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Date: 3/2/2022 Teacher Name: Adam Daughton & Lauren Shipley Class: Science 7
Grade Level: 7th Unit Name/Topic: Organ Lesson Number: Length: 45 minutes
Systems/Cardiovascular
Academic Content Standard(s): 7.LS.4: Research and describe the functions and relationships between various cell types,
tissues, and organs in the immune system, circulatory system and digestive system of the human body.
Academic Content Language (content vocabulary, discourse, syntax): heart, lungs, red blood cells, cardiovascular system,
artery, vein, capillary, oxygenated/deoxygenated, left/right ventricles and atria.
Where will this lesson take place? General Education Classroom Resource Room Other:
Lesson Agenda with Discipline-Specific Learning Activities- reference your content methods text
Time: Teacher Will Be (Planned Supports tied to Students Will Be (Learning Tasks connect Rationale: (Based on
objectives & build in checks for understanding) to prior knowledge & assets): Research/theory)
Taping arrows to the floor to designate the direction of Wondering what the arrows might be for as they If students ask what we are
Before blood flow. walk into the room. They might connect it to the doing, I can be coy and make
lesson (1:15) slide on the board which reads “Circulation Walk.” them more curious.
Explaining the basic premise of the activity, and briefly Thinking about what role they might want to take,
1:20-1:28 modeling each main role (body cell, red blood cell, and lung
cell.)
and visualizing what the activity might look like.
Narrating the Circulation Walk, and giving advice when pile- Performing the circulation walk, and devising ways One of the lads in the front
ups appear. This includes describing the names of the four to make their role work effectively. suggested background music,
quarters of the heart. and while I don’t want to
make a big distraction, I
Heartbeat sound is playing:
1:28-1:40 https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OMqkv5RIPjk
figured some appropriate
background noise could be
nice. Secondly, I take this
opportunity to use
experiential education.
Saying that the students will discuss with their table what Discussing what they did during the walk with the This gives the students a
1:40-1:43 they did, and that afterwards, they will write about what
they did on their laptops.
rest of their table. If they wish, they may call one of
the teachers over to answer questions.
break, and gives them time to
start unpacking in a risk-free
environment.
Cleaning up the arrows and tokens from the floor; drawing Writing what different roles were doing at different Similar messages are okay
a picture of a heart on the board showing the ventricles and places on Jamboard. Each student will write four here! There aren’t a lot of
atria and where they go. messages. options, and even if one
1:43-1:58 student is paraphrasing
another student, it just
means they agree with that
student.
After picking an accurate description from the Jamboard, I As a group, directing me where to stand, what to Here, we take away a bit of
will have students walk me through it. do, and how to move. anonymity, while still giving
students the safety net of
other students talking at the
1:58-2:05 same time. Students shouting
out directions to me worked
well in the “lunar eclipse
story,” so maybe it will work
here.
The evaluative criterion specified was met, but it would have been exceeded greatly had all students given 2
observations as requested; many erringly wrote only 1. This might have been due to insufficient clarity on my part, or
that students were still cooling down from the chaotic activity. I believe I could not have managed a class that size
(~30 kids) doing that activity without the help of Ms. Shipley. Although the post-it notes were nice, if they were
electronic, as originally intended, students would be able to refer to them later, and I, the teacher, would be able to
connect student observations more directly to future class sessions, or even give them questions where students
could find the answer on the jamboard.
PLANNING COMMENTARY
Respond to the prompts below (no more than 7 single-spaced pages, including prompts) by typing your responses within the
brackets. Do not delete or alter the prompts. Pages exceeding the maximum will not be scored.
1. Central Focus
a. Describe the focus and purpose of this lesson within the context of the unit.
[The purpose of the lesson was to serve as an introduction to the cardiovascular system.
Therefore, I opted to perform an overview of the oxygen and carbon dioxide carrying job of red
blood cells, and how different parts of the body fit into that scheme. From the perspective of the
5 Es of science education, this was a fitting “engagement” to introduce the concept, since it was
easily accessible, novel, and fun.]
b. Given the focus and purpose of the lesson describe how the standards and learning
objectives are connected
[While the researching part of the standard was not addressed in this particular lesson (though
an expanded version of this lesson might be able to include research) the “functions and
relationships between various cell types in the circulatory system” were the primary focus of this
lesson, what with the interactions of red blood cells, body cells, the heart, and the lungs. The
learning objective given in the initial lesson plan was not entirely represented in the lesson, but
that was a result of the student objectives being too specific and not equivalent to the overall
goal. A more refined learning objective can be seen in the revised lesson plan, and it was
represented in the lesson thus: students acting as various cells within the circulatory system
performed analogous activities to the cells they were modeling, and thus became familiar with
the role of that type of cell. They also experienced the different types of cells in the circulatory
system working together.]
2. Knowledge of Students to Inform Teaching
For each of the prompts below (2a–b), describe what you know about your students with
respect to the focus/purpose of this lesson.
a. Prior academic learning and prerequisite skills related to the lesson—Cite evidence of
what students know, what they can do, and what they are still learning to do.
[Relating to specific content knowledge, this was meant to be an introduction to the circulatory
system. Previously in my time working with this 7th grade class, they had studied animal and
plant cells, and made their own models, so I assumed students had – at least – a passing
familiarity with what cells are. Any knowledge students carried into the lesson regarding the
circulatory system was a bonus, but not necessary. In addition to introducing students to the
circulatory system, this lesson also contained a formative assessment that evaluated prior
knowledge, so it was important for me to make a lesson that did not explicitly require any prior
knowledge outside of knowing what a cell is. The premise was that – since students would be
soon learning more about the circulatory system, I would try to base the lesson in things they
were already familiar with (cells, lungs, the heart, etc.) so that they could connect with their prior
knowledge via the lesson.]
b. Personal, cultural, and community assets related to the lesson—What do you know
about your students’ everyday experiences, cultural and language backgrounds
and practices, and interests?
[For this lesson, I tried to make it culturally-neutral in my presentation to allow for students to
flavor it in their responses. (This was – at least from my perspective – a success.) All I had
gathered about my students at the time was various pieces of conversation – about shoes and
videogames, mostly – I overheard, and some elements that would exclude much of the class if
they were used as explanatory tools. (When I did a Fortnite lesson for the 6th graders, I very
noticeably instantly lost about a quarter of the class the moment Fortnite showed up on the
board. I would like to avoid this in the future.)]
3. Supporting Students’ Learning
a. How did your teacher’s understanding of the students’ prior academic learning and
personal, cultural, and community assets guided the choice or adaptation of learning
tasks and materials. Be explicit about the connections between the learning tasks and
students’ prior academic learning, their assets, and research/theory.
[My consultation of the teacher was somewhat limited; I mostly just asked her if the ideas for the
lesson I had were appropriate. However, my teacher and I had discussed how this was to be an
introductory lesson to the circulatory system, and the teacher had provided me with sheet of
what she usually covers for this lesson, so I remained within that scope such that I only
addressed material that previous years’ precedents had shown students would be ready for.]
b. Describe and justify why the instructional strategies and planned supports are
appropriate for the whole class, individuals, and/or groups of students with specific
learning needs. Reference your content methods text.
Consider the variety of learners in your class who may require different strategies/support
(e.g., students with IEPs or 504 plans, English language learners, struggling readers,
underperforming students or those with gaps in academic knowledge, and/or gifted
students).
[There is a certain ideal ratio of novelty and familiarity for material. It is possible to increase the
leniency of this ratio by manipulating the presentation of the material to create novelty without
removing familiarity. This is what I attempted to do here. Due to the immense size of this
classroom, there is a considerable range of students as far as prior knowledge of the circulatory
system is concerned, and so something novel and interesting without being out of reach to
some students might be familiar and boring for others. Therefore, I must present material that is
in reach (sufficiently familiar) of all students, and do so in a way that it is sufficiently novel to all
students. This allows students who already have some grasp of the topic to revise or add to
their prior knowledge, while other students can begin creating their schema from scratch.]
c. Describe common errors or misunderstandings students tend to have related to the
content focused on in this lesson and how the teacher worked to address them.
[There are so many terms to keep straight in the circulatory system that it is easy to lose track. I
believe that introducing all the parts of a system simultaneously aggravates this further, as it
muddles the distinctions between each component in function and name. For instance, in this
lesson, students learn about the heart’s ventricles, but we do not discuss the atria. Typically,
these are introduced together, alongside a mnemonic or the like, but I would rather the
distinction be semantic rather than purely visual. By temporally separating the parts of the heart,
students can more easily compartmentalize their functions (though this may impede students’
connections from one part to the other.)]
4. Supporting Development Through Language
As you respond to prompts 4a–d, consider the range of students’ language assets and
needs—what do students already know, what are they struggling with, and/or what is new to
them?
a. Language Function (Bloom’s Taxonomy level of Objective) Below are some
examples of language functions that may have been used in the lesson plan’s
objective/outcome. Identify the objectives/outcomes in your lesson plan under
study.
Consider the variety of learners in your class who may require different strategies/support
(e.g., students with IEPs or 504 plans, English language learners, struggling readers,
underperforming students or those with gaps in academic knowledge, and/or gifted
students).
[By relaxing the constraints on what answers were acceptable (ie. any observations at all), I was
able to get useful answers out of everyone in the class. However, there is no reason I could not
have had quick one-on-ones with some of the students, or for students to have given their
observations in the form of a labelled diagram, or some other medium I had not considered.]
Lesson Plan Evaluation Rubric Criteria to Use for the Lesson Plan Under Study
Planning for Understandings: How does the lesson plan build students’ abilities to construct
meaning?
There are significant Some standards, objectives, Plans for instruction Plans for instruction
content inaccuracies that and learning tasks are include activities that include student-focused
will lead to student visible in the planning clearly support strategies/activities that
misunderstandings. process. Plans for standards/objectives build on each other to
OR instruction support student attainment. Activities build support learning with clear
Standards, objectives, and learning of facts and on each other to support alignment to objectives.
learning tasks and materials procedures. learning.
are not aligned with each AND
other. Consideration of AND AND Activities are selected that
developmental need is Activities are selected that Activities are selected that meet several
absent meet at least 1 meet at least 2 developmental needs.
developmental need. developmental needs.
Planning to Support Varied Student Learning Needs: How does the teacher use knowledge of
his/her/their students to target support for students?
There is no evidence of Planned supports are Planned supports are tied Planned supports are tied
planned supports. loosely to learning objectives to learning objectives
OR tied to learning AND AND
Teacher does not attend to objectives. UDL attention is applied to UDL attention is applied to
ANY INSTRUCTIONAL the the characteristics of the
requirements in IEPs and characteristics of the class as a whole and
504 plans. class as a whole. individuals with specific
needs
Using Knowledge of Students to Inform Teaching and Learning: How does the teacher use
knowledge of his/her/their students to justify instructional planning?
Candidate’s justification of Teachers learning tasks The teacher can justify The teacher justifies why
learning tasks is either Pay limited attention to why learning tasks (or their learning tasks (or their
missing students’ adaptations) are adaptations) are
OR • prior academic learning appropriate using appropriate using examples
represents a OR examples of students’ of students’
deficit view of students and • personal, cultural, or • prior academic • prior academic learning
their backgrounds. community assets. learning AND
OR • personal, cultural, or
• personal, cultural, or community assets as
community assets. connected to research
The connection to research and/or theory. Reference
and/or theory are your content methods
superficial.
text
Identifying and Supporting Academic Language Demands: How does the teacher support and
develop the use of content-specific vocabulary and academic language?
Academic language isn’t Teacher supports provide Teacher supports provide Teacher supports provide
addressed. opportunities primarily for opportunities for students explicit opportunities for
student to use limited to use academic students to use academic
academic vocabulary in a vocabulary and to vocabulary and to
general way. \ demonstrate its use at basic demonstrate its use at
language functions higher language functions.
appropriate to the task.
Planning Assessments to Monitor and Support Student Learning: How are the informal and formal
assessments selected or designed to monitor students’ progress toward the standards/objectives?
The teacher doesn’t The teacher provides least The teacher provides at The teacher provides
monitor students’ progress one assessment least one assessment multiple opportunities
or the assessment is to monitor students’ to monitor students’ and forms of assessments
misaligned to progress that is loosely progress that is clearly to monitor students’
objectives/outcomes stated aligned to aligned to progress that are strongly
in the plan. objectives/outcomes stated objectives/outcomes stated and clearly aligned to
in the plan. in the plan. objectives/outcomes stated
in the plan.
Date: Teacher Name: Adam Daughton & Lauren Shipley Class: Science 7
Grade Level: 7th Unit Name/Topic: Organ Lesson Number: Length: 45 minutes
Systems/Cardiovascular
Academic Content Standard(s): 7.LS.4: Research and describe the functions and relationships between various cell types,
tissues, and organs in the immune system, circulatory system and digestive system of the human body.
Academic Content Language (content vocabulary, discourse, syntax): circulation, capillary, red blood cell, O2, CO2, heart,
lungs, body cells
Where will this lesson take place? General Education Classroom Resource Room Other:
Lesson Agenda with Discipline-Specific Learning Activities- reference your content methods text
Time: Teacher Will Be (Planned Supports tied to Students Will Be (Learning Tasks connect Rationale: (Based on
objectives & build in checks for understanding) to prior knowledge & assets): Research/theory)
Taping arrows to the floor to designate the direction of Wondering what the arrows might be for as they If students ask what we are
Before blood flow. walk into the room. They might connect it to the doing, I can be coy and make
lesson (1:15) slide on the board which reads “Circulation Walk.” them more curious.
Explaining the basic premise of the activity, and briefly Thinking about what role they might want to take,
1:20-1:28 modeling each main role (body cell, red blood cell, and lung
cell.)
and visualizing what the activity might look like.
Narrating the Circulation Walk, and giving advice when pile- Performing the circulation walk, and devising ways One of the lads in the front
ups appear. This includes describing the names of the four to make their role work effectively. suggested background music,
quarters of the heart. and while I don’t want to
make a big distraction, I
Heartbeat sound is playing:
1:28-1:40 https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OMqkv5RIPjk
figured some appropriate
background noise could be
nice. Secondly, I take this
opportunity to use
experiential education.
Saying that the students will discuss with their table what Discussing what they did during the walk with the This gives the students a
1:40-1:43 they did, and that afterwards, they will write about what
they did on their laptops.
rest of their table. If they wish, they may call one of
the teachers over to answer questions.
break, and gives them time to
start unpacking in a risk-free
environment.
Cleaning up the arrows and tokens from the floor; drawing Writing what different roles were doing at different Similar messages are okay
a picture of a heart on the board showing the ventricles and places on Jamboard. Each student will write four here! There aren’t a lot of
atria and where they go. messages. options, and even if one
1:43-1:58 student is paraphrasing
another student, it just
means they agree with that
student.
After picking an accurate description from the Jamboard, I As a group, directing me where to stand, what to Here, we take away a bit of
will have students walk me through it. do, and how to move. anonymity, while still giving
students the safety net of
other students talking at the
1:58-2:05 same time. Students shouting
out directions to me worked
well in the “lunar eclipse
story,” so maybe it will work
here.