Topic:

Social media has a negative influence on our life.

Do you agree or disagree?

Brainstorm Area:
reduce the time for real interaction with people
share the good things in your life
communicating with friends is not limited by time and place
easier access to information
may make people addicted to social media
make your attention not focused enough
personal information may be disclosed

Essay Outline

1. Introduction
Background (Introduce the topic)
Now, social media has become an essential part of our daily lives.We
spend a lot of time on social media every day, which helps us
communicate more easily, get information faster, and make more
friends.
State your position
Disagree
2. Body Paragraph 1
Topic sentence 1
Communication more easier
Supporting evidence 1
Not limited by time and distance
Messages can be sent at any time
3. Body Paragraph 2
Topic sentence 2
Easier access to information
Supporting evidence 2
we can find the information we want directly
The information obtained is more comprehensive
4. Body Paragraph 3
Topic sentence 3
Meet more friends
Supporting evidence 3
We can find people who have the same interests as us.
 5. Rebuttal
Topic Sentence 4 (Counterargument)
We can find people who have the same interests as us.
Supporting evidence 4 (Rebuttal)
However, due to computer intrusion, the vulnerability of the website
leads to the privacy of individuals being compromised
6. Conclusion
Summary
Social media has many positive aspects in our lives including
communication more easier ,easier access to information, meet
more friends.
Restate your position
Disagree social media has a positive influence on our life