NAME : Ruwindya Dwi Maharani

NIM : 2001373
Class : PKn2020A
Date : November 19th 2020

Commented by :
Name : Nurul Hanifah
NIM : 2000899
Class : PKN-1A

My name is Ruwindya. I'm from Batam, Riau Islands. I am a student from

an Indonesian education university. Here I will tell you what you like when studying
online and what you don't like.
The positive impact is that technology is getting more advanced with the
latest learning technology and can zoom and goolge meet anywhere. I think this
pandemic will completely change education. Most of the things that I thought were
impossible have now proven possible.The pandemic has made it harder to meet
people, classes have moved online. We now prefer to stare at other people on our
phones for hours on end. Since we held classes through online media, some of my
friends have had difficulties.
Such as an unstable connection that makes them not focus on learning and
the limited quota they can buy.Normal classes can be difficult, but having friends
makes them easier to organize and reduces stress. The immediate and permanent
presence of COVID-19 will transform education in the future. We saw that we
needed to be able to adapt online learning for all kinds of reasons and situations.
Dikomentari [NH1]: Menurut saya pada pengantar kurang
dijelaskan lebih banyak mengenai keadaan atau kondisi yang
terjadi. Pada pengantar ini dapat ditambahkan kondisi yang
menyebabkan kelas daring dijalankan atau latar belakang
pembelajaran daring.
Lalu dalam thesis statement belum dijelaskan apa yang
disuka atau tidak disuka dari pembelajaran daring.
Dikomentari [NH2]: Body paragraph ini dalam menjelaskan
thesis statement sudah baik dan argument telah didukung
oleh fakta.
Dikomentari [NH3]: Kalimat ini dapat masuk ke dalam
dampak positif
Dikomentari [NH4]: Menurut saya pada body paragraph ini
kurang menambahkan fakta untuk mendukung argument.

of online learning gives us negative and positive impacts.I thought it would

be interesting to see how this school year looks, but I think that in the end we have
so many new experiences that will prepare us for something we never prepared
before, In the future, I think we will be more flexible, we will be more mindful.
open and we will be more careful and aware of things, and I think and hopefully we
are. can do face-to-face lectures as soon as possible, immediately go to campus and
meet lecturers, lecturers and friends to do learning. Dikomentari [NH5]: Menurut saya pada paragraph
kesimpulan ini sudah baik.