The image represents the amount of householders in owned vs rented living places in England

and Wales from 1918 to 2011.

The percentage of rented accommodations has almost always been decreasing through the
measured time, which a nice new. In total, it has passed from 77% to 36% in 93 years.

At the start of the chart, in 1918, the percentage of rented accommodations was huge, ^ 77%,
which is pretty bad.

Then, this percentage started to get lower really fast. In 1939, the amount of people that lived
in their own house increased to 32%, almost the double, in relative terms. On the other hand,
^ the next decade, between 1939 and 1953, the percentage of rented houses got stuck, which
doesn’t make a lot of sense looking at the general tendency of the chart.

After that, the increase has been always positive until 2011, with an average of 5/6 % each
year. Instead, between 2001 and 2011, there has been the first decreasement in the last
century. Also, it has been enormous, a 5%.

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