Written Task: 

Evaluate the application letter attached. Revise and construct

it according to the structure, content, and language that were discussed

Carla Jaime

3/9/2019
To: Benj Lawas
Mind Museum

Dear Ms, Benj,

I have been to the museum countless times and I have seen different sets on display. Because of my love
for science, I have mastered and have been in awe with the displays. With my experience in tutoring, I
have come to appreciate the inquisitive nature of children and would be glad to serve the museum as a
Demonstrator/Tour Guide. I am able to explain concepts and theories in a way that is suitable to my
audience.

As a graduate of physics degree with four years of experience in tutoring, I feel that being a
Demonstrator/Tour Guide at Mind Museum is a perfect match for me.

During my years as a tutor, I was able to instill a love for science among students and was able to raise
their average grades by 5 points. As an undergraduate student myself, I was able to be consistent in
being a Dean’s List Awardee starting my second year.

A Demonstrator/Tour Guide needs to be energetic and sociable. At the same time, this role entails
keeping an eye on young customers who may be too eager to explore and may unintentionally get lost
or misuse the displays. My background in science and teaching young learners will certainly be an asset
to your company.

I would be more than willing to discuss with you my skills and experience in more detail. Thank you for
your consideration.

Regards,

Carla Jaime