Chapter One

• Research main focus. Device for producing low temperature coke for domestic cooking
• Statement of problem. Corrected as instructed
• Research Justification. Adjusted
• Scope. Added as instructed

Chapter Two Corrections

• I have effected some general comments correction

• Talk more on carbonization process
• Which process will be automated?
• How many of them will be automated?
• Add images, as regards fuels and carbonization.
• Talk about environmental effects of mining coal
• Talk about environmental effects of using coal
• Tell the supervisor (we do not mine coke, it is an end product from carbonizing coal)
• Talk about Environmental Effects of using Coke
• Talk about Manual methods of Producing Coke

Is it possible for your automation to alter the acidity or possibly look at the addition of filter or
other methods of reducing acidity? No, the scope will be beyond definition

Reading through this, would you be coming up with reactor or furnace? Looking at things from
this angle, you may end up developing a new way burning waste, once you are able to control
temperature and pressure. I want my work to be focused on producing an efficient device for
making cooking coke

• Conduct an extensive review to be sure that there is no existing work on the carbonization
of coal
• Add more reviews on domestic coke production

Chapter Three
Insert flowchart.
• You need to restructure your proposal to make it as clear as possible.
• From what I see here, you need to add to this work to make it up to M.Sc. standard
Are you automating an existing device? This description is very vague. I am developing a new
device; the description has also been made clear.
• In your literature review, the main classes of coal available in Nigeria should be discussed.
 • The location where you will obtain your coal in Kogi State should also be stated in chapter
three.
• Furthermore, the reason for selecting this type of coal should be enumerated too in chapter
three.
• Also, the type of coke obtain from this type of coal in previous researches should also be
enumerated (i.e., if there is).

This is not a design consideration. Has been duly adjusted

Design calculations. I am made to know that it is presented only after the proposal

Referencing
Some Students in the department have worked on the carbonization of coal, kindly ensure that you
review some of them. I have not seen those works, but I will look for them