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Advanced Lesson 7 - Writing (Student)
Advanced Lesson 7 - Writing (Student)
Task 1: Maps
Direction Language
right to the right of something: on the right of something: nằm trong khu
nằm ngoài khu vực đích vực đichs
Verb Noun
tear down
flatten
remove
Verb Noun
expand
open/ set up
d. Language that describes replacement
1 Khu vườn ở góc phía trên bên trái của khu vực đã bị san phẳng để nhường chỗ cho
một phòng ngủ
A garden in the top-left hand corner of the area was made way for a bedroom.
(flattened)
2 Bãi đỗ xe ở phía Đông Nam của toà nhà đã được mở rộng để đáp ứng được nhiều xe
hơn.
3 Thư viện ở phía Tây Bắc của trường đại học đã được thay thế bằng một phòng máy
tính mới và được chuyển tới phía Nam, cạnh ký túc xá.
The library in the north-west of the university was replaced by/with a new
computer lab and moved to the south, next to the dormitory. (was destroyed to make
way for)
4 Một quán cà phê mới đã được xây dựng trên nền đất ban đầu của cửa hàng hải sản,
cái mà được chuyển đến phía Bắc của thị trấn, đối diện bảo tàng.
A new coffee shop was built in the original site of the old seafood store, which was
moved to the north of the town, opposite to the museum.
5 Rừng cây đã bị san phẳng để nhường chỗ cho một loạt những cơ sở vật chất mới, đó
là một trung tâm thể dục, một bệnh viện và một trung tâm mua sắm.
The forests were demolished to make for a range of new facilities, which were a
fitness centre, a hospital and a supermarket.
II. Essay structure
The maps below show a beachfront area in Australia in 1950 and today.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make
comparisons where relevant.
a. Introduction
The maps give information about the way in which A underwent/ has
undergone/ is planned to undergo
The pictures detail
transformations/ changes
The images explain
the transformations/ changes that
The diagrams illustrate took place/ have taken place/ are
planned to take place
The illustrations demonstrate
the transformations/ changes that
… …
were/ have been/ are planned to be
made to A
The maps give information about the way in which a beachfront area in Australia
has undergone transformations since 1950.
b. Overview
Overall, it is clear that there were several changes in with the most significant/
the layout of the building, noticeable (changes) being
D and E
there have been several
changes in the layout of the
town
Overall, it is clear that there were several changes in the layout of the area with the
most significant being the development of new restaurant and surf club and the
extension of the main road.
c. Body
12h – north
3h – east
6h – south
9h – west
cách 1
B1: car park – located at the end of the road
Along the road, from west to the east, play ground - dinning tables – pavillon
In 1950, there was a main road running from the city center to this area and a car park
was located at the end of the road.
Along/Down the road from west to east, there was a playground, some dinning tables
and a pavilion. In the west of the beach lay a 25m swimming pool while at the other
side, there was a similar pool and a lighthouse.
B2:
Remain unchanged
Since then, the main road has been extended southward, leading to the lighthouse.
Besides, the playground has been destroyed to make room for a new car park. In
addition, the construction of a restaurant and a surf club has been completed next to
the 25m swimming pool in the west of the beach, which has been expanded to become
a 50m one. Meanwhile, another surf club has been also built next to the other
swimming pool, which has remained unchanged over the period shown, along with the
dining tables, the pavilion and the lighthouse.
Forward: về phía trước
Eastward: về phía đông
A new structure: Acknowledgement and refutation of the counterclaim
I. Structure
Read the body paragraph above and determine the function of each sentence.
Some people argue that governments should not allocate more national budgets to
local film industries. They claim that such financial support is a waste of money as it
can hardly make profits. At first glance, this argument seems reasonable; however,
what it fails to take into consideration is that it is just rational in case an industry
cannot create successful films. Every country has talented film-makers and all that
they need is an opportunity to prove themselves. If governments cover the costs
related to producing high-quality films, those film-makers also have the ability to
create masterpieces as their counterparts in Hollywood do. Such masterpieces can
lead to an increase in film sales, employment in the film industry, and even tourist
numbers that generate profits for a country.
Acknowledgement of the counterclaim
Body 1:
Body 2:
Students must stay at school until 18. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Students
Must
Introduction:
Conclusion:
2. Body
On the one hand, I am of the opinion that high school education should not be made
compulsory.
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