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This view holds the merit of … This ____holds the demerit of…
The benefit that this argument holds is that… A shortcoming in this idea is ….
Before we get into specifics, though, let’s look at some basic terms for this section:
synonyms for “advantages” and “disadvantages”:
Pros/cons
Benefits/drawbacks
Positives/negatives
Outweigh
Prevail over
Overshadow
Far exceed
Surpass
disadvantages/drawbacks/demerits/downsides/negative aspects).
Example
These days, as streaming services like Netflix and Amazon prime have allowed people
to watch new movies in their homes immediately, cinema attendance has dropp ed. The
popularity of streaming services has a number of clear benefits, but it also has some
drawbacks.
One major advantage of streaming films in the home is that it removes barriers between
customers and the films. Couples with children do not need to fi nd babysitters to enjoy
new cinema. Another benefit of streaming services is that, in many cases, the price of
new films is already included in the monthly subscription cost. This means that more
people are likely to watch the film at home, even if they we re not interested enough to
pay money directly to see it in the theatre.
On balance, there are both benefits and drawbacks to the recent rise in streaming services.
The effects this trend has are primarily economic (on both individual and societal levels)
and artistic.