Ben Tedder and Ewan Prouse

Who’s there?

by
Bright Light Productions
 Act 1
Scene 1

Intro song - Kanye west – wolves

Voice over – Sonny Shipp
Location – uphill

Boy doing paper round Opens scene and on

front of newspaper it says that there is a
serial killer in the area.

Then pans behind to a shot of Phil and Tim

talking while walking back home from a day
out.

Phil
Did you see that clip of will smith
slapping that guy at the Oscars, that was
mental.

Tim
Yeah, that another guy took the slap well
to be fair laughed it off.

Phil
It looked fake at first then he started
shouting at him it was so funny to see him
pissed.
 Tim
Yeah, how’s your job going then how long
have you been at maccies for then? Close to
a year now surely, you still haven’t given
me any discounts.

Phil
Yeah, but it's awful there, of course the
pays good but it’s just an awful job its
completely put me off McDonalds.

Tim
Oh really? Don’t tell me about the stuff
that happens there I still love maccies
Haha.

Phil
Well no shit, look at you lad

Tim
Shut up, haven’t you seen? I’ve got abs.

Phil
Sureeeeeee, if abs stands for absolutely
bulging stomach anyway ain’t this your
road.
 Tim
Yeah that’s the one, you at college
tomorrow?

Phil
Yeah, it’s going to be so dead, you
actually going to be in this time? Haha,
not a chance your coming in. I do not know
how your parents let you do it.

Tim
No I promise I will unless I die or
something like that, the college say I have
to be in or I'll get kicked off the course.
Anyway, see you tomorrow.

Phil
Yeah have a good one lad.

Both Tim and Phil walk in different

directions

Cut to Phil walking on his own, pulls out

his phone, appears to be typing.
 Tim
(screams)

Phil looks up from his phone

Phil turns around shocked, starts running

towards Tim

*Phil looks over to where he heard the

screams and see’s Tim on the ground,
bleeding. With the killer’s back towards
Phil*

Phil
*Shouts worriedly* Tim?

*Killer walks away behind a wall and

vanishes*

*Phil runs towards Tim to see if he’s okay*

Phil
Tim no!

Tim lies on the floor, isn’t moving

 Phil cries out in shock after checking
Tim’s heart rate and pulse.

Phil
No, no, no! Wake up Tim Please! Please I
cannot deal with this.

Screen fades to black

Scene 2

Location – TV Studio A108

Cuts to news report of the news

In a news studio

News anchor is alone talking to camera with

music in the background.

News Anchor

Some Shocking Breaking News! A 16-year-old

boy has mysteriously died in the Weston
Super Mare area. Local residents recall
hearing a scream but don’t recall seeing
anyone near the crime scene at the time of
the scream. If you know any information on
this crime please call 101 and use the
reference number 2491. In other news, local
 celebrity Sonny Uploads hits another
milestone!

Scene 3
Location – Uphill Park
A FEW MONTHS LATER DISPLAYED ON SCREEN

Depressing music plays

Phil is sat in the park alone, sad emotion
shown visibly on his face.
Punches Park bench in anger

Phil
How did this even happen? This isn’t my
fault, right? What happened back there, did
he just collapse, or did someone murder
him?

Phil has a flashback to the event.

Phil

He couldn’t of just died, someone has to of

done it! You know what I'm going to ask
him!

Scene 4
 Location – Uphill Hill

Dramatic shot of Phil walks up the hill

with dramatic music in the background.

The sound of Tim screaming/ shouting is

playing as well as Phil goes up the hill.

Phil arrives at church / graveyard

Kneeling down next to grave

Phil

Ok I know you won’t respond, as you

physically cannot Haha. But what happened,
I'm not a religious but I'm going to do
this to find out the truth.

Camera zooms closer to Phil who is perched

next to a gravestone.

Phil

To whoever is out there, why did you do

this, he literally did nothing wrong to you
and you just end his life.
And do you know what is even worse, you got
away with it.
 No one knows even a single piece of
information about you and that just annoys
me as no one can do anything about it.
You have ruined lives! You took a boy away
from loving parents and they cannot do
anything about it.

The camera then pans away and in the last

shot the killer is stood behind Phil
overhearing the conversation with a knife
in hand.

The killer dressed in all black puts his

hand on Phil

Phil
(Screaming) AHHHHHHHHH

THE END