Assignment Week 15

Presented by: Heder Martinez

Code: 10886482

Group: COM121-1601-S3

Tutor: Leyda Alvarez

Open and Distance National University

San Marcos, Sucre

May 2022
Argumentative essay about the benefits of major areas of concern in the draft
essay during revising and editing.

To begin with, the essay is a type of prose text that explores, analyzes, interprets, or
evaluates a topic. It is considered a literary genre included within the didactic genre.
Therefore, we must look carefully at what are the benefits of making a draft to write a
good essay, and what we should do during its review and editing. However, many times
we lack the necessary interest when doing an essay and we put aside what is really useful
to us, since it is of great help and brings us many benefits to do a correct revision and
edition of said essay in order to transmit what we want.

In this way, by ordering ideas, we will write a preliminary project; this will define
additional topics for discussion. We must constantly develop ideas appropriately, which
also means structuring sentences and then paragraphs logically. If our point of view is that
happiness has any effect on the body, we will have to argue step by step. The draft is done
after doing the research; we can use a template to help us write it, but it is not necessary
and depends on the individual. In this way, we may have to write several before we feel
satisfied enough with it, so we can't be discouraged if the draft is not as good as the final
writing. Some people prefer to write their drafts as quickly as possible, writing what
comes to mind and correcting the document later. This way of doing it allows the ideas to
flow. Others prefer to get their sentences and words perfect the first time, and polish their
documents as they go. Likewise, we will write down our ideas; the supporting paragraphs
in the body of the document should support it. We will write full sentences under each
new supporting paragraph heading. On the other hand, we will use and cite our research,
references, and statistics whenever we can to strengthen our argument. Additionally, we
will need to add this information to our references page at the end of your document.
Likewise, we must be sure to bring closure to the discussion or argument, but we cannot
summarize everything that has already been discussed in the document. A conclusion
should be about the same length as your introductory paragraph, or slightly shorter. Also,
allow some time to pass between the first draft and the edition, so that we can read it in a
new light. Drafts must be reviewed and revised; this is why they are called drafts or
sketches. So, look out for spelling errors, punctuation errors, broken sentences, and
irregular transitions between paragraphs, irrelevant information, and anything else that is
confusing. Let's compare the length of our document to the instructions we've been given,
to make sure we're on the right track with page count or word count. However, you have
to mark the changes in the first draft, so you know what to do next time.

To conclude, it is of the utmost importance to always keep these indications in mind to

carry out a good essay; since it helps us to improve in the writing and editing of this, so
that we can understand it and draw the attention of the reader. In this way, we will have
many benefits when it comes to doing it, if we take into account all the necessary
guidelines required to carry out a test correctly and thus have the necessary results.
References

(Bailey Stephen, 2011). Third edition. Toronto, Canada: Taylor & Francis. ISBN: 0-203-
83165-9.