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# Toefl Essay # Technology has

made the world a better place to
live…
English as a Second Language
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Bug_Aonz Aug '10

Good evening, Kitosdad,

I would like to ask for your feedback again for this toefl
essay and please let me know if there are any things
needed to be improved.

Have a good day.

Thanks in advance

Do you agree or disagree with the following

statement? Technology has made the world a better
place to live. Use specific reasons and examples to
support your statement.

Nowadays, it is undeniable that technology becomes a

part of our lives. Technology has a considerable impact
on many aspects of our lives, changes the way we live,
or even dramatically changes the world. Furthermore, it
makes our life easier in many ways and makes our world
to be a better place to live. It helps increase food and
agricultural productivity, helps connect every part of the
world together, and helps improve our living and health
quality.

Technology helps increase food productivity. It helps

improve the agricultural methods so that we can harvest
more rice, crop, etc. As the world population is getting
bigger, food productivity and starvation is one of the
most important concerns, especially for people living in
remote areas. Nevertheless, with the help of technology,
we will have enough food for everyone. Technology not
only helps increase the productivity, but it also helps
increase the variety of foods and makes some kind of
fruits and vegetables available on specific seasons to be
available all year. Furthermore, we can preserve foods
or leftovers for another day in freezers or refrigerators.
Therefore, we can cook only once and preserve them for
many days.

Furthermore, the communication and information

technology really helps connect the world together.
Nowadays, many parents may have to work far from
their children or their children may study in other city or
country. Each of family members could stay in touch by
talking via cell phone regardless of the distance between
them. Although they are far from each other, they can
share problems, share happiness, and express their
affections. These will help build up relationships
between family members.

Last but not least, with the advance of the transportation

technology, we can easily go to remote places and the
faraway places where we have never been before with
very less time. We will have a chance to go traveling to
many other places which will broaden our experiences
and extend our perspectives. Regarding the business
aspect, transportation could help facilitate merchandise
distribution and deliver goods faster. Furthermore,
consuming products, medicines are available and easily
accessible even in remote areas. As a result, both
sellers and buyers are happy because sellers can sell
more products to many places, and buyers or
consumers can access every kind of products
regardless of the place they live in. Consequently, the
living and health quality will be extremely improved with
the help of technology.

Technology helps improve our world in many aspects. It

helps provide enough foods for people from every part of
the world, helps connect the world together, and help
increase our living and health quality. There are still
many other advantages and examples why technology
plays a vital role in changing our world and we will
strongly agree that technology really changes the world
to be a better and friendlier place for us forever.

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Kitosdad Aug '10

Good evening, Kitosdad,

I would like to ask for your feedback again for this toefl
essay and please let me know if there are any things
needed to be improved.

Have a good day.

Thanks in advance

Do you agree or disagree with the following

statement? Technology has made the world a better
place to live. Use specific reasons and examples to
support your statement.

Nowadays, it is undeniable that technology HAS become

a part of our lives. Technology has HAD a considerable
impact on many aspects of our lives, FOR IT HAS
changeD the way IN WHICH we live, or even MORE
dramatically, changeD the world. Furthermore, it makes
our life easier in many ways and makes our world to be
a better place to live. It helps increase food and
agricultural productivity, helps connect every part of the
world together, and helps improve our living and health
quality.

Technology helps increase food productivity. It helps

improve the agricultural methods so that we can harvest
more rice, cropS, etc. As the world population is getting
bigger, food productivity and starvation is one of the
most important concerns, especially for people living in
remote areas. Nevertheless, with the help of technology,
we will have enough food for everyone. Technology not
only helps increase the productivity, but it also helps
increase the variety of foods and makes some kind of
fruits and vegetables available ONLY on specific
seasons, to NOW be available all year. Furthermore, we
can preserve foods or leftovers for another day in
freezers or refrigerators. Therefore, we NEED cook only
once and preserve them for many days.

Furthermore, the communication and information

technology really helps connect the world together.
Nowadays, many parents may have to work far from
their children or their children may study in other citIES
or countrIES. Each of THE family members could stay in
touch by talking via cell phone, regardless of the
distance between them. Although they are far from each
other, they can share problems, share happiness, and
express their affections. These will help build up
relationships between family members.

Last but not least, with the advance of the transportation

technology, we can easily go to remote places and TO
the faraway places where we have never been before IN
less time. We NOW have a chance to go traveling to
many other places which will broaden our experiences
and extend our perspectives. Regarding the business
aspect, transportation could help facilitate merchandise
distribution and THE deliverY OF goods faster.
Furthermore, consumER products, SUCH ASmedicines
are available and easily accessible even in remote
areas. As a result, both sellers and buyers are happy
because sellers can sell more products to many places,
and buyers or consumers can access every kind of
products, regardless of WHERE they live. Consequently,
the living and health quality will be extremely improved
with the help of technology.

Technology helps improve our world in many aspects. It

helps provide enough foods for people IN every part of
the world, helps connect the world together, and helpS
IN increasING our living and health quality. There are
still many other advantages and examples why
technology plays a vital role in changing our world, and
we will strongly agree that technology really changes the
world to be a better and friendlier place for us forever.
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Good work Bug. You are certainly improving now. This
was very good.

Kitos. 8.5/10

Kitosdad Aug '10

“For” is purely a natural continuation of the text. Had

there been a full stop after lives, then I wouldn’t have
used it.

“THE” is a definite article in English. It is used before a

specific place, thing or person. It can also be found
before nouns, common or proper.

I don’t think crop is countable. I think rice is countable.

Kitosdad Aug '10

“For” is purely a natural continuation of the text. Had

there been a full stop after lives, then I wouldn’t have
used it.

“THE” is a definite article in English. It is used before a

specific place, thing or person. It can also be found
before nouns, common or proper.

I don’t think crop is countable. I think rice is countable.

Bug_Aonz Aug '10

Kitosdad:

“For” is purely a natural continuation of the text. Had

there been a full stop after lives, then I wouldn’t have
used it.

“THE” is a definite article in English. It is used before

a specific place, thing or person. It can also be found
before nouns, common or proper.

I don’t think crop is countable. I think rice is

countable.

#You mean you use ‘for’ as a conjunction in this

sentence, right?
As mentioned in the Longman dictionary

for2 conjunction for2 S2 W1 formal used

to introduce the reason for something [=
because]: I cannot tell whether she is
old or young, for I have never seen her.
He found it increasingly difficult to
read, for his eyesight was beginning to
fail.

#I look up both ‘rice’ and ‘crop’ in the Longman

dictionary

rice noun rice /raûs/ [uncountable] 1DF a

food that consists of small white or
brown grains that you boil in water until
they become soft enough to eat [↪
risotto, pilau]: a tasty sauce served
with rice or pasta a plate of brown rice
Serve with plain boiled rice. a few
grains of rice 2HBPTAC the plant that
produces rice: Rice is the main crop
grown in the area. rice fields

crop1 noun crop1 W3 /krãp $ krä:p/

[countable] 1TAC a plant such as wheat,
rice, or fruit that is grown by farmers
and used as food [↪ GM]: The main crops
were oats and barley. crop production
crops grown for market ➔ cash crop[/code]

Kitosdad Aug '10

Yes, it is used as a conjunction.

Well, if it’s in a dictionary it is sure to be right.

“Waiter, there are several/ FOUR/SIX/ grains of rice on

this fork!” - Countable?

“The farmer is gathering in his crops.” - Countable?" ( I

don’t think so.)

Many things can be both :- Potatoes when mashed are

uncountable, but when served whole are countable.

“Would you like SOME mashed potato?”

“How MANY boiled potatoes would you like?”

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