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Greuter, et. Al safety, survey on for Consumer of consumer IoT cyber
2022 security, and important security by comparing the
privacy of the findings from CSCIoT standard to a
consumer research question Internet of more elaborate
there has to be 1 (RESQ1) and Things (CSCIoT) professional standard
a sufficient research question (CSIACS) and other
threshold on 2 (RESQ2) is related work stating IoT
the legislation discussed security requirements
on the
cybersecurity
of consumer
IoT devices
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3. The gaps/problems that are still not covered or discussed by the existing publication:
Based on your analysis, please explain what is the gaps, problems that still not covered by covered or
discussed by the existing publication, or the possibility of improvement (whether from the
feature/method/function/other perspective that possible to be elaborated from that topic.
Problems/gaps:
- Some of the articles didn’t mention why cybersecurity is happening in this modern world
since it’s important to know what is behind it
- The meaning of cybersecurity is somehow complicated and it’s hard for reader to
understand the basic definition of cybersecurity
- The survey data of cybersecurity accidents it’s not comprehensive as a result the reader
can’t imagine the result of the survey
Possibility of improvement:
- The writer should have made the full description about the specific things that they would
like to discuss cause some of them it’s too general
- The graph or illustration of the survey should have been easier to read in order to
delivered the message for the writer
- The language or terms should have been familiar for the reader to understand what this
paper talking about
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