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As a literary major, I am confident that I have a good writing ability to convey content and as

well as attract and propagate effectively. Since I'm currently a content writer for The Solaris
Project and also used to write scripts for some programs. I think I can afford to make an
article more interesting. In addition, during 10th grade until now, because of participating in
many activities, my teamwork ability is also at a good level.

Rewrite:
As a major in literature, I am confident that I can successfully captivate readers and spread
ideas through writing. I used to develop scripts for various applications and currently work
as content writer for The Solaris Project. Making an article more intriguing is something I
believe I can afford. Additionally, as I took part in several activities from the 10th grade
onward, my ability to collaborate with others is also at a decent level.

It is recommended that you provide detailed evidence and explain your weaknesses
furthermore. I am a shy person when using social networks. My facebook wall barely has
any posts about me that I post myself. However, I also know the obligation when becoming
a member of a club or any activity, I need to seed posts, comments to promote interaction
so I always take it. And lately I'm also realizing that I should share my feeling on the internet
or some people instead of keeping fro myself. Therefore, now I can up a story or two on my
face page about a special event of the day, for example

Rewrite:
I am a modest individual, therefore I avoid utilizing social media. I seldom update anything
related to my own world on my Facebook timeline . However, I also understand that joining
a club or participating in any activity comes with a responsibility; I should seed articles and
comments to promote interaction, therefore I always accept it. And now, I have come to the
realization that rather than keeping my feelings to myself, I should express them to others
or on the internet. I may now post a narrative or two about a noteworthy incident from the
day, for instance, on my face page.

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