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CAHAYALinguaVol. 01, No.

01, September 2012 BambangYudiCahyono

Helping EFL Learners to Develop Ideas in Writing Using the “Cubing” Technique

BambangYudiCahyono
State University of Malang, East Java
yudic2000@yahoo.com

Abstract

The article presents one of the techniques in the teaching of writing, namely “cubing.” As the name may
suggest, the technique is based on the physical appearance of idea of a cube that has six sides. The six stages
in cubing represents the six sides of the cube. The six sides or perspectives of cubing are: Describe, Compare,
Associate, Analyze, Apply, and Argue. This article is also based on the author’s exprience in applying the cubing
technique in the teaching of both paragraph and essay writing. It turns out that most of the students were
able to apply the stages quite well. From the experience in applying the technique, it is expected that EFL
learners, especially those at the tertiary level, and English teachers can use the technique to write their own
ideas. It is also expected that this the technique can be shared so that more EFL learners or English teachers
can be helped to develop ideas into written products.

Keywords:Cubing, cubing technique, the teaching of writing, EFL learners, English teachers

INTRODUCTION
In the teaching of writing for learners of 2011), I investigated how the process of writing
English as a Foreign Language (EFL learners) in in the classroom could be integrated with online
Indonesia, teachers can use various techniques writing. Thus, I assigned the students to do a
to help the learners write. For example, the EFL series of writing process varying from planning,
learners can be helped to write by using drafting, revising, to editing in the classroom and
interactive activities such as those proposed by asked them to publish their work in their “Album
Ariyanti (2010) and Taselin (2010). Ariyanti Application” in Facebook. The results show that
applied the Think-Pair-Share (TPS) technique to the students’ final products in writing improved
develop the students’ writing ability in terms of and they apreciated very much the use of the
generic structures and language features. The online social network. A more extensive review
result of her research shows that the students of various other techniques in the teaching of
made progress in both aspects of writing in their writing and their efficacy in improving the EFL
descriptive texts following the implementation of learners’ ability in writing can be seen in a book
the TPS technique. Meanwhile, Taselin proposed that I wrote in collaboration with a colleague
the BACK and DRAW technique in teaching (see Cahyono & Widiati, 2011). In this paper, in
writing. This technique represents an elaborated particular, I will present cubing, a technique in
way of writing proses through Brainstorming, writing which has been introduced in the
Attaching, Correcting, Keeping, Developing, literature but rarely applied in the teaching of
Revising, Arranging, and “Wonderful,” with its writing to Indonesian learners of EFL.
acronym BACK and DRAW.
EFL learners may also be helped to write
by using techniques based on blended learning of THEORETICAL BASIS
the writing process and application of
Information and Communication Technology. For Cubing is a technique in writing whose
example, Agustin (2011) conducted action application was inspired by the shape of a cube
research in her secondary school classroom to which has six sides. This technique was
solve the students’ problem in writing narrative introduced by Elizabeth and Gregory Cowan in
texts. She taught writing using animation stories their textbook entitled “Writing” (Scott, n.d.). It
taken from Bookbox collection published in requires someone to see an object or a topic
YouTube, a popular video-based website. She from six different perspectives. Thus, this
found out that the students could improve their technique is “a way in approaching a topic, or to
ability in writing narrative texts after being combine methods of understanding and treating
exposed to a series of animation stories. In a a topic” (Ferris & Hedgcock, 1998: 106). To apply
research study that I conducted (see Cahyono,

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cubing is to write according to the following six connects the frame of the heart and a
stages: hook to hold keys (Analyze). Yes, I never
Describe it. want to bring the keychain everywhere I
Compare it. go, or have the intention to use it to
Associate it. hold keys (Apply). Instead, I put is a
Analyze it. display item and I guess, if you see it,
Apply it. you’ll leave your heart in the keychain
Argue (for or against it). (Argue for).
The “six-stage” formula can be used as a
basis to write a paragraph or and essay. “It”
represents an object, a person, a place, or an In the following, a paragraph about “Richard
abstract concept. Thus, cubing can be used to Gere,” a famous Hollywood film star, is shown as
write an ordinary thing like a “candy bar” and a another example.
complex idea such as “bilingualism”. For
example, Leki (1998: 30) provided an example of Richard Gere
how to develop ideas through cubing by
choosing a candy bar as the “it”. She stated, At the first time I saw this brilliant actor,
“First, go and buy a candy bar. Then consider I fell in love with him immediately! His
your candy bar from all six points of view. When name is Richard Gere. Richard Gere is
you have finished, jot down the ideas you found different from other Hollywood actors
that you like.” Meanwhile, Ferris and Hedgcock that I have known. He has his own
(1998: 108) gave an example of how to write unique side that others do not have,
about “bilingualism” by using a cubing technique. especially his smile. Remembering him, I
Regarding the application of cubing, they stated, will remember a good actor and
“thinking carefully about a single issue or generous man. Richard Gere has acted
problem from multiple angles offers the writer a in some incredible and famous movies
range of rhetorical directions to follow before such as “Sommersby”, “Autumn in New
planning a piece of writing.” York”, “Run away Bride.” With his
personality, he is absolutely terrific and
SAMPLE MATERIALS genius in playing a gentleman in a
romantic movie. However, these
Because cubing can be used as a means characteristics are not suitable for other
to generate ideas and to write them in the form kinds of movies, especially in horror or
of a paragraph or an essay, EFL learners can be action. By the way Mr Gere, don’t really
trained to develop a paragraph first and then, think about that because I’m still your
when their paragraph is done, they can be asked number one fan; you still got the magic.
to develop their paragraph into an essay. When (By Ayu Chandra Astari)
it is written in the form of a paragraph, each side
of the cube can be written in one sentence or
more. In the following example, each sentence in In the paragraph above, all of the sides
the paragraph represents each side of the cube. of the cube has been stated, regardless of the
number of sentences in each perspective. The
My shiny, Red and Heart-shaped paragraph contains “Describe” (2 sentences),
Keychain “Compare” (2 sentences), “Associate” (1
sentence), “Analyze” (1 sentence), “Apply” (1
Since the time I bought the shiny, red sentence), and “Argue” (2 sentences). The
and heart-shaped keychain, it has paragraph, then can be developed into an essay.
become my favorite souvenir (Describe). with the same topic “Richard Gere” (see
This keychain has beaten the one I liked Appendix 1).
before not only in terms of color and
shape, but also because of its appealing TEACHING PROCEDURES
written message: “I left my heart in
Washington, D. C” (Compare). It always In this section, the procedures in
reminds me of the clean and beautiful teaching the cubing technique to EFL learners are
city which is rich of monuments and elaborated. In the teaching process, it is
historical sites (Associate). As the name necessary to make sure that each of the stages of
suggest, the keychain has a chain and it cubing is elaborated and given a clear example.

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 Pre-teaching

1. Introduce to the students the


concept of “cube” by giving them
some examples. The example can
be a dice or a rubic cube. It is also
important to open all sides of the
cube to show that there are six
sides. Figure 2. The red, shiny, heart-shaped keychain.
2. Explain that the six sides of the
cube represent six “perspective”
containing “Describe,” “Compare,” #2 Compare it.
“Associate,” “Analyze,” “Apply,” For this second side of cube, you need
and “Argue (for or agains it)” (see to compare (and/or contrast) the topic
Figure 1). with another thing. Are the two things
similar or are they different from each
other? If so, you need to point this out
and identify the connection between
the two objects or issues. For example,

This keychain has beaten the one I


liked before not only in terms of
color and shape, but also because
of its appealing written message: “I
left my heart in Washington, D.C”.

#3 Associate it.
Figure 1. The six sides of cubes for the six At this stage of writing, think of or
perspectives in writing. reflect on a pleasant memory regarding
the object. You might ask yourself: What
 Whilst-teaching sort of impression do I have when I look
3. Ask the students to pay attention to at the object? Does it symbolize or have
the stages of the cubing technique. a connection with something else? For
While explaining, give the students example,
example from the first sample
material (My red, shiny, heart- It always reminds me of the clean
shaped keychain). The picture or and beautiful city which is rich of
the real object of the keychain can monuments and historical sites
be shown (see Figure 2).
#4 Analyze it.
#1 Describe it. For this fourth side of cube, you need to
At this first stage, you should introduce break down, elaborate, or specify the
the topic and describe it so that it objects. For example,
appeals to (any of) the five senses (sight,
sound, taste, touch, and/or smell). For As the name suggest, the keychain
example, has a chain and it connects the
frame of the heart and a hook to
Since the time I bought the shiny, hold keys.
red and heart-shaped keychain, it
has become my favorite souvenir. #5 Apply it.
After breaking down the objects into
some aspects, you need to show the
value of the objects. You might want to
mention the function, the use, or how
the objects could be effective. Tell what

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you can (cannot) do with it. For cube, ask them to reread the draft and
example, revise any parts which need to be improved.
9. Ask them to submit the text
Yet, I never want to bring the that they have written.
keychain everywhere I go, or have
the intention to use it to hold keys. REFLECTION

#6 Argue (for or against it). I applied the cubing technique in the


For the final side of the cube, you might teaching of writing at the undergraduate level in
highlight the strong or the poor feature the English Department of State University of
of the objects. In short, you make argue Malang. I found that in general the students
for or against it. For example, could develop the ideas about the topic they had
chosen well. One of the examples of their
Instead, I put it as a display item products of writing using cubing technique is the
and I guess, if you see it, you’ll text on “Richard Gere.” The text fits the six
leave your heart in the keychain. perspectives employed in the technique. In
addition, they were also able to expand the ideas
4. Explain that the combination of all from the paragraph to essay form. When looking
sentences developed through the at the students more specifically, I noticed that
six phases result in the production the most difficult part of the cubing technique is
of a cubing-based paragraph. Then the third phase, that is “associating.” Some
show the complete paragraph. students failed in stating the association which is
5. Give more examples by showing the resulted from the “it”. Thus, the associating part
paragraph on “Richard Gere” so is not about the “it” per se, but about something
that the students can understand else that comes to mind because of the “it”. In
that a cubing paragraph can be order to cope with this problem, I advised the
developed into an essay by adding students to state the association more explicitly
some more sentences to the by using words such as remind, remember, make
existing sentences. me think, and come to mind.
6. Explain two rules that have to be I also introduced the technique in “the
followed in cubing. Teaching of Writing” Course at the graduate level
of students of the same university, where most
To apply this technique, there are of the students were English lecturers, English
two rules that have to be followed: teachers, or English instructors. From the
Rule #1 presented materials as I have outlined in the
All six sides of the cubes must be Teaching Procedures section above, they could
used and they should be done in understand about the concept of cubing and
the proper sequence. learn one of the ways in presenting the
Rule #2 materials. As I also assigned these teachers to
Move fast. actually write about the topic of their choice,
For writing and essay, use between they experienced in applying the cubing
3 and 5 minutes for each of the technique. Later, the teachers’ writing products
first five sides and use five full were submitted to me and I evaluated their
minutes for the last side. works on the basis of the completeness of the six
perspectives. Although none of these teachers
7. Ask the students to develop their could get the perfect score which can be gained
own paragraph using the cubing by applying all the six perspectives successfully,
technique by distributing the most of the teachers developed the topic with
Worksheet (see Appendix 2). Set most of the six perspectives appropriately.
the timing and give 2 minutes for
each side of the cube. CONCLUSION

 Post-teaching This paper has dealt with one of the


techniques in developing ideas in writing which is
8. Remind the students that after called “cubing”. The name of the technique
they have finished writing all six sides of the entails the necessity to include all of the six
perspectives in the writing products. Thus,

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