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News Article: LNU vaccinates 464 students, staff on second vax rollout

As I've completed reading the article, my conclusion that its strength is in establishing a
topic that is current. The inclusion of statistics, which provided detailed numbers on how many
students, staff, and faculty members had had their vaccine shot, confirms the article's entire
context. I also noticed that they used the 5 w's, which is why it is not as difficult to read. It is not
overly wide or narrow, and the way the ideas are presented is excellent, it just focuses on the
essential theme and excludes any irrelevant information. However, if I were to evaluate its flaws,
I would say that the material isn't well ordered, the content should be well organized to avoid
misunderstanding, and it should be succinct to minimize redundancy.

2. News Article: LNU lass tops January 2022 LET

The article's strength is that the author used credible sources for the article that was
published, this is strength because the context has a foundation and the material originated from
a reliable source. However, if we're talking about its flaws, it's not well-organized, also the
material isn't well-presented and elaborated, it should be apparent. To improve the article, the
author should know how to organize the information that is needed on the page in a systematic
manner, and it should be succinct and clear. One of the most important things to remember in
this post is to organize your thoughts.

3. News Article: LNU President, Dr. Evelyn B. Aguirre, delivered her message in the 5th
National Conference on Poverty Alleviation and Sustainable Development (#PovCon2021)
Wednesday, October 27.

After reading the article, I said to myself, "This is a solid example of newsworthiness and
follows news writing rules." I have nothing to comment about the title because the writer follows
significant patterns such as excellent precision in writing, avoiding new language and making no
judgements, and also being mindful of good adjective usage, which always makes leading
fascinating. Have a sufficient amount of data and information. In general, this news piece is quite
good.

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