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spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019.
Given are the line charts reporting the percentages of three electrical devices and the number
Overall, along with the substantial increase in the percentage of electrical gadgets, time taken
were not available, and only 30% as well as 40% of families possesing washing machines and
reduced to roughly 25 hours by 1960. This was because over two third of families had
washing machines and refrigerators. Noticeably, 90% was the figure for vacuum cleaners.
From 1960 to 2019, these noticeable changes could no longer be seen. By 2019, people
merely spent somewhere in the vicinity of 10 hours doing housework. The percentage for
vacuum cleaners steadily rose prior to plateauing at 100% by 2019. Meanwhile, the figure for
washing machines fluctuated around 70%, and only refrigerators witnessed a dramatic
● Overall: People tended to use labor-saving devices more and spent less time on doing
household chores (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: all electrical appliances
became more popular, in particular refrigerators and vacuum cleaners/The total time
spent doing housework has also declined steadily and dramatically in the last one
hundred years) >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng động từ "decline" tiếng
anh
● Body 1: Viết về biểu đồ 1: chia theo từng loại device để mô tả cho dễ nhé:
○ Washing machine:
This figure steadily rose to 70% over the next 40 years before slightly
dropping by 5% in 1980.
■ From 1980 to 2019, the rate for houses equipped with a washer
○ Vacuum cleaner:
■ From 1920 to 2000, this figure steadily rose to 100% and remained
stable over the next 19 years. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn PHÂN
○ Refrigerator:
■ After 60 years, this device was installed in every household and this
○ In 1920, the number of hours people spent on doing household chores per
○ This figure saw a gradual drop to 15 hours in 1980 and remained stable over
the next 20 years. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Mô tả số liệu IELTS
Writing Task 1