Apartment

Panel 1-a box with the name matt on it is shown on the floor cover by a carpet

Panel 2 -Same shot of the box with a hand about to pick it up

//Sameshot from panel 3 to 9

Panel 3- shot off boy holding the box with head not shown and his mother behind him leaning on the
door frame come on lets go matt

Panel 4- he turns his head to his mother same shot

Panel 5- he walks with the box in his hands hes at a middle distance between his mother at the door

Panel 6- hes at door passing his mother now she is holding the door knob

Panel 7- a part of his back can be seen to the left of the door and his mother can be seen pulling the
door to shut it while saying “its gonna be along drive “

Panel 8- door is mid way shut with smere marks showing the force at which she is pulling it

Panel 9 – door shuts

//corridor

Panel 10 – shows jenny shutting door and matt holding box while pressing elevator button

~ELAVATOR INTERIOR

Panel 11- elevator opening with the backs off matt and his mother[jenny] infront of the camera

Panel 12 - elevator fully opens and they walk in

Panel 13 – elevator closes

~ELAVATOR INTERIOR

Panel 14- shows matt looking at the door and his mother is kinda smiling but she is blurred

Panel 15- reveals his mother behind him

Panel 16- his mother rubsnhis arm saying “matt don’t worry you will like the knew house

Panel 17 –matt looks at his mom

Panel 18 – he looks into space downward and his mom goes out of focus again with a tips of smile on his
face opposed to before

~Reception

Panel 19- “ ok matt give your stuff to daddy to put it in the truck im gonna sign out at the reception desk
“ jenny said to matt while pointing outside with her right hand and her left hand supported on the desk

Panel 20- shows medium close up of jenny turning toward the receptionist from a side view
Panel 21 - shows front of jenny at profile view looking at the receptionist with both arms crossed on the
reception desk

Panel 22 - shows receptionist reading a book not focusing on jenny

Panel 23 - Same shot from Panel 21 of jenny now he says “we would like to “ to sign out of the
apartment .

Panel 24 - shows same shot of receptionist but now looks at her with no emotion as if she does this a lot

Panel 25 - so whats reason ur for signing out receptionist asked jenny with a tiring rehearse tone while
leaning to her paper prapring to right

Panel 26 - shows same shot of jenny new house show matt behind her blurred opening door of
apartment with box

Panel 27 - shows matt close up of his torso in a behind view looking at his dad packing trunk of truck

Panel 28 -shows matt giving th box to his father who is focused on the trunk of the truck

Panel 29 - shows a shot showing of jenny a receptionist and the background shows matt going into the
car receptionist says “ok hand over the key for your room”

Panel 30- Jenny pushes out the key she has been holding int her hand there ya

Panel 31- the truck beeps jenny turns around to look outside

Panel 32 - “sorry im in a hurry” while pushing herself from the desk

Panel 33 - while jenny runs away the receptionist shouts maam u forgot ur signature

Panel 34 - jenny ignores and just runs through the door

Panel 35 - jenny goes through the already opened door of the truck

Panel 36 - matts dad henry turned to her while pulling back his what took you so long

Panel 37-truck drives away

Panel 38 - shows receptionist kinda standing but squatted looking over the desk

With a shocked face

Panel39 - what am I suppose to do with the rest of this form she said

End of chapter 1

Panel 1 - starts off showing the radio showing ABBA- GIMME GIMME

Panel 2 - shows jenny staring outside of window

Panel 3- shows jenny looking at the radioPanel 4 - zoomz in on jennys hand turning it up to 100
Panel 5 - shows matt and his father looking down at her turning up the music

Panel 6 - zoomz in on her as she screams out half past 12 !

//Improvise Panel 7 - 9
Panel 7 - Half past twelve
Watchin' the late show
In my flat all alone
How I hate to spend the evening on my own
Panel 8 - Autumn winds blowin' outside the window
As I look around the room
And it makes me so depressed to see the gloom
Panel 9 - There's not a soul out there
No one to hear my prayer
Gimme, gimme, gimme a man after mid
Panel 10 – ‘’night’’ shows jennies head looking in the car from her head sticking out the window

Looking in the car shocked with a facial expression saying why would you do that

Panel 11 – shows john quickly looking at jenny while focusing on the road with his hand on the radio
volume button looking out at jenny angrily

Panel 12 – shows from inside the car jenny looking from outside the car with her backed turned saying
“that’s no fair ” with a kidish frown

Panel 13 – shows john shouting get your head in the car jenny what are u doing

Panel 14 – “no fun” she says while putting her head back in the car

Panel 15 – shows them sitting in the car normally after that situation while matts in the middle reading
his comic

Panel 16 – shows jenny cross her arms her chest while saying “im bored”

Panel 17 – shows jenny reaching at the back of her seat for something

Panel 19 - shoes jenny dragging out a board games box

Panel 20 - in between of her sitting

Panel 21 - Jenny is seated with the board on her lap

Panel 22 - shows jenny ooking over to matt who is paying her no attention

Panel 23 she says uow wanna play a snake ladder

Panel 24 – matt looks over at the board game box

Panel 25- shows matt look back up at her

Panel 26 – “or are u too busy reading that comic of yours she says due to the awkward silence

Panel 27- mat nods

Panel 28 – shows jenny sighing

Panel 29- shows the truck zoomed out

Panel 30- shows the truck further away with a mirage

Chapter 3

Panel 1 – shows a tid bit of the house’s bottom

Panel 2- shows some animal sniffing the street

Panel 3 – shows car light shinging on the animal

Panel 4 - shows animal looking in the direction of the light

Panel 5 - animal turns away to run

Panel 6 animal jumping on fence while a little bit of the truck head come in frame

Panel 7 -shows half of truck wheel

Panel 8 –shows full truck wheel

Panel 9 - shows half truck

Panel 10- shows inside truck with jenny and matt sleeping

Panel 11- shows johns hand pushing on the the stick

Panel 12 shows him pulling back the stick

Panel 13 shows john lok at matt and jenny

Panel 14 he pats matts face to wake him up

Panel 15 matt open his eye

Panel 16 he sits up while looking at the house

Panel 17 jenny wakes up as matt wakes up

Panel 18 – shows all of them looking out the window

Panel 19 john looks back and says “ we’re home

Panel 20- shows all of them in the interior going through the door

Panel 21- john yawns

Panel 22 – john then says we’re not gonna unpack all the stuff today
Panel 23 matt u can unpack ur clothes ttonight we will unpack the rest tommarow

Panel 24 – Matt stands looking at them

Panel 25 – jenny says ur room is the first room in the w=hallway

Panel 26- matt turns and walkup stairs

Panel 27 shows matt half way upstairs while his parents watch him go up

Panel 28 - They look back down and smile at each other

Panel 29 – john raps his arms aroung jenny and says he will be just fine

Panel 30- shows matt stepping from the steps

Panel 31 - shows matt standing sideways looking down the hallway at a clock

Panel32- matt walking down the hallway to his room

Panel 33- shows him opening the door

Panel 34 shows a creak

Panel 35 shows a bigger creak and someone saying “don’t –

Panel 36 a biggercreak a shadow of a figure whereing a hat imurges

Chapter 4

Panel 1 - shows matt noticing the shadow

Panel 2 –shows matt stepping back from view below him and behind him

Panel3 – Matt stands there with the box in his hand

Panel 4 matt looks looks below him to the left

Panel 5 shows matt putting don the box

Panel 6 – matt is seen getting up from putting down the box

Panel 7 –shows matt taking a deep breath with a slash that

Shows matt clenching his fist

Panel 8 – matt is seen zoomed out clenching his fist fist

Panel 9 shows matts legs moving towards the door with his legs at the knee folded

Panel 10 shows matts legs kicking in the door

Panel 11-shows the door wide open with the shadow still there

Panel 12 – matt turns his head to the left

Panel 13 reveals tha it’s a huge anequin of his favorite comic book hero a detective where a top hat

Panel 14 – matt takes a deep exhale

Panel 15 – matt puts the last clothes from the boxin his closet

Panel 16 – matt closing his closet

Panel 17 – he walks out

Panel 18 shos the same shot of his door

Panel 19 – says 2minutes later

Panel 20 - Matt comes back into his room

Panel 21– matt walking towards the detective mannequin

Panel 22he takes the gun from the mannequin

Panel 23- he then shows him shooting it

Panel 24 – he looks at the hat

Panel 25 he reaches for the hat

Panel 26 – he puts on the hat

Panel 27 – he turns around

Panel 28 -He then starts creeping like a cop towards the door

Panel 29 – same shot of door

Panel30- 1 minute later

Panel 31 – shows matt coming through the door with th hat in his hand

Panel 32 shows him through the hat to the side and the gun

Panel 33 – he switches of the lights

Panel 34 shows the back of his neck upclose as he walks to his bed

Panel 35 shows him going in bed

Panel 36 shows im wrapped up

Panel 37 shows the shadow with the hat in it behind him while he sleeps

Chapter 5
Panel 1- matt sleeping with the shadow behind him on the wall

Panel 2 – mat turns his headtowards the manequin

Panel 3 –super detective

Panel 4 – can I be ur sidekick he says

Panel 5 – shows matt smiling

Panel 6 – you know u look weird without ur hat

Panel 7 – where did I put ur hat

Panel 8 – shows matt thinking

Panel 9 –matt turns his head towards the shadow

Panel 10 he see the shadow

Panel 11 he sprouts up and looks at the mannequin

Panel 12 – Matt then looks at the shadow again

Panel 13 – shadow

Panel 14 – shadow turns sideways

Panel 15 – shadow starts walking but still in shadow form towards the closet

Panel16 – shadow shown disappearing within the shadows

Panel17 shows matt half cover in the sheets leaning on the bed frame

Panel 18 shows matt pulling up the sheet

Panel 19 matt is fully cover by the sheets

Panel 20 –/