Directions: Read through all of your 5 resources and pick the four main topics/claims

that you want to discuss in your essay. Write those topics in the main topic boxes
numbered 1-4. Then pull details (ethos, pathos, logos) for each of your paragraphs.
Remember to only include pertinent information to your topic.

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Essay topic:Hollow Earth

Thesis: The ‌government‌‌has never been what we

thought, from the beginning they have been hiding
bizarre secrets from the public. Secrets about
places we've never seen that can advance
technology for the better. ‌The‌‌gm ‌wants‌‌to‌‌keep‌‌
us‌‌from‌‌advancing to stay at the top and have
there family lines rule the poor families forever.‌
‌The‌‌government‌‌hasn't‌‌only‌‌hid‌‌this‌‌from‌‌us‌‌they‌
‌are‌‌barley‌‌now‌‌telling‌‌us‌‌UFO's‌‌are‌‌real‌‌and‌‌that‌
‌they‌‌have‌‌been‌‌among‌‌us‌‌for‌ sometime‌‌now,‌‌like‌
‌we‌‌haven't‌‌known‌‌that‌‌already.‌‌They‌‌never‌‌give‌‌us‌
‌a‌‌full‌‌disclosure‌‌on‌‌cases‌‌leaving‌‌us‌‌hanging‌‌and‌
‌wondering‌‌what‌‌really‌‌happened‌‌to‌‌some‌‌people
or any unknown events. ‌that‌‌leaves‌‌us‌‌to‌‌not‌‌be‌
‌able‌‌to‌‌trust‌‌the‌‌government‌‌if‌‌there‌‌not‌‌telling‌‌us‌
‌what's‌‌really‌‌happening‌‌behind‌‌the‌‌scenes.‌‌Last‌
‌but‌‌not‌‌least‌‌the‌‌way‌‌our system is built, it is not
right and is unfair to many. They can put months
and months into other things, secrets of their own,
some of these secrets can drastically change the
world but are hidden for their own selfish needs.

Main topics for each paragraph

Topic 1 Topic 2 Topic 3 Topic 4
Hollow Earth Government Control The Poles Bermuda Triangle

Paragraph 1 Paragraph 2 Paragraph 3 Paragraph 4

Claim 1 Claim 2 Claim 3 Claim 4

There is a Civilization in The Government controls the The north and south poles The bermuda triangle is
our hollow earth poor by organizing the rich to are entrances to the another cover up for an
the top hollow earth entry to the hollow earth
Evidence 1 Evidence 1
When Richard Byrd flew The criminal justice system is
over the poles he claimed prejudiced against the poor
to see hovering crafts and people of color for
made of metal like instance Eric Garner who
material and when landed was killed in New York city
he was informed to say for selling a untaxed
nothing of what he saw cigarette, was choked to
there. death by a police officer even
after saying multiple times
that he couldn't breathe.
Evidence 2 Evidence 2
Our government has been They fake all the stuff on the
in contact with this news about the president
civilization for some time and how they are against
and has used their each trying to compete for
advanced technology for president , they are already
their own needs. at the top regardless. For
Government has been example The food
caught experimenting with corporations all compete
flying saucers in the past against each other and make
as well, nothing new, just ads against each other
people getting smarter. arguing which one is better
but if you do a little bit of
research they all lead back to
a couple of people that are
all working together In a
couple of organizations.
Evidence 3 Evidence 3
There was a meeting with They're not only using ads
a man before his death and commercials to do this,
and in this video he they're also using the news
confirmed that when he and making it seem like we
was with government are all against each other in
officials they had to meet our country and use the
with these beings and it news to put us all against
was his first time he each other when we should
described them as tall all really be against them.
white beings That almost
looked Human and spoke
many languages and
came in different crafts
then what our best one
would be today.( very
Evidence 1
Richard Byrd was the first
to fly over the poles and
claimed to have seen an
entrance to the hollow
earth civilization. He was
later questioned and held
by the government and
also told not to say
anything to anyone about
what he saw and to make
up a different story.
Evidence 2
The government keeps us
From going to the North
and South Poles. There's
only so far you could go
before some areas start to
become restricted, which
is the stuff they don't tell
you about. They usually
tell you that Antarctica
has no restricted areas
and is for human access
which is false. The further
you go the more restricted
the area gets, they are
protecting the entrances.
Evidence 3
The restricted access to
areas only leave us to
believe that they are
hiding something Beyond
The areas that they are
guarding.
Evidence 1
The bermuda triangle has
still yet to be figured out
and has caused mass
disappearances to ships
and even planes that have
never been found…
Evidence 2
Scientists have also made
a theory of their own that
there is a deep deep
unknown trench under the
bermuda triangle which is
where all the boat/plane
crashes went, which is a
huge cover up to ignore
the fact that it's an
entrance far beyond what
we could imagine so they
give us simple news.
Evidence 3
Scientists also say there
is a gravitational pull
under the Bermuda
Triangle, if they're saying
there's a gravitational pull
and they're saying there's
a trench that doesn't
make sense it sounds like
a bunch of cover-ups On
why we can't find any of
the missing crafts that
have gone missing in the
Bermuda Triangle
(another entrance).
advanced)which leads me
to believe that they are
from the inner earth
obviously they are not
going to look like us if
they're on the different
side.