The heat of the day The chill of the night And the mosquitoes that followed. Such was the time and They bound for a kingdom.
The thin weary line of carriers
With tattered dorty rags to cover their backs; The battered bulky chests That kepts on falling off their shaven heads. Their tempers high and hot, The fierce sun scorching With it rose their spirits With its fall their hopes As each day sweated their body dry and Flies clung in clumps to their sweat-scented backs Such was the march And the hot season just breaking.
Each day a weary pony dropped
Left for the vultures on the plains; Each afternoon a human skeleton collapsed; Left for the Masai on the plains. But the march trudged on Its khaki leader in front He the spirit that inspired He the light of hope. Then came the afternoon of a hungry march A hot and hungry march it was; The Nile and the Nyanza Lay like two twins Azure across the green countryside The march leapt on chaunting Like young gazelles to a water-hole. Hearts beat faster Loada felt lighter As cool water lapt their soft, sore feet. No more burning heat of the day But song, laughter and dance.
The village looks on behind banana groves,
Children peer behind reed fences; Such was the welcome No singing women to chant a welcome Or drums to greet the white ambassador; Only a few silent nods from aged faces And one rumbling drum rolls To summon Mutesa’s court to parley For the country was not sure
The gate of reeds is flung open
There is silence But only a moment’s silence The tall black king steps forward, He towers over the thin beard of the white man Then grabbing his lean white hand Manages to whisper “Mtu Mweupe Karibu” White man you are welcome. The gate of polished reed closes behind them And the west is let in. Literary appreciation of the poem titled Rainbow. a) Theme: This poem describes the determination and perseverance that Stanley and his party experienced while traveling to meet King Mutesa. Then after arriving in the Mutesa’s Kingdom and its values and party were received coldly but politely. b) Background/Setting: The setting is on the winding journey undertaken by Stanley and his party. Then through the village before finally meet with King Mutesa in a kingdom. This historical event is set around the 19th century which made David Rubadiri write this poem in poetic language. c) Form and Structure: The poem has 62 lines altogether and is divided into six unequal stanzas. Though this poem has no rhyme scheme, it has measure rhythmic movement: The heat of the day The chill of the night
Their tempers high and hot
The sun fierce and scorching d) Language and Style: i. The poet maintains a definitive style: uses a narrative in a form, and the journey it describes is picturesquely presented using words that evoke the hardship experience: weary, fierce, scorching, sweated, hungry. ii. The images are sharp: inclemency of weather, poverty, extreme hardship. iii. Simile : Lay like two twins Like young gazelles to a water-hole. iv. Metaphor : He the spirit that inspired He the light of hope. v. Eupomism : Each day a weary pony dropped Each afternoon a human skeleton collapsed vi. Alliteration: “heat” / “night” , “battered” / “bulky” , “clung” / “clumps” , “two / “twins” , “greet” the “white” , “tattered” / “dirty” , “sore” / “soft” , “hungry” / “hyenas” , “behind”/ “banana” . vii. Repetiion: The heat of the day The heat of the night With it rose their spirits With its fall their hopes He the spirit that inspired He the light of hope.