Peer Reviewed : Norika Hendriana - 14619815

C. PEER REVIEW
FAIRY REALM CASTLE

Once upon a time, there was a castle in the middle of a dense forest. The castle's name is
Fairy Realm Castle. An old fairy lived in that castle named Hela. She is the queen of fairy realm
castle. Hela can change into anything she wants. She is the only one of her kind, all of dark
fairies are dead because of humans doing. Humans always envy to the dark fairy, when the
human’s life is miserable but not with the dark fairy. Dark fairies life is always prosperous and
humans hate that. So, humans killed them all with the burning iron. Hela survived because she is
the strongest of her kind and she has magical powers. Feeling sad and guilty because she cannot
protect her kind from humans, Hela builds a castle in the middle of the forest hidden away from
humans. Then, she told all of the fairy creatures to lives in her castle to protect all of them. The
castle locations is very hard to find because the castle had magical powers in purpose to live in
peace. Many kinds of creatures lives in that castle. For example, Sunny Bloom, Magic Tree,
Noctua Owl, Shiny Grasshopper, etc. She would fly about all day long in the form of Noctua
Owl to keep watching around the castle and forest. At night she became an old woman.
The castle has magical powers to protect all of the fairies. If any young man came within
hundred yards of that castle, he would get fixed there, and be unable to move. If any woman
came within that distance she would change into a bird. Magic trees will confusing humans who
came to the forest. The forest surrounding the castle also protected by Hela. If humans can
passed all of the confusing ways to the castle, Hela will came to them and cursed them for their
fault. Hela would do anything to protect the castle from danger. Hela always thinks that every
humans are bad, since when dark fairies get killed by humans. She’s still cannot accept what
humans doing to her kind. Hela don’t want to revenge, but humans are greedy. Humans will take
everything from her to their purpose, to get rich even in bad ways.
Near the forest there lived a wood-cutter named Francis. He had a beautiful daughter
Champa by name. A young shepherd named Champak also lived there. They were together since
childhood. Francis always told her daughter a story of scary forest. People always heard that
story from they who’s trying to enter the forest and come home in freaking out situations.
Champa’s feeling curious, she couldn’t believe that story. She always wants to prove is that story
true or not.
One day, Champak and Champa went out for a walk in the wood. They were tired, they
sat outside the forest near the castle. They saw a strange forest that they never seen before, they
were curious. Then, they walked in to the forest. When Hela’s focus distracted, they can passed
all of the confusing ways in the forest and find a shiny lake. Feeling stunned to the shiny lake
they come near to the lake and Champa steal water from there. Then, Champa saw the sunny
bloom changed colors every minute and she liked it. She also took the sunny bloom. Even
Champak knows that, but he didn’t reminds her that they cannot steal anything from there. Hela
just realized and feel that someone steal something from the forest. Feeling angry, Hela came to
them immediately and cursed Champa into a nightingale.
Champak panic, he is begging to Hela to revoke the curse. But, Hela won’t do that. That
was pure of Champa’s fault and Champak didn’t remind her that she made a mistake. Hela send
them back home and said to Champak to never comeback or step in near the forest again. Feeling
regret because seeing Champa changed into a bird, Champak don’t know what he’s going to say
to her father. With a heavy heart, Champak told Francis about the incident that day. Francis
shocked, sad, and didn’t know what he’s going to say. His only daughter changed into a bird,
Francis would do anything to saves his only daughter. Francis has a plan, come to the forest and
ask to Hela what is the solution of that problem. Because Hela upset there was a human steal
something in her kingdom area, Hela commands the magic tree to makes an extra confusing way
to humans who step in the forest. Because Francis is getting old, he is not as strong as Champa or
Champak, and Hela made extra protection to the forest. Many times Francis try hard to enter the
forest, he failed, and Hela knows that. Feeling pity to him, Hela comes to him. Francis ask to
Hela, what can he do to make amends Champa’s mistake. At first, Hela said there is no way out
from the curse and she sends Francis home. But after seeing how hard Francis efforts to enter the
forest to saves his daughter, Hela feels very pity to him. Finally, Hela told him how to break the
curse. Francis should ask bring the potion that Hela asks. To make the potion, Francis and
Champak should cooked elderberry with a wild wolves milk.
Hela knows that it’s hard to milking wild wolves. Even it’s hard to milking wild wolves,
but they successfully get it and as quick as possible make a potion for Champa. Hela shocked
that they successfully makes the potion. Then, Hela ask them to bring Champa to the forest with
them. When they arrived, Hela come to them and break the curse while drinking the potion to
Champa. Soon, Champa changed into a human again. Francis very happy that his effort is
successful and seeing his daughter again. They feel guilty and thankful to Hela and promise they
will never steal anything from the forest again. Hela forgive them and sends them home.