WRITING TASK 2:

Many teachers and parents are concerning that children

these days easily lose their concentration.
What are the reasons/ causes for this and what can be done
to improve the situation?
Reasons ~ causes ~ factors ~ problems
Solutions ~ measures ~ keys/ answers methods- ways forward ~ to tackle/solve ~ take action

In recent years, there are an increasing number of teachers and parents who are
worried about the lost of focusing of their children. This essay will illustrate the
main factors for this problem and highlight some solutions.
First and foremost, it is apparent that distracting factors are playing an essential
role in interrupting the concentration of children. To clarify, those things are
sports, games and social media. With the development of sciences and
technologies, children are now interacting more with smart devices such as mobile
phone, laptop and tablet; therefore, they easily get distracted by those instead of
studying. To prevent this causes, more restriction need to be applied on the youth
at home as well as school. In detail, parents should limit children’s time for
entertainment, instead of that, they should teach their them some necessary skills
like survival and communication. Along with that, teachers need to hold more
extracurricular activities such as picnics, music show and sport celebrations.
Next, improper sleep and nutrition are also important problems that affect to the
focusing of the young. Obviously, when overloading with school work, students
may hardly get enough rest. Therefore, they can lose their concentration with ease.
Moreover, inappropriate meals can lead to underdeveloped brain, which also
another reason why the youth are not pay attention to their work. Take my younger
sister as an example, she are working very hard to pass the enrollment exams to
highschool. However, her timetable are inappropriate and she cannot balance
between homework and daily life. Therefore, she starts fell asleep at school and not
focuses on lessons. Luckily, there are some key factors that will solve this issue
known as life habits improving. Children must create a proper schedule so that the
workload will be developed. Not only that, they should to move forward and stop
procrastination as well as have a strong mindset.
In conclusion, although there are some problems that the pioneers concern about
the concentration lost of their children, there is a range of solutions that needs
taking into consideration.