dream and illusions.