Ex1: Email

Dear Alex,
How have you been recently? I hope you are well.
I’m glad to hear that we will work in pair in this project and I am sure that when
we’re one team, we’ll do it better than ever before.
.....
I know that we don’t have anymuch time to design our powerpoint
presentations. But, I think I’m not affordable(từ này nghĩa là “có thể chi trả”,
không hợp nghĩa với văn cảnh) available to do the work with you the next day
because I have to look after my baby sister. I’m so sorry about that. Could we
postpone it till tuesday?.
From my point of views, the college library is the most suitable place for our
discussion.because It is quiet enough. Further more (viết liền thành 1 từ chứ k
tách ra), It has a wide variety kind of books for us to look up and I believe we
will find out a lot of great idea for the presentations. You can go to the library
with me, can’t you?
I like to present in front of classmate our class in the afternoon than in the
morning. The reasons is that we will have more time to complete powerpoint
and practice talking presenting before appearing giving the presentation to in
the class.
Please write soon and tell me your opinion.
Your friend
Linh
Nhận xét:
E bị thiếu luận điểm 1 về việc chọn topic gì.
Việc e sử dụng từ mới và các cách diễn đạt đa dạng là một điểm cộng tuy nhiên
cần lưu ý về nghĩa của từ, nếu e chưa chắc chắn về nghĩa thì k nên dùng kẻo bị
sai ví dụ như từ “affordable”

Ex2: Artical
Going shopping – Amazing or Tedious activity?
Many people love shopping and I’m not excepted an exception. Every weekend,
I go shopping at Aeon mall, which is the biggest shopping center retail in my
location, with my friend or my family and it always makes me (+adj) fell relaxed
after a week of hard working. A huge supermarket also has anything everything
I can think of such as a wide variety (variety không đi kèm với N không đếm
được nha e) kind of food goods, usual and specular (từ này không có trong từ
điển) special clothes or a lot of essential things…furthermore, the prices of all of
all items are fixed price are fixedthat mean ,so it’s convenient to compare and
buy something new. I really hate bargaining!
On the other hand, something the price of some products in the shopping
center is more expensive than other store stores, so I had have to pay more
money and sometime I overspend. In addition, Some people said that they
wasted too much time to walk around in the center and finally they can’t
couldn’t find out something fit to themwhat they need. ThatThis is why they fell
think that shopping is very boring!
It seem to me that, shopping center centers need to have more and more
discount program for customer (phải dùng N số nhiều nha e) customers.
Beside (sai chính tả) Besides, I think they should set up online sale sales channel
channels and offer free delivery, which is useful for person people who always
flood in their work are always loaded with work. By that way, they can attract
more people than ever before.
That is all of my felling about shopping. How about you? Leave your comment
below if you had other opinion. (câu này không thể sử dụng trong bài viết
article được e. tự nhiên lại kêu ng đọc để lại bình luận bên dưới là sao e???)
Nhận xét:
Ở đoạn 3, Khi e nói về một cái gì đó chung chung, tổng quát thì nên dùng N số
nhiều. Ví dụ như “shopping centers” , “customers”, “channels”, “people”….
CHú ý các lỗi sai chính tả. Từ cảm nhận,cảm giác là “feel” , “feeling” chứ không
phải là “fell”, “felling” nha e