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3B Johnson Khalyse Nature's Choice in Organisms

3B Johnson Khalyse Nature's Choice in

Organisms
by Khalyse Johnson

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3B Johnson Khalyse Nature's Choice in

Organisms

Nature's Choice in Organisms

Khalyse Johnson
Northwest Jackson IB Middle School
3B IB MYP Sciences 8 AY
Ms. S Evans
October 17, 2022

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Nature's Choice in Organisms

Many people can't decide whether or not man evolved from another organism
or has existed independently, despite many examples of different species
evolving from the same early embryonic stage, with similar homologous
features, genetic variation, and Charles Darwin's theory. Evolution and genetic
variation play very big roles in how man evolved. As said before, the early
embryonic stage of different species demonstrates how man and animal
evolved from another organism. Though they're different species, they all look
very similar in the early development stages. But this may not be enough
information to make a sound conclusion. So this essay will give a better insight
into whether or not man evolved from another organism or has existed
independently.
To start, evolution is the change in an organism over time producing a different
phenotype; a change in inheritable traits of a population over successive
generations. In the case of man, it is macroevolution; that takes place over a
long period. So this can mean the species of man could have evolved over a
long period. In this case, there needs to be a species that has the same fossil
features as humans. The cat, whale, and bat all have the same homologous
structures as humans. This is where speciation comes into play. Speciation is
the formation of a new, distinct species during the process of evolution.
Humans could have been the new species that evolved during the process of
evolution. The cat, whale, bat, and man, must have had a common ancestor
that somehow caused the speciation of each of these species.
To add to that, for the speciation of the common ancestor to affect the cat,
whale, bat, and man to eventually evolve into a different species, there needs
to be some type of variation. In this case, it's genetic variation. Genetic

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variation is a term used to describe the variation in the Deoxyribonucleic acid

(DNA) sequence in each of our genomes. The genetic variation caused one of
the common ancestors' phenotypes to look different. This causes later
generations' phenotypes to look different too.
On the other hand, a naturalist named Charles Darwin created a theory for
Evolution and Speciation. In this theory, he stated natural selection and its
principles. Natural Selection is the process by which populations of organisms
with variations compete better, live longer, and reproduce more than the
organisms without the variation. Natural selection explains how populations
change as their environment changes. Over time the earth's environment
changed due to global warming. Species change over time to fit their
environmental changes. The three principles of natural selection state most
characteristics are inherited, more offspring are produced than can survive,
and offspring with more favorable characteristics will survive and have more
offspring than those individuals with less favorable traits. So genetic variation
allowed natural selection to create speciation for the evolving population of the
common ancestors' species to branch off into different species.
To sum this up, there are many factors and examples that man evolved from
another organism. Natural selection and its principles, genetic variation,
speciation, and evolution all play very important into how man evolved from
another organism. As well as many examples of different species evolving from
the same early embryonic stage, with similar homologous features, genetic
variation, and Charles Darwin's theory. So, therefore, humans and these
animals all have a common ancestor which means they all evolved from a
different organisms. This evidence creates a sound conclusion that man
evolved from a different organism.

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Reference Page
Source 1: https://www.yourgenome.org/facts/what-is-genetic-variation/
Source 2:
https://bio.libretexts.org/Bookshelves/Introductory_and_General_Biology/Boo
k%3A_General_Biology_(Boundless)/18%3A_Evolution_and_the_Origin_of_Sp
ecies/18.01%3A_Understanding_Evolution/18.1B%3A_Charles_Darwin_and_N
atural_Selection#:~:text=Natural%20selection%20is%20an%20inevitable,ind
ividuals%20with%20less%20favorable%20traits
Source 3: McGraw-Hill Evolution and Speciation Ch. 3 Lesson 2, Pages 90-99
Source 4: Evolution and Speciation Quick Reference Guide

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